Date: Aug 19, 2015 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1: The Big Break
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Author's Response:
I recently had Skye re-do my last banner for me. If you could please ask her to do this one for me that would be great. Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2014 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 12: What The Future Holds
this story was beautiful keep the great stories coming
Author's Response:
You are very sweet. Thank you so much. It's readers like you that keep me going. Please be sure to read Struck By Dreams and Magical Enchantment as well! :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2014 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 12: What The Future Holds
Awwww! It ended too early,lol
Author's Response:
I KNOW! I feel like I rushed through it but only because my heart wasn't in it anymore. Please be sure to read my other story, Struck By Dreams!
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2014 05:40 am Title: Chapter 11: The Darkness of Truth
AAwww! I am loving your story!
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! Please be sure to check out Struck By Dreams as well. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2014 01:24 am Title: Chapter 9: The Disturbed Prowler
New reader
Date: Oct 30, 2014 07:50 am Title: Chapter 5: Letting The Guard Down
Finally, it's about time!!!
Michelle let Michael in!!
She really should have realized that she didn't have to put her entire life on hold for her sister a long time ago, but at least she finally did!!
Author's Response:
Yes, of course and it's better late than never! :)
Date: Oct 29, 2014 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning of Something Special
You know Michael's friend who is a painter for him mentioned Mike had a sensitive stomach but I never imagined it was to this level you mentioned here I just knew he had to keep his weight down since he was a dancer and dancers had to be lean..but do you think this food sensitivity could have had something to do with his lupus and the meds he might have had to take for it? because I read that depending on the medication a person could have a lack of appetite for fear of feeling queasy but not eating is also unhealthy too..so it's like a lose/lose situation
Author's Response:
I'm not entirely sure if his food sensitivity had anything to do with his medical conditions. That could have been a contributing factor in his life though. Personally, I think Michael developed a paranoia because of the abuse he suffered at an early age. His fear did not allow him to eat, speak or do anything clearly at times. It breaks my heart to know this but I hope and pray that wherever he is now, he is finally able to eat, sleep and breathe in peace.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2014 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Big Break
I love this! Your writing style is very fluid and you did an awesome job developing Michelle and Aria..I was actually glued to the computer screen the whole time. I'll be reading this!
Author's Response:
This is my FAVORITE review. I will definitely keep you in mind when I add more chapters. Thank you SO much! :)
Date: Oct 28, 2014 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: Behind Closed Doors
Oh no, what's gonna happen to Michael?
I wanna guy to be that sweet to me!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and don't worry - he'll be fine. ;) We ALL would love a guy to be that sweet to us! But one thing is for certain - NO ONE will ever be as sweet as Michael Jackson! :)
Date: Oct 28, 2014 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: Thinking Out Loud
Dang!!!! I want Michael to be that bothersome to me instead of Michelle!!
Oh, and did you know that in the song 'Thriller on the line, 'You see a sight that almost stops your heart, I always thought he said, 'You see a sight that almost stops you hard.
Hahaha, well leave it up to Michael to never able to make his words clearer!!
Author's Response:
LOL, indeed! I would love that much attention too - but only from him, of course. His lyrics can be a bit confusing at times, but the internet is always a great place to get clarity on what he says.
Date: Oct 28, 2014 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning of Something Special
So, did Michael really have that problem with foods?
Author's Response:
Yes, he did. Contrary to belief, Michael had food sensitivities but he did not have any type of eating disorder.
Date: Oct 21, 2014 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning of Something Special
Hahahahahahahahaa!!! Michael, that's not fair!!!
You can't just do that to her!!
I'll be back to read the next chapter tomorrow.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: Oct 21, 2014 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Big Break
This is going to be a reeeeeeally good story, I can feel it!!!
The only thing that I want to say is that your deilog between two or more people shouldn't be on the same line.
Other than that, it's reeeeeeally good!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
I usually separate dialogues in my stories however I think there may have been a formatting error when I entered it here. I will look into editing that.
Thank you for letting me know and I hope you enjoy the story moving forward. Your faith in believing this story will be good inspires me to continue writing.