Date: Mar 05, 2016 03:23 pm Title: The Give That Takes
*smdh* Psychos falling put of trees! I have an idea. Why can't RHODA and Stenny hook up? She will stick her gold digging claws in him and drain him dry then he'll kill her. :) Seriously? Pregnant? Glad her attempt at "blocking" FAILED. Stand by your man, Ria. The ultimatum were the last ditch efforts of a drowning woman to hold on for dear life. *smh* Leave Ria and what: magically fall in love with you cause the dna y'all swapped stuck? Naw dawg. Hoping for a miracle next chapter.
Date: Mar 05, 2016 03:17 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
To answer your question first, I'm probably more drawn to Michael & Ria right now. I "thought" I saw some parallels in the dates with Ria & with Marley. I couldn't place the restaurant, but I could not be mistaken with the dancing. :) "Stenny" (Steve + Kenny) is an all-day sucka, a jacka$$ and a psycho vigilante murderer! He gets the permanent side eye for killing Ria, killing his dad and for all these other sins that I suspect him of. Switching identities? Staging a break in so he could run to the rescue? Now I bet this Grade A schizo is about to "destroy" the evidence that HE planted. *smh* Can somebody just kill him already? Wreck on the way to the police station? Have a massive heart attack and veer off into the ocean? An aneurysm? Torn to shreds by alien life forms and used as manure?? DIE Stenny!!!
Date: Mar 04, 2016 11:45 am Title: It's Understood
Rhoda. D@mn. She's like your period: an unwanted, annoying pest that drops in one day and shows up for YEARS without a welcome invitation. I'm glad you told me she wasn't staying: dadgum "thin line between love & hate, fatal attraction" beeyotch! Still speechless and spellbound...
Date: Mar 04, 2016 10:36 am Title: Passion Overshadowed
Giirrrrlllll... write this down because it's a rarity. I'm SPEECHLESS!! Let me step back a moment. Their date and dance were divine. Their almost pairing: hotter than satan's poop chute, but this dayyum box?!? The hayyaill!!! No more words. Effed up. WHOEVER is responsible for this tomfoolery. *smdh*
Author's Response:
This is so awesome coming from an incredible writer like yourself. Lmaoooooooo. I was ROTFL at "What the Hayyail". Lmaoo. <333
Date: Mar 04, 2016 10:05 am Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
Michael & Ria's meeting AGAIN was "exquisite"!! How the two of them will EVER get any real work done is beyond my comprehension. Lol! I'm so happy for her. She deserves the kind of love that will heal her hurts and she must have a great deal of physical and emotional scars. And HE deserves this opportunity too -a chance to experience real love with the live of his life! It wasn't anticlimactic at all. It was beautiful! I'm happy to continue this story here. I joined to read it. :) One last thing, I love your artwork. Every piece is so fitting for the chapter. I meant to say it sooner, but I was in too much of a hurry to post my review & get to the next chapter. Lol!! Loving it. {{hug}}
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2016 04:31 pm Title: Scattered Daises
Hey Love! Just started reading your stories and this by far is my favorite one so far! Love your writing and way with words, it keeps the story engaging and not cheesy/corny at all. Hope you continue this story, I look forward to seeing how the plot will unravel!
Author's Response:
Hey new reader!!! Thank you so much for giving the story a chance!! There's a rollercoaster ride in your future lol. I will be taking it all the way to the end I promise you!!! Stay tuned!!! <333
Date: Feb 29, 2016 03:46 pm Title: Looking Back And Moving Forward
His Ria??? It's Kenny's punk a$$ lurking! What's in the bahhhhoooxxxx??? Michael & Marley's developing relationship?? I like!!!! They seem to make all the right choices as it relates to Baylee and giving their "thing" a go. Enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Kenny is all up and lurking girl. Let's just say his stay in that hospital did nothing but damage an already damaged person. Can't wait for you to catch up to the rest of the tail. Two words...nail biting!!! Michael and Marley are thinking of Baylee first. They want their love but not at the expense of her. <333
Date: Feb 29, 2016 03:32 pm Title: Hurt In The Lost And Found Of My Mind
It hurt. Two little words, but so poignant. Ria & Michael successful and together again reminds je about the saying (paraphrased): if you love someone, then set them free. If they return, it was meant to be. They didn't exactly free one another, but whatever will be will be. Destiny.
