Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 03:54 am Title: Chapter 13: The Moment of Truth

great chapter i never knew her secret would be this big so she never miscarried michaels first child dang i hope that jasmine and marie find diana before she possibaly loses this baby i loved this chapter keep up the great writing of this story im looking forward to another great chapter to this great story

Author's Response:

SURPRISE!! I'm so glad almost all of my readers on here were shocked! Just goes to show that I did something right! YAAAY!

Stay tuned to find out more! :D

THANKS FOR READING!

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2015 02:12 am Title: Chapter 13: The Moment of Truth

Hello, there finally I'm back (sorry had been working a lot 😔) got a chance to catch up and read all 13 chapters.  This time around this third installment is been a roller coaster of emotions.  I also must admit the last few chapters I wasn't very happy with Diana.  She was quite mean to Michael and pretty much call him a liar.  I honestly felt anger every time she would tell him: *Oh you lived in a fantasy world and your childish*.  I was like "hey missy Michael is more in touch with reality than the whole world will ever know and he may be child like but, he is ALL man in every way".  I really hope & pray for Michael & Diana to have their Happily Ever After they both deserve it. (SO I'll JUST CHUCK IT TO HER PREGNANCY HORMONES)

From the very beginning I had a really bad vibe about Mr. CEO but, I never expected this.  So before he inherit Capitol Records dude is a Masochist; I got to say H*ll of a Shock 🙈🙊🙉.  He better not hurt Diana most importantly the baby because they will be no place on EARTH he will be saved from Michael's wrath.  I guess some people (ahem Ana), are very stubborn and had to be in a difficult situation before they listen.  Oh please let the police, the girls or Michael arrived on time. Pretty Please 😔😔😔😔😔😔

The secret is out.  Diana has a son.  Well it only took 13 chapters in (lol, just teasing).  Now the questions are:   Is it Michael's son? (Cause I though she lost the baby when she fell of the stairs) or was she pregnant with twins, lost one and later began to have more symptoms and went back to the DR and realized she was still pregnant?  Is it little man aka Jas son is really Diana's & possibly Michael's son?  I think it is because every time Jas was to introduce him to Michael something happened.  How is that going to work out?  So many questions????Please update soon.. Is all for L.O.V.E...Lummi 💗💗

Author's Response:

OMG LUMMI!!! I HAVE MISSED YOU TERRIBLY!!!

WOW, as always your review is amazing and very flattering - THANK YOU!

I'm glad you are still enjoying this story. I'm sorry for delaying the secret but I had to because of all the other things that were going on. I almos didn't spill the beans in this chapter either but my muse had other plans. I knew A LOT of people weren't expecting all of this to unfold this way but i'm glad it did because A LOT of readers are VERY shocked!

All I can say is please keep reading and all your questions will be answered very soon. HINT: You are on the right track! ;)

THANKS FOR READING AND WELCOME BACK! :D

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 13: The Moment of Truth

Cameron is one evil evil screwed up person. Let's hope Jac and.Marie can get to Diana fast.

This chapter was really excellent I loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it and I hope you stay till the end. :D

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2015 09:04 am Title: Chapter 12: A King Protecting His Queen

i liked this chapter but it did not have the love like your other chapters and i can plainly see that i hope eventually that the muse comes back to you ill be looking forward to the next great chapter you are an amazing writer i wish that michael and diana would make up i hate seeing them fight keep the story coming 

Author's Response:

Aww, I'm sorry you felt that way. I was hoping it wouldn't show as much but I guess it did. I think my muse is being difficult now because I'm forcing it to come out. I think the next few chapters will WOW you again and don't worry, there's always a rainbow after every storm! ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BillieJeans4LuversMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 11: From Ember to Bursting Flame

DDDAAAANNNNGGGGG!!!

This was something I totally WASN'T expecting!!!

This chapter got me so into it, it was like me watching the argument in real time!

I don't even know where to start becuase this was just way too good!!

But first... Did Katherine really say that about Diana, or am I just having some problems!!! I can't even believe it! That had me blown.

And Diana and Michael's argument was INTENSE! Now I wonder what Michael is going to do...

AHHH CAN'T WAIT!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you weren't expecting it. My goal is to wow my readers as much as possible. I wanted to make it seem as real as possible so I am very happy to read that I made you feel the way you did. What did Katherine say exacty that made you confused? The next chapter will be posted really soon so please be on the lookout. THANKS FOR READING AND SUPPORTING MY STORY! :D

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2015 04:34 am Title: Chapter 11: From Ember to Bursting Flame

whew..talk about intense..this was just as what I expected though actually I was pleasantly surprised they tried to be calm at first..

Author's Response:

Yes, they always try to be civil before shit hits the fan, haha. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 11: From Ember to Bursting Flame

Ooohhhhhhhh 😮😮😮😮😮 gurlllll I was waiting for this update I knew something was going to happen, its her mess everybody told her not to go on the date now mj all thug out now imma be ready for the next update with my popcorn !!!! Mj gon be gangsta today lmllll😂😂😂😂

Author's Response:

OMG HAHA! I love your review. Thank you so much for reading. I can't wait to read more from you in the future.