Date: Feb 14, 2015 04:38 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
#teammarley this my fave story on here. keep up the awesome work !
Author's Response:
Awwwwe thank you so so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. So much more to come. #teammarley! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2015 04:13 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
Oh my God Kenny is now Steven isn't he? ;(((((((( damnit Kenny;( just go somewhere! Ugh! I forgot to comment on the last chapter but it was great and I'm excited for Ria and Michael. They are too cute together! Ms. Rhoda needs to go somewhere also.
Author's Response:
Lol. Is Steven Kenny? Ill just leave you to ponder over that a little more. But now we do know for sure it was Kenny who killed Ria. He's also dead isn't he? Lol We will see what happens to Rhoda next episode! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2015 03:17 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
I'm most definitely drawn to Ria and Michael relationship then his with Marley don't get me wrong she's a nice girl and sweet but tbh I just don't really care to much for her she ain't my cup of tea. I guess I'm more for Ria (Lisa Bonet) since I've been a huge fan of her's since her Cosby Show days Denise was always my favorite Lol.
Author's Response:
Loll. So Michael and Ria!! They're up next episode so look out for them!!!!
Marley is a sweet girl hopefully she will grow more on you as the story continues. The past and future will eventually collide. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2015 10:54 am Title: It's Understood
They made looooooooooove, in memory of my boy Robert.
I know I'm a mess for that lmao but I had to say that for some strange reason. One of these days I'm gonna review on time. I think my internet is just crappy and it ruins so much. Gawd! Anyway, beautifully written as always. I'm so glad my babies are back and back together for some grown up shit and just aaaaah! I'm so happy. That gif was me last night. I made sure to find it again for this.
Rhoda, if you don't
What you want now? What you want want want
what you want want want?
We got clocks, pocket watches, and wrist watches but it don't mean we got the time
step off please
WHY IS SHE HERE?!?!
Why is she here, Ike?!?!
She just gon show up and ruin my happy moment. Thanks, Rhoda. I was just thinking the other day about how much I missed you. Gawd knows I truly wanted to see you again. Kudos, Rhoda
Author's Response:
Dylan is killing me right now. He knows the shade to shed on Rhoda!! Lol
Yes the loving has taken place at last!! Too bad the bad news bear had to show her face. Is she up to no good? Marley and Michael are coming up next so hold on the those bobby socks bb!! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2015 09:34 am Title: It's Understood
Rhoda, Kenny, and Michael's assistant are going to be big enough pains. Can we have a poll and vote Canton out? Too many "extras" in the pot. Please bring us up-to-date on Michael and Marley soon. They are a sweet pairing and I want to know how long it'll be before they link it all to Kenny.
Author's Response:
I'm way ahead of you on this. While writing I already decided to not focus on a few Characters l mentioned as much. They will serve their purpose but not cause too much trouble. Let's call them side haters. Lol. Michael's Assistant is one. I don't want to give away too much but certain people won't give as much trouble as they let on as the Mystery will be more center stage. Michael and Marley are up next so not to worry. This chapter will get you guys thinking hard. lol. I'll post at the end of the week things have been hectic around these parts. You know I always love the back and forth and you ask such great questions. I really like that. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2015 09:10 am Title: Passion Overshadowed
Author's Response:
Lolllllll <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2015 09:09 am Title: It's Understood
ohhh shit
Author's Response:
Lol more oh shit to come!! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2015 11:15 pm Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
Awww. This is my favorite/the most palpable interaction between Ria and Michael thusfar.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2015 11:09 pm Title: Looking Back And Moving Forward
That movie was my first thought. Hmm. I wonder what it is?
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2015 10:31 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
Why the creepy stalker cop? Dude needs to become normal and realize she's just human, not *perfect*. I gotta admit, I love the present focused chapters the most <3
Author's Response:
The present focus chapters will continue long after the end of the past flashback chapters. There are only a few more years left to cover in the past. Tia's fate will be spelled out over the last ones. You'll see cause and perpetrator. <333
Date: Feb 08, 2015 08:23 pm Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
Both of their relationships make me sad and frustrated.It's better to be alone then be in a relationship that makes you feel alone.
Author's Response:
Yes their reallationships at this point was very stressing. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2015 08:04 pm Title: The Officer Or The Gentleman?
I think the reason I questioned the "Mr" is because he told the interviewer in the beginning to call him "Michael".
The Officer was plain thirsty. He needs to gtfo and not complicate things. Can't wait to read what happens next :)
Author's Response:
Officer Canton is very thirsty indeed. Lol. <333
Date: Feb 08, 2015 07:21 pm Title: The Interview...
I'm not allergic to soy or gluten. I've done blood, skin, biopsy and saliva testing lol.
I wonder if cut/pasting from google docs perserves the font?
Author's Response:
Oooh ok. I'm glad you've recovered, at least I hope, fully. With google docs I don't know. I'v never used it. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2015 07:12 pm Title: It's Understood
Kenny out. Michael in.
They haven't really talked yet!! There can be no lovin' without no talkin'!!! This is only going to hurt them (temporarily), in the end!
And, um, Rhonda - Girl, please, step on off. Ain't nobody checkin' for you no more, so - Bye.
UPDATE!!!!!
Author's Response:
You're right they need to talk but they let the moment take them. Once everything falls into place the displacement like you said will be temporary. The tension has to build. Next is going to be Michael and Marley with the earrings. I've already started on it1 <333
Date: Feb 08, 2015 07:06 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
One of the things I'm loving so much about your writing in this story right now is your use of dialogue, Menen. Nothing in their words sounds forced or empty. Everything flows so nicely and Michael is sooo smooth, but again not in a way that is cheesy or corny at all. And the way that you bring their emotions forth, too... Damn girl.
This story with the earrings, though, is scary as fuchh. They were never found?? Obviously the person who broke into her apartment is the one who stole them and her special paper. I wonder what else the person stole?
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Outer dialogue is usally hard for me. I want it to flow and sound authentic.
The earrings were Ria's and she was wearing them the last time Michael saw her before she died and they where'nt with her when her body was found...It does sound scary.
The paper on the other hand we'll see. ;))) They mystery is just starting to unravel now. <333