[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2015 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 7: Partying, Pranks & Pampering
cute chapter i hope the little girl will be alright michael will be a great daddy looking forward to reading more of this amazing story keep up your great writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I always love hearing from you. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2015 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: Partying, Pranks & Pampering
Oh that Joseph..so annoyingly persistent and Cameron too, although that's an understatement. The fact that Lisa refused to join forces with him proves she's smarter than I thought she would be here.
Author's Response:
That Joseph is quite a character. Cameron too. I'm glad you didn't predict Lisa's behavior because I didn't want to write her in a typical way this time. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2015 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 6: Having Some Frightful Fun
i am liking how this story is coming along i look forward to reading more of it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: Jan 04, 2015 05:38 am Title: Chapter 6: Having Some Frightful Fun
Why am I having a bad feeling about this? Btw the story is cool. :)
Author's Response:
What are you having a bad feeling about?
Thank you for reading!
Date: Jan 03, 2015 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: Having Some Frightful Fun
You're always keeping us on the edge aand wanting more
How does he get her number?
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you.
You'll have to wait and find out! ;)
I might have chapter 7 ready by tomorrow.
Date: Jan 02, 2015 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: Done in Darkness, Revealed in Light
(Part 2.....)
... And court was... powerfull i guess lol. I wonder how Michael will react to Cameron meeting his fiancé...
End notes: Amazing chapters like always! And I have 4 reviews on this chapter... Ill try to stick with 1! P.S. Do you have a kik? And thank you very much with your stories!
*Sorry if this seems rushed...*
Till next time!!...
Author's Response:
The court case is getting intense but, like any legal action, it has to be. Thank you so much for your kind words. I love hearing from you and please do not be afraid to give more than one review. I'm not sure what a 'kik' is but I guarantee I don't have it haha. I'll be posting chapter 6 later today so please be on the lookout for it! :)
Date: Jan 02, 2015 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 5: Done in Darkness, Revealed in Light
~I have now read the story~
So with Diana's secret... I knew that Michael already knew Diana had a secret, and I am glad that Jasmine did not tell him yet because Diana should be the one who should tell him. I wonder how this will happen...
... Michael and Diana's love is so touching! I wish it were to be real! And I cant wait for their baby!! This love story can go on forever!...
... It would be funny if they got caught 'Doing It' by Waleed, Mac, or even anybody! It would be halirous!!!
... Halloween party!!! (Just wanted to say that... lol...)
... Mac and Marie's friendship is so loving. Even though Marie is way older, you never know!
... And I wonder what coustume Ana has. Maybe its Michael Jackson?
Author's Response:
Than you SO much for this beautiful review. I am so touched and honored that someone else sees Michael and Diana's story as somewhat real and that it could really be genuine and go on forever. LOL seeing those two get romantic would be embarassing to walk in on but you never know, it just might happen one day! ;) The party will be loads of fun for everyone. Mac and Marie are adorable but like you said, given their age gap only a friendship can ever happen between them. Ana will have more than one costume - I'm sure everyone will love it once they find out what it is.
THANK YOU FOR READING! I look forward to getting more reviews from you! :D
Date: Jan 02, 2015 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: Done in Darkness, Revealed in Light
... And by now i mean later... lol... Even though i have not read it YET I know it will be GREAT! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I look forward to reading your review once you've read it. :)
Date: Jan 02, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5: Done in Darkness, Revealed in Light
OMG, how did I miss this chapter! I will read it NOW!
Date: Dec 28, 2014 02:02 am Title: Chapter 5: Done in Darkness, Revealed in Light
The Halloween party is going to be great
Hopefully everything will work out for the best and Lisa and Gerwin end up behind bars for good
Always looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: Dec 26, 2014 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: Curiousity, Cover Ups & Cleverness
I LOVE where this is going!
I wonder if Jasmine is going to tell Michael the secret. I kind of hope she does because Michael does need to know someday!
When Diana read the note I knew that this would get serious! Jasmine has a choice to make, to tell, or to not tell. That choice is a hard one.
Michael and Mac are hilarious!! :3
Joseph in this story is VERY irritating! I wish he would just let his son live his life! Good thing this is just a story... lol!
And last… I hope they don't think it's Rick who is evil… it's Cameron!! I wonder what will happen now that they know the business office.
GREAT CHAPTER! <3 <3 ~My favorite author~ ~My favorite story~
~Jayla a.k.a BillieJeans4luversmj :3
Author's Response:
You have NO idea how much your love and support means to me.
I was actually doubting this chapter thinking it would be boring but I am SO GLAD to know that my readers are still enjoying this.
I won't give too much away but Jasmine and Rick's role might take a dramatic turn! ;)
I can't wait to read your reviews for the upcoming chapters!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! <3
Date: Dec 26, 2014 02:38 am Title: Chapter 4: Curiousity, Cover Ups & Cleverness
So badly want to know her secret
Keep it going love this story
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much that means to me. Thank you SO much for your love and support. <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2014 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Nearer to Disclosure
Fantastic!
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie! :)
Date: Dec 22, 2014 07:06 am Title: Chapter 3: Nearer to Disclosure
Happy she's pregnant hopefully she stays pregnant
Cant wait to know her secret and I hope Michael won't leave her
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! There's only one way to find out! ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2014 05:58 am Title: Chapter 3: Nearer to Disclosure
WOW! I'm so happy for Diana and Michael for their baby. I hope this time there will not be another miscarriage!
Cupcake would be a nice nickname. I would have to agree with Diana on the naming. Not so much of a cupcake as a name fan... but it's cute!! :3
And to cut to the chase... I like how you ended this chapter. I wonder if Jasmine will tell. I guess we'll never know UNTIL you write chapter 4!!
Can't wait!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I love hearing from you. I agree, cupcake is a cute nickname but it's a horrible real name, haha. And yes, stay tuned for chapter 4! I am confident that you won't be disappointed! :D