Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2014 10:59 am Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm, things start to get interesting....Please update soon!

Author's Response:

thank you for your awesome reviews! I'm actually working on the next chapter now, and I'll be splitting time between this and a Sons of Anarchy fiction. 

Maddie does have a lot pent up inside of her, I based her on a friend of mine. Not a MJ fan but still, someone who needs a lot of love.

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2014 10:46 am Title: Chapter 3

I also concur and ask you to develop this story to a longer one, it has great potential for drama. This is very good, so far :)

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2014 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1

This one promises to be interesting! I love Maddie's character, she sounds like a spunky girl who takes no nonsense.

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2014 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Gah! That mean! I was over here goin' "kiss! Kiss! Kiss!" Then it didn't didn't happen.. No fair... *folds arms and scowls*

Author's Response:

I know, aren't I so mean!? lol

Reviewer: Stella OLeary Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2014 01:48 am Title: Chapter 2

love what you're cooking up here! Keep up the great work! xx

Reviewer: Stella OLeary Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2014 01:46 am Title: Chapter 4

loving it!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2014 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

He deserves it... Even better would be gang ass-raped...

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2014 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 4

I hope that asshole get ass raped in jail.

Author's Response:

I just spit out my drink reading this!

Thanks for the review!