[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 11:39 pm Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
Yayyyy they are together. But I feel sorry for Steven. I can't wait to read more and i will later :)
Author's Response:
Don't feel too sorry for Steven just yet. So much more in the horizon!! Read on bb!! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 11:28 pm Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
Oh wow this story is really good. I am so hooked on it that I don't want to work on the story that I started on here. There is a saying. if you can't have the one that you love, then love who your with
Author's Response:
I appreciate you're reading and enjoying he story. I'm thankful for Your thoughts and feedback. Don't give up on your story. I'm going to read it!! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 11:17 pm Title: The Officer Or The Gentleman?
Oh yesss I've been waiting forever for them to kiss XD
Author's Response:
Yessss finally. Now they kinda know how each one feels. Good things to come! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 11:05 pm Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
Poor mike. his is so in love with her and she loves him too but she doesn't want to hurt Kenny, who was there for her when she needed him most. Oh man what a mess :(
Author's Response:
Yup things are a mess right now and they're gearing up to get even messier. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 10:52 pm Title: Scattered Daises
Awww poor Marley that sucks that somebody broke into her place like that. And Amy might as well give up as its quite obvious where Mike's heart is
Author's Response:
You don't even have to worry about Amy. She's just jealous but she knows her place. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 09:38 pm Title: Secrets So Untold...
First off I have to apologize to you bby because I took so long to read these updates ;__; forgive me, please!
Now to the chapters. I knew it was Kenny!!!! I knew Canton was Kenny and Kenny was Canton, I freaking knew it e____e that dude is completely sick! Now he's got another death on his hands and he better not get anymore e.e especially Baylee's life. That crazy bitch better leave her out of it.
Also! I'm guessing, believing, and praying that Bay is actually Michael's. I refuse to believe different. do not break my heart please.
I'm glad they are gone right now, they know better than to trust kenny's crazy ass any longer and im proud of them for moving on that so fast though I doubt they are safe :( I'm sure Kenny has a way to find them there, if he doesn't already know where they are. He really needs a life. I mean, I felt bad for him when we first found out his story and his beef with Mike but there are limits. You already killed the mans wife, stole her heart which your crazy ass still holds on to, just let him be happy now! Move on with shit. Turn yourself in and admit yourself to a mental hospital because you need it!
Author's Response:
Awe is all good BB. I told Teddy to tell you not to abandon me cause I would find you in these streets. Lmaoooo.
You where one of the people who kept the thought that Kenny and Steven were one. You were right and now we will get to see how he made the transition in the next chapter. It's best for them to be gone and they are safe for the moment where they are. No one knows where they are because they told nobody. More on that will be revealed in the next Michael and Marely Chapter. Turning himself in isn't Kenny's style. He loves the game too much! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 12:41 pm Title: Secrets So Untold...
OMFG!! So Kenny was Officer Canton?!?! And he gets even creepier!!! No doubt Hicks is dead. That psycho probably shot him point blank. Please don't let him kill Michael though... I just have this bad feeling how this is going to end. So sad when Michael told the story of Ria and what happened with Kenny. Her last words almost had me tearing up!!
More soon. I better grab my box of tissues and glass of wine.
BTW Marley and Michael need to leave the country!!
Author's Response:
Yup it was him after all. I know he have a big hint early on in the story. Had to keep the mystery going for a little longer. Lol. We will see if he did kill Hicks soon. It was very sad when he spoke of Ria and Kenny. "My poor babies." I was a little verclempt myself writing that. Thank you for always sharing with me!! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 10:28 pm Title: Secrets So Untold...
Excellent work as usual captain. I see strings are being tied and we're finally getting down to the nit grit.
Update soon love!
Author's Response:
Yup the dots are connecting but we're not to the end just yet. Hang in there the bumpy part of the ride for Mike and Mar have yet to come. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Broken Promises
I enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad that they admitted to the love that they felt for each other
Author's Response:
It was about time wasn't it? Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 05:57 pm Title: Secrets So Untold...
OOh shit!!!! So Steven and Kenny partners now??? Wtf is going on!?!?!? Girl you and these surprises. I'm shocked. Too shocked. So Steven is helping Kenny now!?!?
Where is Jesus when you need him??? I need Jesus for this, lol.
But I'm a little upset for them that they couldn't get new officers for their case and all that's going on. But it seems like there won't be no Hicks and Canton. I hope he didn't kill the man and just knocked him out instead.
And for Michael to finally open up to Marley about Kenny and Ria and her death. I know it was a lot to let out. I really think it would help him being that he hadn't told anyone and at least he would feel some sort of relief, right? To get that off his heart cause you can tell it was eating away at it.
But that ending..... it touched me.... :(:(:(
More soon girl!!! :)
Author's Response:
Kenny and Steven are one in the same. It's now been confirmed. If you remember in an earlier chapter Kenny remarked about having a new face and a new smile. He's been living as Steven since he faked his death. It was the safest place he felt he could be in. Hiding in plain sight. He has to now focus on cleaning up the Hicks mess since he didn't expect it to happen. Michael and Marley have a break from him for now.
The end was sad to write. When they where like come back soon and she was like my poor babies. It was so sad and a bit of foreshadowing like they knew it was the last time. :(((((
Ill have more soon bb! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 05:39 pm Title: Watching Eyes And Baby Cries
Its obvously that they are so into each other :)
Author's Response:
They were both holding back so much but it was obvious there were feelings there for sure! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 05:27 pm Title: Heart Of Gold
Your a great author. I think that i will add you to my favourites :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! I appreciate you saying that!! Much love! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 05:12 pm Title: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative
I love stories of Mike as a daddy. His the cutest daddy ever. And Baylee is adorable :)
Author's Response:
Daddy Michael is great and Baylee is such a little sweetheart. <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 05:03 pm Title: The Interview...
Well you have xaotured my attention. I like thia story so far and Mikey looks beyond amazing on tge cover :)
Author's Response:
Awe welcome to the story Hun. I hope you're prepared for the ride. It's a doozy!!! <333
Date: Aug 02, 2015 02:56 pm Title: Secrets So Untold...
Yay~ I always love seeing updates
And yes yes yes they should have moved out of town, at least they can create some space between themselves and kenny cause obviously he knows Michael's place inside and out. But for some reason I have a feeling this won't be the safe haven they hope'd it be.
Should've kept it to themselves...when it doubt always keep it to yourself...
And never too intense, but I watch alot of of crazy shit.. murder shows/48 hours/TWD/GOT so this is perfect! haha.
Can't wait for moreeeeeeee <3
Author's Response:
I'm glad it's not too overwhelming with sadness and craziness. Lol. I love crime shows too!!!
Leaving town was the best thing for them to do at this point. It will give them a break from Kenny's craziness. But you're right how long will the sanctuary last? <333