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Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2014 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Nearer to Disclosure

damn i was not expecting diana to be pregnant so soon hopefully she tells michael her secret before its put out there without her consent loved this chapter i cant wait to read so much more of this story you truly are an amazing writer keep up the amazing works of writing 



Author's Response:

That means so much to me. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: BillieJeans4LuversMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2014 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tainted Discovery

I love hearing from you too! Through your stories and your responses. It's very kind how you make time to respond to everyone's reviews. Your a great writer and a great person!  :)



Author's Response:

You are the sweetest person EVER! I do my best to thank everyone personally for taking the time to read my work. I am so humbled by everyone's support. Your loyalty is the fuel that keeps me going. I love and appreciate every single one of my readers. :)

Reviewer: BillieJeans4LuversMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2014 10:55 am Title: Chapter 2: The Tainted Discovery

Great chapter! Cameron reminds me of Gerwin, always trying to be sneaky. I have a feeling that Cameron is up to something.

And at first I thought the guest was going to be Cameron because Cameron said he wanted to give a reason why TSG should collaborate with them. So maybe Macaulay Culkin is working for Cameron to get more information, or maybe not. But right now, there is nothing odd about Macaulay other than him and Marie. If Marie wasn't much older than him, they would be cute... I think.

And I think that Ana/Diana is just on her period? It may be something else but that is what came to mind.

Can't wait to read more!!! XOXOXO 

P.S. LOVE YOUR STORIES!



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much! I love hearing from you and your predictions are VERY good! :D

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2014 12:46 am Title: Chapter 2: The Tainted Discovery

She was pregnant without knowing?  

Can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

She might be and thank you! ;)

Reviewer: BillieJeans4LuversMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2014 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Business Consolidation

This thrid chapter is going to be a blast!!!!!! I can already tell.

You know the perfect times to hook your readers and I LOVE that! It keeps us begging for more!!!!

I had to come back and write another review because thats how exited I am for this to develop!!! Contuine doing a great job!!



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much! I love your reviews and so humbled by your words. You are the reason I keep going and I hope that I continue to make you happy! :D

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2014 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1: Business Consolidation

love this chapter but damn that man needs to back off after diana told his ass no the girls were crazy about getting to go to neverland i cant wait to read the next chapter this whole series you have written real good keep this story coming 



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much! You have no idea how much your loyalty means to me. I love that you always have faith in me. That's exactly what I need to continue my writing! :)

Reviewer: BillieJeans4LuversMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2014 06:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Business Consolidation

Im so glad its back! I cant wait to read more!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love your loyalty.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2014 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Business Consolidation

Can't wait for more 

Still want to know Diana's secret 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It will be revealed sooner than you think! ;)

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