Date: Jul 06, 2015 12:52 am Title: When A Stranger Calls
I don't think she forgave him too easily, she made her point and Michael knows now not to ever keep anything like that from her again, especially when it could potentionally cost her safety! Plus, they need to be on one accord to deal with psycho Kenny.
Kenny is really a creep. He kept Ria's heart? Someone put him in the nearest insane asylum.
And I do think it's best to turn the case over to some new detectives, Canton has too many personal feelings and it's getting in the way of the story.
I also get the feeling that Ria kept it a secret....
Please update soon :)
Author's Response:
Yup Michael has learned a hard lesson with keeping things this pertinent from Marley. Especially since one of her what ifs came true because Kenny was all up in their space. He did keep her heart and he deserves to be under the jail. Canton's dislike for Michael is beginning to out weigh his like for Marley so it's time to move on from them. I'll update as soon as I can<333
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2015 10:15 pm Title: When A Stranger Calls
So wait is Bayley Michael's baby or Kenny or is it all in his psycho mind? Also I really hope this psychopathic delusional idiot doesn't tries to kidnap her.
Author's Response:
Some light will be shed on why Kenny thinks Baylee is his in the next chapter. Anything is possible with Kenny. If it gets him what he wants he'll do it. So we can't rule out any craziness. <333
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2015 09:15 pm Title: When A Stranger Calls
I have too many thoughts right now. I understand Michael. I understand why he'd want to protect her and keep her from all of this. He lost Ria, and he just doesn't want to repeat that now. I fully understand.
I understand Marley too. That was pretty big to keep to himself, so if she's upset she has a legit reason. Michael's just freaking out and he has the right to. An old asshole enemy is back, and he knows what the hell could happen to him and his family.
I'm just glad they're ok right now. They have to get through this together, damn it! Kenny has to die already
Like I said, let me get in here and beat his ass. RKO, body slam, spear, round house kick, sweet chin music, and every wrestling move i know. Let me do that to him!
This asshole mothafucka thinking they made love. Y'all didn't do shit. You raped her, and now your ass is thinking it was love? Get the fuck outta here and take your fucked up views with you. This bastard has me heated. I can't stand his ass.
All I know is, I'm gonna be like
And then you and I are gonna be like this with vegan burgers
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo. First of all I'm dying at that Peralta gif. I love me some Brooklyn 99.
Youre right both Michael and Marley have valid points. Michael just went about his in a way where it could have and almost did put her in danger. Kenny is playing nothing but games and he's serious as hell about winning. They can't be too safe. Kenny in due time will reap what he sees and I'll make sure you are a part of it all!! <333
Date: Jul 05, 2015 08:06 pm Title: When A Stranger Calls
Oh my :((( The heart thief?? Menen why?!?! We knew he wads sick but this... Girl you got me hangin off of a cliff with this story, the tale you weave so sporadic but so well put together. Is it gonna end and then we find out that this is just one of Michael's movies?? I don't know if I could handle that ... but girl you are killer amazing!!!
Update soon please, and I also finally updated The Songstress if you wanna take a peep!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Don't worry my dear. This won't be a movie unfortunately it's really happening to them. Things will get more intense before they get better. So just hang in there with me. You won't be disappointed.
And yesssss I'm headed over to The Songstress now!! I saw it earlier and got exited. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2015 07:54 pm Title: When A Stranger Calls
See, Michael, your ass should have told her from the get go. This is involving her too, y'know. Her life is on the line here.
I'm glad they made up and everything, I wanted them too but I wish Mar could have let him suffer.Just a bit for hiding something So important like that. Lol. Call me cruel but it's the truth. He she earn her forgiveness.
Now, for Kenny to call these people playing that damn song. I felt like I was watching Jeepers Creepers when the lady plays the song from the phonogram or whatever the hell it is. It was creepy yet funny. I laughed for some strange reason. Just goofy I guess. Lmbo!!
