[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 09:29 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
So Rhoda finally came to her senses. Wasn't not obvious that he did love you like you wished he did. I guess not then. She was hell bent on having him and making him love her to the point she pokes a hole in the consumer just to have a damn baby. So crazy ex shit there for ya, lol.
But I am sad that she lost the baby die to the car wreck she was in. I know Michael was relieved but also sad at the dame time. Things happen for a reason, right?
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 09:07 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Honestly, I think Marley needs to know about Ria. I mean, homegirl is being watched and shit now and it's possible what happened to Ria could happen to her. So it's only right that she knows. He can't keep it to himself forever.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 08:45 pm Title: The Give That Takes
I could really really really really really really......fuck Rhoda up like sum serious. This girl is INSANE. INSAAANE!!!!!! And a list too. But just not about the baby tho. Lord this is some crazy ass shit that I'm so hooked on. She would say some shit as to have Mike leave Ria if nit the baby goes. Heartless is what exactly she is.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 08:26 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
Girl, i feel like I'm watching CSI or something mixed with a lil romance in it.
I know for a fact that Kenny was in on Ria's death. But he wasn't alone which makes me put two and two together. If the killer supposedly 'died' in a blow up or whatever it was, that means Kenny was never in the car. His father was which is the cause of his father's death in the first place. So really, Kenny has gotten away with murder and is the one who sent those damn earrings to Marley. He his the one who took Ria's life. And it's obvious that he did it because he was jealous, Michael married and had a child with her, and as like those psychotic exes say, "If I can't have her, then no one will" so they kill the girl. I bet that's what it is.
Girl I'm too in love with this. I love all of your stories that you have written but hands down, this one is the top best of them all. It's different with mystery, suspense and drama and crime. I love it. If you decide one day, and I'm suggesting, you should consider turning this into your very own book. It's too good to be on this site. I'm pretty sure everyone who's reading this would agree.
If you do, please mail me a copy. I'll give you my address. Lol:)
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 07:58 pm Title: It's Understood
Well, I guess they ain't gonna never get to what really went on in their lives with Kenny and Rhoda.....Just yet. I can wait fir the reactions of both people.
But damn, Michael couldn't hold his sausage in the pack any longer, eh?? Well, they are in love so what they heck!!!
And two words....Oh fuck!!!!! Rhoda is at the door.
Author's Response:
Oh Ria will Know about Rhoda soon enough. Lol and Kenny will come later! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 07:35 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
Love their date. So sweet and serene. Gah!!! :):)
But they was about to getit on I see in the bedrooooom!!!! Too bad Baylee had a bad dream. But at least Marley got the feels of the hands a mouth and tongue on her skin. Something better than nothing right?
And now the shit has really hit the fan foreal. Those earrings were worn when Ria died?!?!?!? And were never found!!?!? Oh lord. Secrets I tell you.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 06:24 pm Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
"Reunited and it feels so gooood!" That's all I can think of to sing at this very moment. God I happy they reunited and of course, it didn't start on a bad note either. Ria, you was just being nervous girl. But to see Michael smiling again and her smiling again made me or. Those were genuine smiles after so long of not seeing each other.
I'm just curious as to how Michael is going to react to what happen between Ria and Kenny. Also, if he's gonna tell her about him and Rhoda.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Looking Back And Moving Forward
Next chapter is my last and I'm going to eat.
But damn, Michael had to come in and ruin everything. I want to know what the hell his in that damn box behind the tissue shit. Hell!!!! Damn you Mike!!! :p
Date night has come and I can't wait to know how its gonna go .....And possibly end ;)
Now I have seriously came to a stop a just 'feeling things could be Kenny' hell it is him and he out to haunt Michael and Marley because he still jealous. There ain't no doubt that it's not Kenny coming back to screw shit up.
Author's Response:
Lmaooooooo. You don't know how happy it makes me you're so into the story you have to schedule your eating!!!! Lolllllll <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 05:40 pm Title: Hurt In The Lost And Found Of My Mind
Girl, idek how many reviews I written by now but idc, I am hooked and can't stop reading. I didn't even eat cause I'm so hooked. Well I'm take a break and eat then finish reading later.
