Date: Jan 25, 2015 03:55 am Title: Chapter 15: Revealing the Last Skeleton
Why did she kept lieing? Now she has to tell Michael
Can't wait till he finds out about little man
Please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! Stay tuned for more. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 15: Revealing the Last Skeleton
Ahhhhhhhh, you are such a meanie burger. You seduce us with the HOTTT, love making which they did it ALL NIGHT LONG 😉😉😉😉. Just as Diana says everything seems to be getting back on track. You dropped the BOMB. Now there is No Shadow of a Doubt, little man is Michael's son. 😱😱😱😱
PS: Joseph is behaving like a major @$%@%#$#$*#@$*#!!!!!!!
Please update very, very, very, very SOON. And Missy in the next chapter you better have Ana tell Michael about his son or I'm gonna jump in through this story and get you. Lol😜😜😜😜
Pretty Please update soon..... Is all for L.O.V.E... Lummi 💗💗💗💗💗
Author's Response:
Thank you, Lummi. I'm so glad to have you back! Don't worry, it'll come out soon! :D
Date: Jan 24, 2015 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 15: Revealing the Last Skeleton
.....and lawd plz help this 6yr old amen 🙏👏👏 lmllll😇😂 I had to pray girl ok Joseph rly getting on my nerves need to sit his old nosey ugly self down ain't nobody got time for him !!!! DIANA NEEDS TO TELL MJ !!!!! Girl put me in here like frfr she needs to I told u I'll set her straight anyway I hope lil man be okay it's sad that he has it just like his father 😥😥😥😥😢😢😢 and girl YOU ARE MY LIFE IS MY SONGGGG DA BOOOOOMMBBBBBB "or more like the stars that twinkle at night you r the moon that glows in my heart yur my daytime my nighttime my world u r my life" YASSSSS👏👏👏👏👏 NEED A MAN LIKE THATTTT!!!! Wwwooohh got me all in my emotions again I'm crying like a baby lawd Jesus lmllll 😂😂😂😂
Author's Response:
You're hilarious, HAHA. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: Jan 24, 2015 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 15: Revealing the Last Skeleton
Geez Joseph is such a jerk, hating on an innocent child..the making love scene was sooo sexy <3..and lupus is very heavy for a 6 year old..
Author's Response:
Yes he is - just like he was in real life. I'm glad you enjoyed that. It took A LOT of work, HAHA. It is indeed, but most people with lupus are diagnosed with it before the age of 20. Thanks for reading :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 15: Revealing the Last Skeleton
Oh! Cliffhanger- so many possibilities
Im not going anywhere. can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I love hearing from you! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 15: Revealing the Last Skeleton
Okay....that is just wooow... I mean the part about her and Michael's child. She has to reveal the secret to him. It's not fair to Michael but I'm afraid he'll feel betrayed by her. You are good writer! ;) and I love that you post so often!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the compliment. Diana's son is the final skeleton in her closet and it's out to the reader. She just has to tell Michael about it. What do you think will happen? Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 05:09 am Title: Chapter 14: The Unforeseen Slip Up
I'm here again hahah, i didnt realise i hadnt written in the right chapter! But i wanted to write you again anyways. I really hope you're going to be realistic about this things because it's terrible! I know i had to wait for her side of the story but knowing his it's enough for me to think that this is not a forgive and forget situation, i don't think a real relationship would survive to a lie like that. How could a mother leave her child for months to be taken care of by other people? How could she hide it all this time not only from the father but also from one of her friends? Please let it be a dream
The feels </3
I've been a silent reader for a long time, but this took me by surprise (actually i made a review with another account a few months ago but whateves, i reallyyy love your stories and you have great writting skills)
Xoxox from buenos aires <3
Author's Response:
"I really hope you're going to be realistic about this things because it's terrible!"
I'm not sure what you are referring to - my writing or the story? There are reasons why Diana did what she did and you will know about them very soon. It is a difficult situation to be in and put others in as well but rough patches are what make relationships stronger and more sincere. Thank you for complimenting my writing and I hope you continue to follow along and read my other work on here as well. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 04:51 am Title: Chapter 1: Business Consolidation
Omg if i was michael i wouldn't forgive her at all for keeping that secret, seriously michael was destroyed when he found out about the lost of the baby. I just think what would the real mj do and he probably would be pissed and would break up with that woman right away..
Well let's see her explanations, i saw other reviews and it shocked me how everyone took the secret so lightly!!!!!. I love diana, mj and cupcake, i can't wait for more, keep writing girl! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. Your feedback is what gives me the courage to continue and I hope that you will enjoy the rest of the story as it unfolds. I was also a bit surprised at a few people's reaction but there were others who were amazed and quite shocked about the secret. I look forward to hearing from you again soon. :)
Date: Jan 23, 2015 09:47 am Title: Chapter 14: The Unforeseen Slip Up
Yay Cameron got his just the dessert! Hallelujah!
So glad the baby made it out ok..the last thing we needed was another miscarriage.
Author's Response:
Yes, he got what he deserved for sure and the baby is just fine thankfully. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: Jan 23, 2015 09:09 am Title: Chapter 14: The Unforeseen Slip Up
Love her brother and sister they're great
Already a great daddy
Please continue I want to know Michaels reaction
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. There is much more to come! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2015 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Unforeseen Slip Up
dang diana's sister had to blow the secret to heck lol i bet michael will be pissed great chapter looking forward to another amazing chapter of this truly amazing story keep up the amazing writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It's always great to hear from you! Your encouragement is what keeps me going. :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2015 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Unforeseen Slip Up
Wooooooooooooo, Michael & Diana got their cupcake finally. Welcome home Paris. I still think it would be precious if michael keeps calling her cupcake 🎂.
Thank goodness they got there in time. Mr. CEO is in for it. Don't mess with Michael Jackson's family.
Holy S@$%&#%@%*@%#&%##@$%$, Ashley got a little excited. So it is clear that only: Jasmine, David and her two siblings knew the true. Diana has a son and indeed is Michael's son 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
What is Michael, Marie, Mrs. J., Mac and Liz will say???? Michael will be happy but, also very sad she kept that from him for SIX years. What about the little boy? Is he just been watched over by Jas & David and he knows Diana is his mom. I Hope he does, how do explain to a 6yr old that mom & dad ain't mom & dad.
Lucy you got so explaining to..... Gosh more questions in my head. What happened 6years ago??, Why she told Jasmine and not Marie?, Why Ana didn't tell him as soon as they made up?? Please update really - really soon.
Is all for L.O.V.E. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗 Lummi 😮😮
Author's Response:
You need to be patient and wait my dear reader! :) All of your questions will be answered in time! :) Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2015 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Unforeseen Slip Up
Glad they got to Diana in time.
I didn't think it was possible but Ashley has a bigger mouth than Marie. Lol
Nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) And yes, she got a little too excited at the end.
Date: Jan 22, 2015 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Unforeseen Slip Up
Ohhhhhhhhhh snappppp 😰😰😰😰😶😶😩😮😮😮😮😮 I'm rly happy and cheesing right now girl got my emotions in all of this anyway ooooooohhhhhh its about to go down !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA!! You are hilarious. Thank you so much for reveiwing. I love hearing from you! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2015 06:32 am Title: Chapter 13: The Moment of Truth
bloody hell...this is not cool! I hope Michael does something....I hate this Cameron guy since his first minute in this story. And the secret....holly shit! But anyway this is a really good story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much it means to me that you are taking the time to read my work. I hope I continue to make you happy in the future. Please stay tuned for more! :D