And yes Michael, you're right. It is Kenny satanic, psychopathic, insane, ballistic, evil and every other synonym ass. It is HE!!!!!!!!! You ain't crazy baby. He was just smart at the time of Ria's death and he lived but to you he died but he is alive and more crazier.
And I think they may need new detectives being that Canton can't contain his damn feelings trying to break up Mar and Michael.
This is just....wow!!!!
More soon, love :)
Author's Response:
You're right she should have let him suffer a bit more but chile with what's to come they both need to be in it together. It was a big deal but she still trusts him. He made a big mistake and he's going to have to show and prove like you said. They will know for sure soon that it is indeed Kenny that's stalking them. You'll see how that comes about in upcoming chapters. It will be intense so hang in there with me!! <333
Date: Jul 05, 2015 07:31 pm Title: When A Stranger Calls
Woah, this is really getting intense now! Is it true that he has Ria's heart in the freezer?! That's fucking crazy! I'm also wondering if Baylee is really his kid? A whole lot of drama coming!! Continue please!!
Author's Response:
Yup it's true. He does have her heart. She was missing a few things when she was found and that was one of the things. We will find out in the upcoming chapters about who Baylee really belongs to. More to come Bb just hold on with me!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2015 07:12 pm Title: When A Stranger Calls
Can I just say that the whole Marley and Michael scene about not losing each other has me in my feelings? I have the feels Tut and you did this. They are so cute together. Btw im sorry I haven't been revieweing. With working and stuff I find it hard to have time to read and update my own stories but girrrrl I'm back and I'll try and be more consistent.
I think Mars forgiveness was expected, she loves him. I just hope Michael is more open and honest and not try and hide things and lie. Its not good for him. Actions speak louder than words right? So we will definitely see.
Kenny is... God he's... i dont even know!
Loved the chapter though girl.
Author's Response:
It's all good BB. Read when you can. I'm just glad you're still enjoying the story!! Michael will have to tell it all now. Things are going to be heating up now with the new revelations.
Kenny is...is right lol. He's a price of work!!<333
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2015 12:17 pm Title: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)
I'm amazed. Take into account you're a kind of god in this story; take us whatever you want to do. Too bad Ria and Michael are reaching an end. Update soon Ms.
Thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. In a way yes Third person gives you a birds eye view of the story so you know what everyone is thinking and feeling all in the same go. And thank you again. Welcome to the story!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2015 08:05 pm Title: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)
Yesss!!! They got married on his birthday in the last chapter. Well, Michael prospered on his speacial day. So happy they took that step in their relationship. I was waiting for it to happen, lol. No they trying to make some Mike and Ria juniors now. I bet that sex is heaven if they doing it every part of the damn day.
Now to Kenny. He bumped into her and for a moment she thought she recognized him but thought it was all in her head. No Ria, you was spot on. Small things that belonged to her and Michael start to disappear out of no where and be watched by watchful eyes??? Creeepyyy!!!!
And now she's going to interview this guy, and I knew from the moment on that it was going to be his psychotic ass in the room. He put something in that water to make her black out so he could..imo, rape her. That's exactly what it is.
This is getting dark and crazy and I love it. And imo, I don't think it's becoming to much...as in on the dark side. You're doing a really great job at writing this suspenseful and mysterious story. I love every bit of it. It's like I'm watching a movie while reading. Keep it the way you have written it to be. It's amazing.
More soon !!! :):)
Author's Response:
Ahhhhh yayyyyy you caught up. I'm glad you like it all so far. There is a lot more to come.
Michael proposed on his birthday but they didn't get married till a few months later. But they fit so well into married life. Everything was bliss till Kenny reared his ugly head. He did spike the water but you'll find out more about that next Michael and Ria chapter. Next will be Michael explaining himself to Marley.
Thank you so much for your encouraging words BB <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2015 07:38 pm Title: Unintentional Lies
Awww Marley Mar felt avoided. But Mike should have never let those words Steven said get to him. For him to say such things as if he knows Michael 300% when he doesn't. Smh.
Glad that all was forgiven between the two of them tho. (Mar and Mike) .
