[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2015 06:28 am Title: Hurt In The Lost And Found Of My Mind
Update soon! Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you hun!! More to come soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2015 02:22 am Title: Hurt In The Lost And Found Of My Mind
Kamaria don't faint! You should be jumping for joy, girl lol omg
the beginning of this broke my heart. I'm not even surprised he beat her that bad though. I'm just glad it wasn't worse! Also yaaaaaaas to her finally leaving him!
You go girl!
Now michael, >_> nigga you know you ain't right for this :( she gon end up stalking you because you letting your dick do all the talking then you gon be regretting the sex ;-;
i cannot wait for them to meet again! Also MICHAEL and Marley! YAS
Author's Response:
Lol Ria is just a little shocked. I don't think she ever expected to run in to him much lesser be assigned to interview him.
The Kenny Incident could have been much worse for real. But Ria has moved on to bigger better things for herself.
Michael is thinking with his small head but he'll sober up soon enough. Will it be too late? Dun dun dun. Lol.
Marley and Michael next and more Dun dun runs to come!!! <333
Date: Jan 04, 2015 05:41 pm Title: The Interview...
sooo happy ria left kenny & completely started a new life somewhere else! I just hope when she sees Michael again, he will have dropped Rhonda by then!! she'll probably start making crazy desperate moves if he doesn't soon! Mike you better get it together!!! omg & the box.. "what's in the booox?! 😩" lmao ;-; btw officer canton gives me soon-to-be-stalker vibes ;( but about this box again! ..has to be from the same person that trashed her apartment. I'm thinking its Kenny.. or..or she has a nasty past that's starting to haunt her but I doubt it. it's tied with Michael & his past. I just know it; I can feel it!! ..or nah? 😳
Author's Response:
Yessss she finally left Kenny. She realized how silly her decision was to be with him only out if obligation. I mean look how it turned out. Smh. As for Mike and Rhoda well I think he done with her. He doesn't love her at all.
The box... Oh the box!!!! Muhahahhahaha. You will find out soon my dear. I love your hypothesises!!! Not confirming or denying any one of them tho. Lol. Thanks for reading hun!! <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2014 03:41 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
I loved it! And Marley shouldn't go out with that guy regardless! There's no connection. It's obvious that she's bored by him.
Author's Response:
Thank you hun!! Marley will still have to deal with the Officer because he's in charge of her case with the break in at her apartment so she doesn't want it to be all awkward. He seemed like more of a friend since they had a few things in common but we'll see lol. <333
Date: Dec 30, 2014 09:55 am Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
I cheated... Came here to read more! Love it! Marley is finally getting a chance with Michael! But....now has to let officer Steve down...another obstacle....hmm who sent the package?
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Hey babe...LOLLLLLL I'm glad you cheated!!! And I hope you're enjoying it so far. Yeah letting the officer down is going to be something lol. As for the package...Zips Lips. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2014 07:37 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
Yaaaaas my wife Teddy is in this! 🌝🌝🌝
i feel a little bad for Steven tbqh. He seems to really like her buuuuut! She got her man now and he is no more competition u.u I just hope he doesn't end up all possessive and stalkerish. I got a bad feeling that's what's going to happen.
Who is is this box from and what is it? >_> nu uh, don't open it Marley.
That damn kiss in the kitchen, yes!
Author's Response:
Lol yesssss she always puts me or my characters in her stories. My middle name is Nuru so I got a little spot in LIPBY!! I had to pay hommage to ma homegirl!!! I know what you mean with Steven because he's really infatuated with Marley. It's going to be a little difficult for him to swollow what he feels is a sudden rejection. There will be more sweet sweet kisses to come. As for the box...Zips lips. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2014 07:05 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
WHAT'S in the box?!!!
I'm still giggling about Michael almost falling in front of his daughter. It's just ironic thinking of such a graceful man taking a spill. Idk what it is about people falling that makes me want to laugh so hard.
As for Officer Canton, he can stop trying already there's no use. Michael's got Marley in the bag! Pray all you want...
I can't wait to see what's going on with Ria, and them hopefully its the two of them ditching their loser significant others!!!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. I have the weirdest reaction to seeing people fall whether it's right in front of me or on the TV I always feel it in my own legs. It's sooooooo odddd!!!! Lol but I know what you mean some spills are funny as hell.
Its like the movie Seven. Lmao. "What's in the boxxxxx!!" *Brad Pitt cries. You will find out soon!
Ria and Kenny and em is up next. So much will unfold.
