[Report This]Date: May 21, 2015 06:07 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Girl, I'm right there with you. I've been super slacking on my updates! But it brightened my day to see this one!!
Michael talking to Mikey Jr... LMAO!!! God, that sex scene was so hot! I love, love, love the chemistry between Michael and Ria!! I will hate to see this couple go!!!
Kenny... damn somebody put this nut in an insane asylum already!! Damn!! He killed his own dad like that. He was bold for real!!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. I was giggling when I wrote that. He is something else. The Lovin with these two is always fun to write. It's not good and done till I feel shocked at myself. Lmaooooo
As for Mr Kenny he's lost all semblance of sanity for real this time. There's no going back now. <333
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2015 06:58 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Michael and Ria
They make me so happy for so many reasons. They're so beautiful together and in love and I just love it! It's inspirational and sad because I know where it goes, and I'm gonna be a mess for the rest of my life.
Now, Kenny's out here killin folks. This is like Voldemort's first kill. We know this dude isn't done.
This is what I'm feeling right now. Young Kenny is just getting started. 
That's all I'm seeing, Tut! I think this dude is just ready to kill and he doesn't give a damn. His dad already happened, and I just see him being a serial killer. Maybe I'm thinking too much, but I see it!
I'm done being a dork.
But! That was an awesome chapter. It feels like my favorite show has ended and now I have to rely on my other favorites though :( *leaves to reread Inked for the 5th time until you update again*
Author's Response:
Michael and Ria are adorable. A match made in heaven. The outcome is heartbreaking. He was never meant to have her forever. :((( I have to think up something new for you guys!! <333
Date: May 20, 2015 06:38 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Kenny is just Sick! He should have never been let out of prison. I guess his dad really did more harm to him than good. Following Micharl and Ria!!! Doing the same to !ichael and Marley.
Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Yup Kenny is escalating big time. He's broken and seeing Michael and Ria together finally pushed him over the edge. <333
Date: May 20, 2015 06:15 pm Title: The Interview...
It's ok! Read my two stories; they are called 'neighbors becoming lovers' and 'do you really love?'
Author's Response:
I'll check them out when I get the time. :) <333
Date: May 20, 2015 05:44 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Ooo the suspense is killing me! Also, I thought you said all the Ria chapters are even chapters and it's an odd chapter, just wondering?
Author's Response:
Ahhh my bad they are odds. Sorry about that. <333
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 10:35 pm Title: Boxed In
I really hate canton.. can that be my review??? Lol. no but really, I don't like him ;-;
i think I may have been wrong in one of my theories.. I hate to assume bc I know I could be wrong, which I think I have been with the canton & Kenny connection. I don't know anymore.. & Im not quite sure how that makes me feel e__e
lol I feel like things are just beginning. I can't imagine what happens now with Kenny going to New York. I'm pretty sure if he actually sees Ria it won't be good. like.. he'll either get turned down and that's why he gets even more psycho.. or he just scares Ria with his presence. i don't know man... things are getting weird & crazy, I love it! lol
Author's Response:
You're right about that. Things are just beginning both in the present and in the past. I love your thoeries. Keep Em coming bb!! Muhahahahaha. Wait till you read this next chapter!! <333
Date: May 15, 2015 08:54 pm Title: The Give That Takes
I was waiting on spins and needles to see what would unfold between Rhoda and Michael with Ria wedged into the equation. She pregnant? Yea, right! These crazy heifers always pull that game when desperately want a man! She is lying! Sorry I don't believe that! I would be shocked if she is! I now Ria will be there, but that will make Ria and Mike's new found relationship complicated! Believe, I have been there.
Author's Response:
Lol you'll see what comes of it. She did try very hard to make that pregnancy happen. It might just be for real. Read on love you'll get it!! <333
Date: May 15, 2015 08:27 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
Ria was murdered by Kenny? My God! His jealousy must have turned into hatred then to murder! And now he's dead! Funny, something tells me that he faked his death and now it taunting Michael and Marley for more revenge! I hope they get to bottom of it because poor Michael--Barley and Marley have had enough of this mess!
