[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 01:28 am Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
I really like that the repercussions of staying idle are catastrophic. Thats deep and very true. & omg so her and mike are finally testing the waters!! I like how before mike was all shy and wasnt sure if he should kiss her now he doesnt even care haha
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 01:12 am Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
Love it! I think its horrible that ken is now abusing ria like she needs to get out of there fast
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 01:01 am Title: The Officer Or The Gentleman?
Dude i wasn't ready but i was ready for the kiss haha michaels so jealous haha once another guy comes in the picture he goes in the win haha
Author's Response:
Lol. He had to go in for the win. He wasn't chancing the same thing that happened with Kenny and Ria happening again. Lol. <333
Date: Mar 20, 2015 12:47 am Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
You already know im obsessed with this story! Like im totally in love. I kinda figured her & ken would get together like as she said hes been there for her
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 12:33 am Title: Scattered Daises
That picture totally freaked me out! I didnt realize at first it was her apartment until she had the call to the police. Dude thats crazy like I wonder what all of that is about
Date: Mar 20, 2015 12:18 am Title: Broken Promises
Aww its sad that theyre growing apart im having that same experience currently in college, losing friends and things like that
Author's Response:
I experienced the same thing with college friends as well. Soon after graduation we all just drifted apart. Now we're pretty much strangers and it makes me sad sometimes. In the end though those who are for you will still be around for the long haul! <333
Date: Mar 20, 2015 12:06 am Title: Watching Eyes And Baby Cries
Im totally obsessed with him & Mar like i hope they get together!
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2015 11:51 pm Title: Heart Of Gold
I'm in love and I think going between the time periods is fine because you distinctly talk about something so its not hard to follow & btw your grammar & spelling are on point. Nothing better than reading a well written story haha great job
Author's Response:
Lol. Thank you. I'm more than sure inhave a few slip ups in there. I'm glad it's not confusing. <333
Date: Mar 19, 2015 11:40 pm Title: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative
With all my heart love." So freaking cute. Michael and his daughters interaction was so cute, I cant stand it haha I love this story already
Author's Response:
Michael and Baylee's relationship you'll see is completely adorable!! I'm glad you're loving it already!
Date: Mar 19, 2015 11:32 pm Title: The Interview...
Loving the start of this, interested in seeing what happens next!
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story!!! :)) <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 10:33 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
*big sigh BC I don't even know where to start with this review*
okay. As always, I love bee and Mars relationship. ITS SO CUTE.
michael said that he needs to protect his girls, his family.THIS MAKES ME VERY HAPPY.
HE SAID HE IS IN LOVE WITH HER. AHHHH. SO MUCH SWEETNESS!!
now I do think Mars has a right to know about Ria. The important stuff anyways. She is involved and her life is at risk right now, even if they aren't sure who the earrings were from. I understand them both wanton to forget it but this is something too important to ignore or water down. Michael should tell her, it's gonna be hard for him but I imagine he will understand her point and give her the important stuff. I hope so at least!,
Author's Response:
Yup. He finally said it. Up till now they had not really said they lived each other and leave it up to Michael to take the first plunge. Her and Michael have a great deal to talk about. From Ria to Baylee! So much more in store. <333
Date: Mar 17, 2015 06:20 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Marley and Michael are just so cute! Great update!
Author's Response:
Aren't they adorable!?!?! They just mesh. More soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 12:36 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Keeps getting better and better :))
Author's Response:
Thank you!! More to come soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 11:24 am Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
More!!!!! Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you hun!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 11:15 am Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
OMG!!! Michael melts me with how he treats Marley (except for scaring her to death lol luckily she's no ninja assassin). She totally has a right to know what happened and I hope Michael is completely open about it.
"my baby's growing up" fake sniff and invisible tear... *melts into a puddle*
Girl this chapter makes up for how you left me feeling with Inked!
<3
Author's Response:
I love Michael and Marley too. They make my teeth ache their so sweet. Michael scared the shit out of her. I can see him doing that in real life with his cheeky Ass. You have to forgive me for Inked!! Lol. Where you been girl. Jonesin for your stories!!!! <333