I was so excited when I saw your story pop up! Then to read such a great chapter?! Please don't apologize about it being a "weak" chapter. It really isn't. I mean... I had to fight myself not to stop immediately and start my comment. There is just so much to say.  Michael's gift was....amazing. A book is waaaay better than a necklace. A book tells you the person listens to you and knows your interests. Well, a well chosen book does.

Harry needs to leave. He's too much. He's super lovey-dovey and yet he can't even remember her favorite book? SMH.

I can't wait for your next chapter! I'm on pins and needles waiting for something to happen between Julia and Michael. Do NOT let this story die. Seriously. That would make me sad.

I listened to Uptown Funk and it definitely reminds me of Jam! So don't worry, you're not going crazy haha! Or maybe all MJ fans are just going crazy, lol

But listen to this:

http://stagedoor.fm/2014/12/11/new-music-mark-ronson-bruno-mars-michael-jackson-uptown-jam-mashup/

It's a pretty cool mash-up!

And I can't wait for the next chapter! :) xxxx

Really enjoying this. I hate 'Silent' Readers too. The nerve to call on Valentine's Day!

'But the fact that he wanted to meet up again? Not possible. Out of this world. Dream Talk' 

I chuckled so hard at that! Loving it so far. 

Good chapter! I like it when Michael and Julia help each other out with their problems, instead of fighting and being the CAUSE of each other's problems. I think that their relationship makes more sense when the drama works that way. Just a'bit'a feedback! You're now on the right track in my opinion!! xx

Goodness i love these two, and I like a story  like this where the main characters build and build in their relationship rather than hopping right in with in the first few chapters. It adds to the plot and allows for things move at an easy, comfortable pace!

ANYWAY Michael lol. This guy is spruuuuung! Tryng to make Diana jealous with Jules. Meanwhile, I know Julia in seething deep deeo inside. She wont admit it, but I know she feels something somewhere inside her. Jules YOU aint fooling anybody u_u

I wonder if Diana believed the whole Gymnast thing lmaooo! A professional stylist AND Olympic winner, very creative Mike!

And that dancing scene—that was intense! Being body to body in ann nearly instinctual moment, I know elspecially for Mike. Had Julia weak i know *inserts smirk* Cute none the less.

In the recent chapter, you can see feelings creeping up on Julia. Love is a ninja seriously and it is about to attack ^_^

Your writing is so on point. I truly felt like i was in the book store with Mike and Julia. And I absolutely adore this chapter because it's almost nerdy and I love that. They're spending quality time while reading and I think reading is the best form of gaining knowledge and escaping reality. I love that you highlighted Michael's intelligence here. He indeed was a bright man and you were able to show it and display him as a normal, book loving human! I loved the momemt at the house/apartment—the sharing of litterature... I could just imagine M &J so clearly... UGH I just loved this chapter.

Great job again! Giiirl, I'm excited for the next chapter! I'll be here when you update!

Oh and P.S. I feel you on report writing. It takes me forever unless im interested in the topic ;__; Good luck!

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Hi :)

I red the latest chapters and your writing skills never stop to amaze me ^^ The pace of the story is perfect, there was nothing to rushed – don't worry xD

I knew it.

I had an idea since we first heard about in his flashbacks of that special woman...that it could be Diana. And I was right xD

And stories with Michael, Diana and Ocs involved...are pretty interesting, especially for the tension and possible drama/conflicts that the said situation creates ;)

Well, what can I say – I loved the way you combined Michaels confessions about Diana, with his memories of the things that happened between the two of them. It was a powerful way to give us a very real, captivating picture to our imagination.

Also the way you let Michael talk to Julia about his dark secrets and problems in his dizzy state...it makes clear that he only speaks about that when he is under influence of medicine/drugs. It was touching and sad in the same time.

And Michael, wanting Julia to be his adviser about his „relationship“ with Diana – brilliant :D Aw, poor Julia...kind of getting jealous ( even if she never would admit it ). I like the way were the things are going right now. It's so enthralling! ^^

I think we still have to be patient ( about Michael and Julia and their feelings for each other ) until now, poor Michael is way to much in love with Diana.

And I assume, it's not to easy for him to let her go – especially if she meant to him so much for so many years...

Beside your very believable representation of Michael and Diana, I think you put one aspect in the story, that I don't see too often in a MJ story:

It's difficult to describe, but your Michael doesn't seem like a saint – in a good way. I'm not referring to his sexual experience with Diana in this – but in general.

Very often – authors describe Michael as a very innocent, soo kind heartily, naive boy – like the image he gave the public so often. In that cases, he is all good and everything what's bad is from someone else fault and ONLY from someone else – Michael is always the victim of the bad world.
But your Michael very often behaves like a jerk himself. After all he sometimes IS a jerk to Julia and acts like a spoiled prat. And that's nothing bad. The contrary!

It makes him more human, I would say ^^

Because nobody is perfect, right xD We all have our good moments and times were we mess things up. He's no exception in this xD

I wasn't saying that other representations of Michael are wrong...it's fiction after all and everyone has his own preferences xD But I prefer to read about a more multilayered Michael, like in this case.
Not about Michael the pure angel or Michael the super bad-ass ( or often even a rapist – things that really scare the hell out of me O.o )

Like I said – your Michael seems to be very balanced with his funny, lightly moments, the complicated ones, the „jerk – moments“ and the dark, depressing ones. No matter which way you portray him – it's always wonderful to read :)

That reminds me – I really liked the last scene you wrote. You caught the magical atmosphere of a dancing Michael so well, and the thoughts and feelings of Julia in this very moment – perfect! *__*

When I read stories like this – I can “see“ and “hear“ everything clearly – you really make the characters alive. And that's something you only can do by writing everything with love and patience for the detail. Everyone can clearly „feel“ if the story means something important to an author, or not. The passion and effort, what a story reflects – doesn't come from nowhere ^^

Want to read the next chapter so badly! :D

Keep writing and have a nice day :)