Author's Response:
Yessss girl!!! I told you would be in for something with Mr Kenneth. As the story unfolds you'll see it all come to life!! <333
Date: May 15, 2015 08:10 pm Title: It's Understood
The moment we have been waiting for...the reunion! It was beautiful and very emotionally. I can feel the love Ria and Michael shared as they were apart. I loved how you wrote it. I'm just a little petrified with Rhoda showing up. Oh, boy!
Date: May 15, 2015 07:43 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
Great chapter, honey! I love how the last chapter somewhat interwoven with this one. I thought in this chapter we will get bits of the reunion between Ria and Michael, but to no avail just dinner with Marley.
I really was hoping Marley and Michael would be able to consummate their new relationship. What a major cock-block Bee is lol!
Now to the shocker, the contents that was in the box! Earrings that belonged to Kamaria! Who sent these? Why were they sent to Marley? I know had to be heartbreaking to Michael to see those again, and it must have really made Marley feeling horrible knowing that they belonged to his deceased ex-wife.
Author's Response:
I try and put at least one link from the past to th present. Sometimes it's subtle with a song or more in your face with a scenario. Thank you for catching that!! Yesss now you know what's in the box!!! lol <333
Date: May 13, 2015 06:23 pm Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
Ouch! It was pretty excruciating reading the part where Michael had to be upfront with Rhoda. Well, at least he was upfront about it, a bit cold but upfront. It's understandable that he feels this way because his heart is with someone else. However, fate had other plans and Ria popped up! I loved Michael's reaction and it was well written! I wonder how things are with Kenny. Hope he got his life together!
Author's Response:
Yes it was painful to hear on Rhoda's side. It had to be said though. He didn't love her and she wasn't trying to here him. He felt being as blunt as possible would leave no more room for her to wonder. You're in for something else with Kenny. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2015 02:52 pm Title: Boxed In
Cantaloupe is an asshole.
Michael needs to be open with Marley before he loses her. "...And don't let this one die on your watch..." bitch! I wanted to slap him for that. My eyes widened when I read that. That was really messed up on so many levels. Canton is a little pussywipped and he hasn't even sniffed the panties, let alone kiss her right? Lawd, this nigga needs HELP. Just like Kenny, makes you want to bust him in the face.... like forreal.
So I love this, so much. You are now added to my favorite authors and this (along with inked) is added to my favorite stories.
Update soon, please!!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooooo Cantaloupe!!!! DEAD. You're right though he's a big water head ass. He was just putting his salty ass where it don't belong. That little stament did get to Michael though because he still feels guilty he couldn't protect Ria.
Awe thank you for adding me!! I'll update ASAP!! <333
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2015 02:36 pm Title: Finally Found Out
When your friends want to go out for Cold Stone Ice Cream after school and you're the only one with your license but you want to go home and finish your reading but you don't wanna disappoint them so you lie and say that y'all can't sit down and eat cuz you have to hurry up and go home to do chores, lmao. I loved the chapter! Kenny is CRAZY. And Rhoda's big mouth... i was very close to calling her Roach. She's started some stuff now. Smh.
YAY at Ria telling Michael.... if only he'll do the same for Marly... I'm still with #Michaely.
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo. I can't believe you rushed your peeps out of Coldstone!! I'm honored tbqh!!! Rhoda doesn't even know what her blabbing started. She's let go of everything in NUC and that suites everyone just fine. <333
Date: May 13, 2015 12:51 pm Title: Looking Back And Moving Forward
Marley and Michael are just an awesome couple! And I'm curious like everyone else to know what's in that box?
Author's Response:
Marley and Michael are great together!!! The box. Lol dun dun dun!! <333
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2015 09:43 am Title: Divinity In Motion
Kenny is crazy as hell. But I want to know more pertaining to him.
Sadly I can't read anymore right now. Algebra 2 needs my attention. Ugh.
I'll be continuing soon though! (When I get out of school at 3:45, oh how these hours seem so long now.) Loved this chapter too, btw!