[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 37
i hope megan will be ok i know she will miss mike while he is away loved this chapter cant wait to read so much more of this story
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Thank you for taking the time to review
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 37
Good chapter. They are gonna miss eachother so much. Ohhhh Myyy God? Is Megan pregnant?
Author's Response:
I guess we will find out soon enough
Date: Mar 22, 2015 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 37
Hope you feel better soon
Two weeks? Woah that's so long to be away from her
As always I loved mamma pearl
Can't wait to see/read what's wrong with Megan, hopefully nothing too serious
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 36
MJ is the sweetest BF. Can we clone him lol. I'm glad after the shower & breakfast Meg was feeling better. Is also great she decided to work on her song for the concert, I bet is going to be wonderful.
I normally would say a jealous person is a turn off but, in this case it makes Michael more endearing. We see even with a blind person by his side, we see Michael's insecurities which makes him more real. That also shows the level of feelings towards Megan are very deep.... L.O.V.E. 💖💖💖💖💖🐻
Whether is Mikey Bear or Sexy both pet names fit Michael like his "Billie Jean" glove. 😉
LOL, when Michael said: oh Lummi kiss, kiss, kiss and I love your boobies and have my baby, that was funny. Alright go Ben you got a 2nd date. I can't wait to read what happens. I hope Mike in some way still be Ben's wingman. We counting days for you to be back so we can get our BBL fix. 😊😊😊😊😊
Ben & Lummi sitting in a giving tree: KISSING
1st a little peck, then a smooch
Then Ben feels brave and gives Lummi the tongue LOL 😜
Is all for L.O.V.E......Lummi
Date: Mar 18, 2015 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 36
Poor Megan with the headaches!!! Hopefully she will start feeling better soon. Ben should know he can't keep that kind of secret! He needs all the help he can get from them if he is gonna keep Lummi on his arm!
Date: Mar 18, 2015 08:52 am Title: Chapter 36
The first part was so sweet
Aww lol poor Ben can't keep a secret
Im sure they'll have a sweet date next time
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Poor Ben indeed. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2015 05:19 am Title: Chapter 36
truly loved this chapter mike was very sweet to meg it was cute that ben kept his makeout session secret lol loved this chapter i cant wait to read the next chapter keep up the great writing
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Mike sweet is sexy I imagine him always being that way. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Mar 17, 2015 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 36
I'm happy that you found the time. What I would give to go swimming on a sunny day after reading that chapter.
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I know seriously and with michael Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 06:14 am Title: Chapter 35
we all understand this story is definitely worth the wait
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2015 11:42 am Title: Chapter 34
D.A.T.E. night..... Finally 💖. I loved it how they flipped it around and it became a set up. Poor Ben he had no idea. He was so nervous is actually super cute. I get the feeling Ms. Lummi has a very sweet personality but, also a hint of naughtiness to her; Ms. I don't bite.... Yet 😉.
So we finally make it to the club. Have a few more drinks, music is great and now is time to bust a move. I can picture Michael dancing, grinding a little his body against Megan. I'm sure here and there a little of his well known moves came about but, being dark I'm sure no one notice. Both couples finally having a good time and the these two Jackasses had to ruin the good time. Good ahead Mike punch that jerk... Don't touch his baby girl. I'm glad Ben was there to take care of it. Cause no one messes with his boss, his bosses girl and his.... I mean ms. Lummi 😀😀 his what? hmmmmmmmm
K.I.S.S.....Yay Ben got kissed 💏. I'm sure he is in cloud nine. He got lucky Mike fell asleep cause he would be picking at Ben all through the ride home. Go Ben got a a 2nd date and a smooch 💏 LOL 🙌😘.
Umm so Lummi knows that Mike is not blind but, will she know that he is Michael Jackson 👑. I guess will find out possibly in a future chapter.
Please update soon, I need to know what's happening next.. Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi 💖💖💖💖😘
Author's Response:
Macho Mike and Benny to the rescue. Who could ask for anything more :) Thanks for catching up and I'm glad you liked the chapters...I knew you were chomping at the bit for your date. Well your date in spirit right? Thanks my friend for all of your support
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2015 10:35 am Title: Chapter 33
Great update, I'm glad that Jon & Ben are clicking. I'm also happy that Jon is doing everything in his power to grant MJ's request to be treated as a person and not the superstar.
I have to say the part of Michael helping Ben washing his jeep is my favorite part. The sounded like two brothers "no pun intended" talking about dating and women. I'm happy that Mike has a close friend in Ben to talk to and joke with. Oh to be a tree or a flower there close to that drive way to enjoy the view a very sexy wet Michael and a hottie Ben... Lol 😉
That session in the bathroom was pretty steamy. Ms. Meg is time for you to get some birth control; with yourself and Michael's spontaneous love making & sex it is very necessary. Remember Michael not always has access to his $70 stash of raincoats or his wallet. LOL 😜. But whatever happens I'm sure is a blessing...... Yesssss double date next can't wait. 😘🙌
See you next update....Is all for L.O.V.E... Lummi 💖💖
Date: Mar 12, 2015 11:12 am Title: Chapter 34
Poor Ben didn't know what to do with himself at first, but he got it together. And that fight?! Lord have mercy.
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Hopefully bens got his groove. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2015 09:34 am Title: Chapter 34
ben and mike were both sexy glad to see that ben let go of being shy him and lummi this was a truly great chapter keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Maybe now Ben can pick up his game now that he's got a groove. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Mar 12, 2015 04:08 am Title: Chapter 34
Another great one. Ben sure was a mess before the fight in the club but then....BAM...HE made up for it...they are gonna be great together....especially her saying" I don't bite...at least not yet" lol...can't wait til Lummi hears about Michael....
Author's Response:
should be interesting seeig how it developes. thanks for reviewing
Date: Mar 12, 2015 02:43 am Title: Chapter 34
Aww its sweet how Ben was shy in the beginning but got over it in the end
They're both sexy while protecting their woman
I can't wait to see Lummi's reaction when Michael tells her the truth about who he is
Author's Response:
the truth should be interesting. IDK Macho Mike is so out of charecter its sexy. hanks for reviewing