Date: Jan 05, 2019 07:31 am Title: Chapter 6
She definitely did over react...I mean, the woman could be a relative or a friend
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2016 08:41 am Title: Chapter 6
OMG your story is really good! Great writing and character interaction! :) Love how you write Michaels character from Smooth Criminal, and no I don't think she overreacted on seeing Michael with another woman, I would of gotten mad to, I probably would just not wanna see him again. And its up to him to call her and make it right or explain who the woman is, she could of been a sister or friend.
Date: Oct 07, 2015 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
No, although, that was a natural reaction. Please write more chapters.
Date: Oct 07, 2015 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
I enjoy reading. Glad that you are having them get to know each other before getting serious.
Date: Oct 06, 2015 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Looking good!,
Date: Oct 06, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
The suspense is building. I enjoyed reading the story.:-) I look forward to reading more.
Date: Oct 06, 2015 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Good introduction chapter to your first story. I look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2015 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
I think Violet's reaction was on point. Who is this mystery woman he's with!? It better be his damn sister or best friend lol
Update soon!
Author's Response:
I'll have an update for you soon! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
maybe it just a friend or a sister
Author's Response:
We'll see... :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2014 07:02 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this story!!! Michael's character is adorable!!! So playful and cute! Too good to be true! is he really a criminal? Gypsy looks exactly like my old cat Prince.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I sort of had the idea for him to be a criminal at first but I didn't have a lot of ideas for that so I'm not using it anymore. That's another reason why I want to change the title. And he must have been an adorable cat lol I love the name :)
Date: Dec 12, 2014 04:53 am Title: Chapter 5
This is really good... I am enjoying this story😍😍.... I think you should keep the title.... Keep going... Your previous chapter was not boring.... I love it... Violet is funny...
Author's Response:
Thank you, that means a lot!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2014 03:52 am Title: Chapter 3
Hey there just giving you some L.O.V.E and letting know this chapter did not s*ck. Please continue and update soon. I'm looking forward to the 1st date and to Violet finally speaking to Michael.
Smooth Criminal is one of my favorite short films. Is just Michael is just so SEXY; with the suit, fighting, dancing and when he is a BAD ;).. Shamone!!
All for L.O.V.E....Lummi <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it! :)
And Smooth Criminal is my favorite short film, the dancing is amaaaazing. And he's sexy af lol
<333
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2014 03:02 am Title: Chapter 2
This is sooo goood can't wait for more
Date: Nov 26, 2014 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like the story so far. Is Violet supposed to be dreaming?
Author's Response:
Thank you! And no, she is not :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2014 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Crystal just got back at Violet..ooohh. By the way, awesome story so far!