Reviewer: BillieJeans4LuversMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 09:43 am Title: Chapter 10: The Ember Ignites

Nice Chapter! 

The part where Michael and Diana get into a mini fight is sort of tense. I can relate with both sides. Michael not wanting Diana to go with Cameron is understandable. I would not want my husband going with another woman unless I know and trust her very well. But it's all on trust. So I dont disagree on Michael or Diana's actions.

But Diana should also remeber that she has a husband. Cameron may be cute but still.

And for some reason I feel like Michael and Madonna did more than just talk... 

I wonder what Diana thinks about reading that note... Will she get back at him?

Thanks for sharing! Can't wait for more!

 

-Billiejeans4luvers :3

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

I agree with you - their fight was reasonable but it really is based on trust. Technically, Michael is not Diana's husband, they are only engaged and she is well aware of that. Michael and Madonna's relationship will be further discussed down the road. You'll just have to stay tuned to find out more! :)

Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 06:09 am Title: Chapter 10: The Ember Ignites

I smell a rat..and with those notes a major storm is about to brew, I can tell

Author's Response:

HAHA, maybe yes. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 01:24 am Title: Chapter 10: The Ember Ignites

Hi, I'm new but have always read this story. Anyway I'm mad cuz Diana can't be shock bout mj lady friend cuz if she have an argument bout the note I'm be even more mad. Like ik yo tail is not bout to be mad at the note when u starting to have feelings for Cameron and if she falls in love...... gurl put in the story I'll set her straight.

Author's Response:

HAHAHAH! I love your review! Thank you SO much for reading my work. I truly appreciate it. I'm glad that you picked up on the fact that Diana is doing something and has no right to get angry at Michael for being friends with a woman. I hope you continue reading and reviewing as the story continues. :)

Reviewer: BillieJeans4LuversMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2015 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 8: Love, Lingering & Legalities

Michael in this story, and in real life was always a sweet and caring person. It was so touching when that little girl wasn't feeling well and Michael didn't want to dance because of it. He wanted to wait for her to feel better. And that is so sweet, Michael would have done that in real life too.

Also, between Mac & Marie, I felt for Marie in the situation. Mac is about to get married to a different woman, and Marie & Mac have something... I am interested in what will happen.

Michael and Diana's love is growing in every story! Its SO sweet. I'm looking forward to their child.

And Cameron is getting VERY sneaky with getting Diana to join Capital Records. In the last sentence, Diana says she is considering about merging TSG with them. 

Great ending to a chapter! I wonder if she will or will not... (I am about to read chapter 9 now)

Once again, thank you for sharing your chapters. 

 

-Billiejeans4luversmj :3

Author's Response:

WOW. Your reviews are always so touching. THANK YOU. I'm glad you see the realistic side of Michael in my story. I always try to write him in such a way that I feel he would be in real life as well. Marie is a strong yet lonely girl. She and Mac definitely had a connection but because of their age gap, nothing other than friendship could ever happen between them. It makes me happy to know that you see Michael and Diana's love for each other. Maybe when you read chapter 9 you will be in for a real shock! ;) Thanks for reading. I look forward to your review for the next chapter. :D

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2015 05:49 am Title: Chapter 9: A Sudden Change in Direction

oh my word..I certainly wasn't expecting this..if I were Diana I would have said no regardless of how mad Cameron got..Michael is also wrong for wanting to get back at her but at the same time Diana has no room to talk. 

Author's Response:

Hehe, it's all part of the twist. Cameron is a very charming man. No one can resist him. Michael didn't really want revenge but to prove to his fiance that he too could have a relationship with the opposite gender in his own career field. Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2015 04:26 am Title: Chapter 9: A Sudden Change in Direction

Why Diana why?  Did you go our with that not trustworthy ceo? S?She should have listened to Michael 

 

Ohmy please continue I want to know her secret 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I have faith that you will love where this story goes. :)

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2015 01:58 am Title: Chapter 8: Love, Lingering & Legalities

great chapter im looking forward to the next one in this great story 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2015 03:44 am Title: Chapter 7: Partying, Pranks & Pampering

So sweet he's going to be the best daddy ever :)

Ugh Joseph is so annoying can't he leave them alone? Still want know her secret, what is it? 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Aww, yes he will make a great father for sure. Joseph will never change, haha. Her secret will be revealed very soon. Thanks for reading! :)