But that old man, I wouldn't be surprised if it was Kenny stalkerish ass at the door. Anything is possible.
I just wish Michael could have told Marley about the new package he received at his office instead of keeping it to himself. She deserves to know being that all of this surrounds her as well. But Steven should have kept his damn mouth closed. He knew what he was doing. Pathetic.
And now so much for coming him for poon. Michael has alot of EXPLAINING to do now. He might as well get to it now.
Author's Response:
He has a very deep hole he has to climb out of for sure. Buy keeping that from her he put her in danger. The opposite of what he wanted to do.<333
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2015 07:18 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Wooooooow I was so wrong about Kenny's dad from the beginning. I swore I though he help Kenny with Ria's death but I was utterly wrong. Lmao!!!! :):):)
But damn, Kenny has gone stone insane. His first homicide which of course will NOT be his last. He is smart to use gloves cause if not his ass would be locked up for good. Damn.
And Mike and Ria are so cute, the love making his hot in a more sweet sensual way.
Do I'm taking that Rhoda spilled the beans???? Cause I can't see anywhere else how Kenny would know about them.
Author's Response:
Kenny picked up a lot of things when he was locked up. He was with criminally insane folks so you know he's going to be sinister af!!! Kenny made a little side trip to New York remember he found Ria and saw her and Michael kissing in the street on one of the days he was stalking her. That's how he knew her and Michael where together. That's what sent him further over the edge and had him murder his father. Rhoda didn't tell him much of anything at all. <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2015 06:53 pm Title: Boxed In
Omg!!!!! Michael it is him. That averaged ain't dead. He tools you and everyone else good. He's alive and more crazier than ever.
Now I knew Steven didn't like Michael From the get go after being rejected by Marley, but dang, is you that bitter to treat a man like that just because of one's feelings that had for them way before you stepped into the picture??? Just pitful foreal.
He just needs to do is fucking job and not worry about michael and Marley. Try to help the man figure out whom is behind all of this instead of his personal relationship with a woman You can't have.
But Michael, don't feel bad. You are not putting Marley and your daughter in danger. You can't help the fact that some lunatic (kenny) is jealous of you and trying to destroy any happiness that you have that he don't have. It is not your fault. Fight for them baby boy.
Girl this is too good. I'm sure I said than many times before but oh well. Can't help it :):)
Author's Response:
Lol I love how deep you get into the story. I'll tell you you have made some good calls on your hunches so far. Up top with that high five bb!!! Lol. Michael let Cantons words get to him and instead of proving him wrong like he is he messed up and did the opposite. Things will have to be put in place to right his wrong. <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Finally Found Out
So I finally got to see what it was like in Kenny's world and what made him become he man he is. Smh, did he really have to do and treat Ria that way all because of his father. I mean, yes some of it was because he was drunk or high or whatever but still.
I'm very surprised to see Rhoda again. I swear when she saw Kenny and Ria on the magazine, I though she was gonna tell him where Ria was. Giiiirl, you should have saw me over here holding my breath. Lol.
And finally Ria spills the beans to Michael. She needed to tho being that th more she keeps it to herself the more she would continue to be afraid of any gestures Michael would give and would never be relieved from that. It was best to get it out and let go.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 09:59 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
Yassssss, they made love without any interruptions this time. Go Mike and Mar!!!!! But the foreplay was killin me. Tuuuuut!!! ;)
I hope they get around the time to tell Baylee about them soon.
Now....wtaf is Kenny planning next??? Only time would tell with his jealous crazy ass.
Will continue reading tomorrow after driver's ed.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 09:52 pm Title: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)
Oh my God. I got a chill from this chapter! Ugh it was so good!!!!! I knew Kenny was the guy that bumped into her. His ole crazy ass. I definitely would like you to keep it this way. It'll be a good balance for the good that's coming for Michael and Marley. They do have good coming, right? :D
Author's Response:
Ahh I'm glad you liked it Brie!!! :)) There will definitely be balance of dark and light and everything in between. I can say that much. <333