Date: Apr 21, 2015 05:19 am Title: Chapter 48
The love scene was exactly that: all love. Excellent job overall 👏
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it
Date: Apr 21, 2015 01:52 am Title: Chapter 48
It feels so real, so hope she's gonna be ok so they can continue with their life together and work on the future
Little Jack is so sweet
Author's Response:
I promise I wont kill her and something good will eventually come out of all of this. be patient
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2015 12:47 am Title: Chapter 48
damn this chapter had me near crying with the sadness and beauty in it i loved this chapter i cant wait to read more of this great story keep it coming
Author's Response:
glad it evoked some sort of emotions. Mikes tenderness is never ending. They are both vulnerable and each chapter peels away at their deepest emotions. or at least thats my intent. more to come
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2015 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 48
Poor Megan. I think that she definitely needed to be treated normally. I can't even imagine going through something like that. One more week of treatment to go.
Author's Response:
She'll get through it all and on the other side will be stronger for everything she's gone through.
Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 47
This chapter had me in tears. It reminded me so much of what my grandparents went through when they battled cancer. You're writing is so true to life; thanks for doing your research. Excellent work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I try to make it believeable to some extent. glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 06:53 am Title: Chapter 46
I know that ben cards abou megan but i think he's out of line. He's too inappropriate.
Author's Response:
theres a reason why he's so sensitive. you'll get a glimpse in the next chapter. he just has strong feelings for how women should be treated. very old fashioned and a genteman. hes a good guy.
thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 06:40 am Title: Chapter 45
Oh boy. Cancer's back.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:55 am Title: Chapter 47
megan has a great beautiful support system i have high hopes she will get through this i loved how the nurse at the end of this chapter covered up michael in a blanket and will make it known not to make him get out of that bed with megan i almost cried when ben cried he has a soft heart i hope him and lummi get married one day in this story this is truly such s beautiful story and i cant wait to read more of this amazingly beautiful story you are such a great writer i wished i could write stories like this keep up the great writing i will always support your writing if you come out with great stories like this looking forward to the next chapter if i could i would give this story a higher rating than a ten i would give it a 1000
Author's Response:
thank you for your kind words. I'm not the best writer but I try. Thanks for your support it is what motivates me to write more and become a better writer
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:34 am Title: Chapter 43
Ben needs to stop assuming things. He's only going to make things worse.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:23 am Title: Chapter 47
yuck, hospital meal - I guess it is everywhere the same... fortunately they have Mama Pearl :-)
I like this chapter, I hope Megan will fully cured soon and she will be able to play at the concert too.
Can´t wait for another update, it always makes my day better when I see a new chapter from you.
Author's Response:
I worked for a hospital and believe it or not they had amazing food. It was so good the public went to the caf. to eat meals and it was written up in a magazine. its rare. We all need a Mama Pearl in our lives thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:16 am Title: Chapter 42
Michael is too sexaaay
Date: Apr 16, 2015 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 47
I'm sure she'll get all the support she needs, poor thing really didn't deserve it
I like the fact the drs stay proffesional around Michael
The night nurse, it's sweet what she did
Author's Response:
it's important for everyone to focus on her and not him. She is lucky to have so many that care which is different for her considering her past. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2015 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 47
Yesss, like a Knight and shinning armor. To protect & love his princess. Hmmmm sounds familiar. 👑😉💝.
Tomorrow is the 1st day of the rest of their lives. I have faith this time the tumor/cancer will be completely eradicated. You will BEAT IT for good. 🎉
Michael is always the perfectionist and he doesn't quit. Just think of that concert on 1999 MJ's & Friends when the bridge collapse and he keep the show going. Megan believe and Keep the Faith. Specially believe in Michael he ain't going nowhere. You are stuck.... Lucky girl 😀😀😀
Mama Pearl to the rescue, that made me hungry Lol. She is such a sweet, funny and caring lady. Also sassy to boot. I'll predict she will be fussing and babying Megan as soon as she is discharged from the hospital and returns to the ranch.
Please update soon, can't wait for the next chapter. Is all for L.O.V.E. .Lummi 😊😊💝💝
Author's Response:
Megs will have lots of love and people fussing over her which she deserves especially since last time she was all alone.
thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2015 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 47
Oh, the concert! I hope she'll be able to do it. She worked so hard to finish her piece. Her health comes first, of course, but it would stink if she wasn't able to do it.
Author's Response:
time will tell especially where she is in a months time with treatment and all. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2015 07:29 am Title: Chapter 46
Woooooo that almost became a triple threat lol {old school pro wrestling stuff}. Ben sure was fired up. He needed to listen. Ben question John & Michael's integrity. That was a little much Michael had to swear on his mom.
I'm glad is all settled and we can move on. Ben you need to woo that cutie Lummi 😉😘. Your "sister" from another father & mother is well taking care off.
No secrets between Megan & Michael how every relationship should be, open, loving and HONEST!!!! Michael is sooo sweet. Really can we clone him too. Lol 😜
Happiness she choose treatment, FIGHT chica. 💉💊
I love how strong Michael is for her. I love his strength and his vulnerability. Mikey 🐻, don't cry there is always hope and don't forget Keep the Faith.
Thank you for all the updates. See you really soon. Is all for L.O.V.E.. Lummi 💝💝 💝 😊
Author's Response:
to Ben integrity was more important then a potential job. he has high standards when it comes to women and will go to any length to protect them. He's a rare treat indeed. Luckily he didnt have to rearrange Mikes face and they all kissed and made up.
Mike cant help but cry and be worried his love is sick and now that he has it he's afraid of losing it.
thanks for reviewing