Author's Response:
Hold on to their love. It's one for the ages. <333
Date: Feb 29, 2016 03:19 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
O_o Officer Canton got me feeling some type of way. He gets the *side eye* cause it "seems like he has duel personalities. He's reminding me of Kenny too much. I think he's the type to protect the public and kill cats (or beat his woman). Bad vibes from Canton. Bad vibes. And I wonder what's in the box. (???)
Author's Response:
Tee-hee!! Read ooooonnnnnn Read awaaaayyyyy!! <333
Date: Feb 28, 2016 11:43 pm Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
My, my, my ... Ria, Rhoda, Kenny, Michael ... all in their personal hell. I'm HEARTBROKEN for Ria! I HATE Kenny! Rhoda's a self-serving, manipulative b***h!!! Michael?? Good guy. Good heart. Doesn't appear to be caught up in the trappings of 'the good life', but I declare he needs to grow a pair and take owmership of his personal life. *smdh* But the one thing he IS running like a BOSS: "I wanna eff you to sleep". I died for about 180 seconds and came back up windmill fighting!!!! LMFBO!!! Did I say that I am CRUSHED for Ria?? Oh ... and I hate Kenny. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooooooo. This is why you're reviews always tickle me. I actually pictured you knocked out then popping up with your arms going!!!! Michael is bored and nostalgic. Rhoda is a little too ahead of herself. Fist that Kenny hate. It won't be subsiding anytime soon!!! <333
Date: Feb 28, 2016 11:24 pm Title: The Officer Or The Gentleman?
Wowza !! This chapter buildup to the silent admission that they have feelings for one another TRULY knocked me off of my feet! By the time his inner warrior decided to "fight", I was breathless!!! I'm enamored with this story feeling a mixture of both impending pleasure "and" pain. Goodness girl ... me likey!
Author's Response:
Thank you love!!! <333
Date: Feb 28, 2016 11:08 pm Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
Oh my!!! I felt like crying!! Ria's with Kenny out of self imposed OBLIGATION. That's never going to make a good recipe for a healthy, long lasting relationship. And I see right now that Michael is everything Kenny wishes he could be. "He can't always win, right"? How will Riaa escape his clutches (Kenny) and get to where she needs to be (with Michael)? Very well-written chapter. I enjoyed it very much. :)
Author's Response:
It's so sad when one gives up true love to fulfill an obligation. It's never the right thing in the beginning middle or end and you will see the sad results of that. I'm so loving your reviews!!! <333
Date: Feb 28, 2016 11:44 am Title: Scattered Daises
It's getting warm in the kitchen now! Somebody IS watching Marley and that "somebody" doesn't like Michael very much. "He can't always win". Hmmm... Now Marley's going to stay with Michael & Baylee? Uhhmmhmm... And that slip of the tongue didn't go over my head either. Now Amy? Her and Kenny should be together. *side eye* already and she JUST came into the story. Going to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
"I always feel like...somebody's watching meeeeeeeee!!" Yes the stalker is genuine! Lol Amy fortunately won't be much of a bother. She does show up again but it's in a way you won't see coming!!<333
Date: Feb 27, 2016 04:49 pm Title: Broken Promises
This chapter was sort of ominous. If it was your goal to make the Reader feel a sense of foreboding, then you did an excellent job. I don't know what happens after they drift apart, but I feel immense sadness and loss. Good read!
Author's Response:
This is where the forelorness begins. When Michael leaves it's like the last thread starts to unravel. Things will never be the same! <333
Date: Feb 27, 2016 04:33 pm Title: Watching Eyes And Baby Cries
Another very interesting chapter. The day started off well. I wonder what made little Baylee "snap" and start thinking so strongly of her mother. I also wonder what the cold feeling that came over Marley was ... -the feeling of being watched? Michael & Marley tea time? Uhhhmmmhmmm...