[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2023 10:55 am Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
Why did this story have to end at the most interesting bit??? This was truly a good read---i cannot wait to restart it
Date: Jan 25, 2019 09:22 am Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
Im loving all this drama!
Date: Apr 06, 2016 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
Again, I love where this is going. Please continue this story. It is great and totally romantic to see, how their relationship develops. You have been doing an excellent job so far. Please, please, pleeeeaaase keep on writing!!!!!
Date: Apr 06, 2016 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
Hey Michaela Josephine,
I love your work! Period! By now, I have read all of your wonderful stories and I must say, that the way you portray MJ is lovely and sweet and adorable ! Please, why did you ever stop writing???? Your style is wonderful and captivating. Please keep on finishing this wonderful story. It is your best followed by the whole story about Diana and Michael. You also never finished the fourth part of the series. Again of all of your stories, " It happened one night" is definitely your most romantic and wonderful achievement in the MJ fiction field!!!! I love how slowly and beautifully it has been developing so far and I really really really wish that you will finish it and let Michael and Aurora live happily ever after. Please write more. Let them discover intimacy and stick faithfully together like clue supporting another unswiveringly
Hugs Regine. My email is: gigi.chris@ t-online.de
Date: Jul 22, 2015 08:55 am Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
Wow thank u for keeping me on the edge of my seat the whole ride..i can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Omg if u were in a book story i would buy all ur books. I love u and keep up the awesome work..u are awesome my favorite ever!!
Author's Response:
WOW! Thank you SO much! That really means the world to me. I don't think I've ever received such a positive, beautiful review. I really appreciate it!
Please be sure to check out my other stories. I hope you like them. :)
Hope to hear from you again soon!
Date: Apr 06, 2015 08:34 am Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
I like where it's going so far. Waiting for the other shoe to fall keeps me reading. Oh, I can't wait until all hell breaks loose :-D
Author's Response:
Thanky you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2015 02:56 am Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
I think they are way past friends, by now. No shame to call them lovers...It is something beautiful and has nothing to do with the fact that Michael is still technically married. Technical terms never stopped love :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you see it that way.
Stay tuned for more! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2015 02:44 am Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
I love this story and you've got me hooked. Please,don't stop.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I was starting to feel like it isn't going anywhere.
Stay tuned for more! :)
Date: Apr 06, 2015 02:43 am Title: Chapter 16: The Dilemma Before Departing
Mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Lisa a buzz kill y she even worried bout him girl y u want $10million for U RICHHHHH she kills me
Jill is another buzz kill girl bye I don't like u anyway girl imma slap her she da freak she a crazy freak
Lol Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
Thanks, girl! :)
Date: Apr 05, 2015 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 15: Bonds, Blood & Blatancy
Oh hell, poor David and poor Michael. And what's up with the letter? I'm so hooked on this story; please keep it going.
Author's Response:
You'll soon find out! ;)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I always love hearing from you! :D
Date: Apr 04, 2015 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 15: Bonds, Blood & Blatancy
Kuh by yahn Kuh by yahn LOL 😂😂😂😂😂😂 I don't kno how to spell it
Anwayyyyyy lol imma pray "Lawd plz help my boo and his boo from his almost ex boo LOL *cough cough back to the prayer*.... AMEN👏👏👏👏
Lollllllll I'm done Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
Your reviews always make me crack the hell up LOL!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2015 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 15: Bonds, Blood & Blatancy
I wonder what's in the box from her father's estate.
Author's Response:
Who said it was from her father?
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: Apr 04, 2015 10:40 am Title: Chapter 14: Coming To Terms With It All
Didn't expect that it would end as soon as you're implying I mean there are still things that need to be resolved like Jill getting the message that Aurora doesn't give a rip..and that the relationship goes somewhere and not just be a total lie.
And also this phone convo between Lisa and Michael should be interesting..and thank you for pointing out there were wrongdoings on both sides of the marriage..also it was said Michael had gotten Debbie pregnant (with the child she should have had in September '96 but miscarried) while technically still married to Lisa and that's why she was mad because she felt pushed away..and the children thing I heard Priscilla had something to do with the decision not to try to have children with Michael..
Looking forward to seeing how you wrap things up..
Author's Response:
I feel like this story is dragging now. I need to get to the point and plus I have to start the last part of my saga about Michael and Diana. I have way too many good ideas for it and this is kind of in the way now. It's not a bad thing, I just want to go back to my two orginal love birds, hehe.
This story will most likely be capped between chapter 20-23. Give or take. I will be explaining things in more detail and will probably have slightly longer chapters moving forward just to make sure I cover everything before closing this story off.
That is one thing I wanted to make absolutely clear - it went BOTH ways in their marriage. Michael was not a saint but neither was Lisa Marie. They both had their faults and in the end they both felt it was best to end it. I haven't read or heard anything about Michael getting Debbie pregnant while still married to Lisa but that would make sense as far as the time line goes. Whatever the case may be, things happenend for a reason.
You're right. Priscilla was a huge contributing factor in them not having children which I will be pointing out in the next chapter. She was evil, racist, judgmental and an all around BITCH when her daughter married Michael. I never liked her, never will. I understand why Elvis left her. She deserved it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: Apr 04, 2015 12:12 am Title: Chapter 14: Coming To Terms With It All
All I got to say is oh lawddddddd lolll hope this all goes well
Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
You never know! ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2015 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 14: Coming To Terms With It All
Hopefully, these two settle amicably, because it's a crying shame to drag on and ruin the memories of a marriage which, at least at the beginning, was made of love. Move on, in peace of mind, without revenge. That's what I think Michael and Lisa will talk about.
Author's Response:
It just might go that way. But then again...it might not. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!