Reviewer: kaity6494 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2011 02:00 am Title: CHAPTER SEVEN: A Towel And A Key

Ah, I loved this chapter! I have to say that I think you're an absolutely brilliant writer.... I honestly thought that seeing MJ in a homosexual situation would disturb me, but it doesn't. It seems almost more natural than in the stories when he's with women. Anyway, I'm off to read the next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment. :)

Reviewer: YouKnowYouDid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2011 08:58 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO: The Question

oh my god im lovingggggg this!! this idea, this story, everything! this chapter was my favorite one yet, too! <3 keep it up! 

Author's Response:

Thanks! Love you too <3

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2011 07:38 am Title: CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE: It Ain't Easy Being A Jackson

I finally have an account here so I can post review now lol...

Please keep writing this story...I love it so much...It's a particular subject but you do it soo well...

I'm waiting for your update!!

Reviewer: offthewall Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2011 11:58 pm Title: CHAPTER TWENTY: The Little Boy Called Trevor And Other Promises

Michael needs to tell Brooke before they get caught! Great update, I look forward to the next one

Reviewer: offthewall Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2011 10:00 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?

This is probably one of the best slash fics I've read in a long time. (Not just on this site by the way.) I'm excited to find a Freddie/Michael fic & a well-written one at that. The way you write Michael and Freddie is so believable! Michael's struggle with his religion was really well written and I love how you wrote about Freddie's love for his cats!!

'It's the name of his cat. He calls him every evening, just to say 'good night' and tell him he'll be back in a few days.'

^_^ made me think of my cat. Anyways this story is great and your English is great! You definitely have a knack for writing. Keep going, I love this story.

& I have no idea why people are complaining its a slash, theres clearly a WARNING and the pairing is in the title. Sheesh.

Anyways great story! :) Update soon

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I really hope this story wasn't as long as it is, but because I've been writing it in parts (for over a year already), it's bound to be somewhat fragmented. If I ever find the time I'll probably rewrite it so that it would be more coherent and easier to read. However, I'm grateful that you liked it as it is and I promise to continue as soon as I can.

Reviewer: patma Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2011 05:53 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?

E' bello, un racconto molto dolce e anche se probabilmente non corrisponde a verità è appunto una fanfiction.

Sei stato molto bravo a descrivere i turbamenti di un giovane Michael alle prese con sentimenti che non comprende e di cui ha paura.

Attendo il seguito. Auguri per la tua vita.

(Traduco con Google)

 

It's nice, very sweet and a story though probably not true is just a fanfiction.

Yo've been very good at describing the troubles of a young Michael  struggling with feelings that does not include and of which he is afraid.

I await the result. Best wishes for your life.

(google translate)

Author's Response:

Oh thank you sweetheart <3 I'll continue asap, I promise.

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2011 08:06 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: Who Let Billy Joel In?

I don't understand why people are acting all weird about this story... This is a mj fiction website and it is open to any kind of fantasy fiction including straight, homosexual, bisexual fantasy fiction.(right?) We all know Michael was not homosexual so there is no point in stating the obvious ..... Also it is a 'Slash' story and if you don't like slash, don't read it xP Anyway I love your story, I'm only on chapter 3 but it is wonderful so far :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. <3 Yeah, you're totally right: since someone has put a whole category just for slash stories on this website and since I warned well in beforehand that this story falls into that particular category, I don't understand why anyone would even bother reading it if they dislike slash fiction as a genre. Be that as it may, thank you so much for being the first reviewer that saw through that - and thank you for the rating!