AnywaAnyway, I'm so happy she got away from Gary for good. She needed too cause all that place carry now is bad memories. Now that she's in the A-town, she's doing much better and well for herself and enjoying her job.
As for Michael, it seem like his wish is about to come true. But Rhoda is really driving me with this wifey crap. No, he is not going to marry you. Are just a filler and another notch in his damn belts get a hold of yourself.
I can't wait for them to cross paths. Lord, how is that gonna go.
Author's Response:
I'm grateful for each and every one of you're reviews trust me on that!!!! Thank you so much!!<333
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 05:17 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
Awww they are giving themself a chance at a relationship. It's only right that she tells Steven and not lead him on any further. But anyway, I'm so happy now. Baylee can now have the 'mother' she always needed.
And I feel this package is from that 'homeless guy'.
Author's Response:
They won't tell Bay right away though. They have to make sure everything is right before they tell her so her hopes aren't too high just in case. <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 04:53 pm Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
Omg!!!!!# Kenny is beating on Ria. Giiirrl, if it was me, his ass would be in a casket by now.
And Michael finally gave in to Rhoda and started dating. Baby, she has one agenda in mind and that to be a gold digging wife. FOH!!!!
I'm glad Mike is smart in this relationship with her cause God knows if he ever decided to marry her, he was gonna be in some deep shit.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 04:31 pm Title: The Officer Or The Gentleman?
Awww, the officer asked her out for coffee and then a.date how cure. She needed tho, although I wish it was Michael who asked. But it's cool how they had mutual friends. Hmm.
Finally, Michael kisses her. FI-NAL-LY!!!!! You fight for he Michael. That's what you do. Lol.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 03:33 pm Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
I figured that Ria and Kenny were going to get together being that Michael was away. It was bound to happen and Kenny ass was so happy to seen him go. Is he really that sad and pathetic and desperate to really do some shit like that? I understand he was there to comfort her and Michael wasn't there to do it for Her but geez Kenny, you are one desperate mofo.
II just felt sorry for Mike tho, because he came back hoping to finish where they had left off. He stilled lovers her so but she was with Kenny and on top of it, lost her virginity to him too. Wow, Ria. I guess the only thing was to do was run away and Michael did. He just couldn't handle the pain in his heart. Poor baby.
Author's Response:
Yeah his heart was broken so he felt he nothing else to do but run away. He thought he left her in good hands at least but...<333
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 03:08 pm Title: Scattered Daises
Michael and Marley are so cute when they are alone. But her slip up when she said you're so fine, I burst out laughing my ass of. That was too funny to me and cute all at the same time.
But why do I feel like, the 'homeless man' that's been following her is Kenny. I mean, he said "Michael sure does know how to pick em." Something is telling me it's him that broke into her apartment.
And that Amy chick, I'm starting to not like her already and she's not even relevant right now, lol. Jealous w(b)itch.
Girl, this is getting GOOD!!! :):)
Author's Response:
You don't have to worry about that Amy chick at all!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 02:44 pm Title: Broken Promises
I'm so happy for Mike. He got into the college he always wanted to go to, but it's in England. Well, ya gotta do what ya gotta do to make it in life and achieve your goals. Even if it means leaving your love ones behind. Although I could be hard and take a toll on everyone.
I'm surprised that Kenny was happy instead and not Ria which is very understanding. It juat broke poor Michael's heart to see her so upset about him leaving.
I'm just happy that they made up and spend time together before his leave but damn, did things have to change so much that they all had to lose contact so fast. I guess that's just apart of life right.
Btw, sorry I haven't been reviewing. I didn't forget about this story. It's saved as a bookmark on my tablet
Author's Response:
Yeah Kenny was happy because now he could have Ria to himself. His grudge against Michael had been brewing in these times. It's all good. I saw that you caught all the way up!!;) <333