As for the Officer. He'll be around but not in the capacity he would like. He still has to work on Marley's case. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2014 06:55 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
This is all I can say!! It's happening!! In the words of my big brotha Hova
It's
About
To
Go
Down
I'm so happy. I want Michael to be happy. I want her to be happy. I want them all to be happy. The cop is about to be a problem. Can I beat him up if he tries anything? I'm just sayin, I'm down for that cause. This is a happy night for me. WWE is on fire but I read this and its adding on to my happiness. It's been a crap month, but thanks for being the great writer you are because I at least had you along for the ride.
Now, oooonnnn to Theodora.
I saw my name and started screaming. I explained to Ma that I was mentioned in the story and she said, "I hope you clean up your room in the story." This is why two light skins can't live in the same house.
BUt omg that made me so happy.
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you
Fun fact: One of my nicknames is Theodore. My first name is actually Teddra. I always felt it was too girly, so I answer to Teddy or Bo since Bonita is my middle name. I was named after my dad and some folks just say Lil Ted. I've also been called Rev because my dad was a preacher *dies*
But again, thank you so much! You don't know how much this means to me. Lawd I'm gonna have to read it again and freak out like it's the first time
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooooo. I had to give you a little shout out. You always pay tribute to me in all your stories so I had to repay the favor with gratitude. It's the least I could do
One of the reasons why I love is I'll be casually strolling through your reviews and I'll find thins like "This is why two light skins can't live in the same house" and I cry tears. Lmaoooo.
Yes there giving it a go and the cop seems like he's going to be salty. Unfortunately it won't be the last of him cause he's still assigned to her case. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2014 06:32 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
Great chapretty loving this can't wait for the next one. Know when you"ll be updating again? Hope soon. 😊
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I'll be updating soon. I usually try to do it once a week. If I get the time I'll try and do it sooner!! <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2014 06:28 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
Loved it!!! Update soon hun :)
Author's Response:
Thank you Hun. I'll update as soon as I can!! <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2014 09:36 am Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
I am TOO disgusted with Kenny right now... ughhh!!!!
FUCK YOU KENNY, YOU STUPID DRUNK BASTARD!!!
Yeah... I'm pissed. Great chapter though.
LOL
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooo give me a few minutes to recover from the kitty with the machine gun...I'm crying. Lollllllllll
As you can see Ria made a terrible terrible choice. Kenny is weak and to appease his own fragile ego he exhurts the only power he was over Ria and that's his physical strength. Smh. It's sad. All of it!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2014 08:59 am Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
Wow... that was a very touching chapter. Poor Michael. I know that news killed him inside. Ria and Kenny... together? Damn.
This gets better every update! :D
Author's Response:
Yessss I know it hurt Michael to the core to find out Ria chose to be with Kenny. He had never expected that at all. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2014 10:38 am Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
I want to kick Kenny in his neck. Donkey kick him in his forehead. Beat his face with an iPhone. Break into his home and eat his food. Make him go shopping for more food and come back and eat that.
Then buy him a crockpot and place it on his door step and when he wakes up and finds it I'll throw the crockpot at his face. Then after that I'll make some soup and make him watch me eat it.
This bastard!
Now, first of all, Michael is living in Alphabet City so naturally
He's got Ria all on his brain and just :(
I don't trust Rhoda
Kenny and Rhoda both
but ugh i can't wait to see what happens next
thanks for another awesome update
Yes, I had to use Rent gifs because he's in Alphabet City! Avenue Beeeeeeee!
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo RENT!!! You descriptions of torture are not just thought provoking but hilarious!!! Kenny is a POS. Rhoda is manipulative but she's being used at the same time. It's all a hot mess and guess what? It's going to get even messier. MESSY!!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2014 06:13 pm Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
No, no, no and no! Michael and Ria both need to get out of their weak ass meaningless relationships and find each other again!
Rhoda's a busy body little bitch. And Kenny... I shouldn't even have to say one word... you know what I'm thinking about him right now... SMH!!
Author's Response:
Your right both their relationships are weak and pretty much forced and fake. Rhoda is for lack of a better word conniving. Kenny...well yeah he's becoming a monster. Taking out his failures and shortcomings on the woman he supposedly loves. It's all sad.<333
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2014 06:01 pm Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
this chapter gave me anxiety, LAWD lol
I was so ready to read about what happened next after the kiss fjhdvybfj . but now I wanna know what happens next with ria & kenny and mike & rhonda.. who would've thought ria had to go through all that with kenny. and it's just beginning, dis tew much 😩
I can't wait for what's next. like.. how is michael gonna find out (if he finds out), whats he gonna do.. how is it gonna play out HSJBSSJD wE NEED ANSWERS LMAO ;-;
Author's Response:
Lmaooo answers will be coming little by little hun. The next chapter will be what happens after the kiss between Michael and Marley. <333