Date: Jan 05, 2015 08:29 pm Title: Order & Chaos
If Nina only knew of the little talk that Michael had with his sister janet just a few seconds ago she wouldn't be thinking that.
Author's Response:
Right... will these two ever get on the same page?
Date: Jan 05, 2015 08:11 pm Title: Back Pains and Baby Fever
Uh oh.......
Could she be really having another baby when the twins aren't even a year old yet?
Date: Jan 05, 2015 07:20 pm Title: Trouble in Thailand
Damn!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2015 05:45 pm Title: Order & Chaos
Order and Chaos is the perfect fit for them. While Michael is Chaos on the outside when it comes to Nina and his feelings for her I feel like on the inside they're pretty much in order. Where as Nina is all Order on the outside but her inner turmoil spells Chaos. It's sad that Michael feels like he loves her more than she loves him because he is in it 100% It's a bit messed up if Nina is holding on to Marcus only as a fall back. More than a bit messed up actually. I wish she would get her shit together and decide what it is she actually wants. There may be irreparable damage done to the relationships if she doesn't :(
Her being pregnant again. It's so bitter sweet. It's cute to see Michael ecstatic about it but here is Nina again second guessing the whole thing. Yes they need to figure things out and if the idea is to fix their broken marriage then a baby shouldn't be seen as a hindrance. It's a blessing. I think Michael sees that. Nina Nina Nina. Chile. Janet gave him great advice tho and as for Jisela I agree with her partially.
I'm also glad she told him right away. I thought she was going to hide it from him.
More soon girl. Biting my nails here. Lol <333
ps I updated Cradle ;)
Author's Response:
That's a good way to describe their Order and Chaos. but yes! Nina needs to put her faith in her man, stop being afraid and dive head first all the way in it!! They should be able to be excited about this new baby not seeing it as another obstacle.
I will update soon!!
I read the new update for Cradle and I'm wanting MORE already!!
Date: Jan 05, 2015 04:17 pm Title: To Fix a Broken Husband
Michael's an animal.
She could be pregnant again for all they know as many times that they have had sex.
Date: Jan 05, 2015 03:56 pm Title: Soundproof Arguments
Oh boy....
Date: Jan 05, 2015 03:42 pm Title: Can't Let Go
This is just one big complicated mess, and things could get very nasty.
Date: Jan 05, 2015 03:20 pm Title: The Old Flame Still Burns
This is very tricky for everyone that's in this.
Date: Jan 05, 2015 03:06 pm Title: Interview with Michael Jackson's fiance
Damn, a little personal much?
This woman doesn't know how to fucking stop asking questions and she doesn't just ask one, she has to ask like about three in a damn row!!!
I mean, I ask just as many questions if not more but.....god...
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2015 05:59 am Title: Order & Chaos
i hope the 2 will get through their troubles i loved this chapter i look forward to reading more
Date: Jan 05, 2015 03:36 am Title: Order & Chaos
I agree with how Jilesa points out that Nina getting jealous of Michael and being more than just civil with Marcus and not expect for Michael to be jealous is a double-standard..I mean she didn't exactly do a good job putting her foot down with Marcus until that one time she ended the discussion sooner than he wanted
Date: Jan 04, 2015 10:03 pm Title: Order & Chaos
I don't entirely agree with Jisela, but I don't entirely disagree. There has to be a consequence for Michael's drinking. Be it rehab and/or couples therapy (with an individual counterpart for Michael), with an ultimatum if he doesn't complete either. Separation isn't a great alternative, but living in conflict and alcoholism isn't healthy for the kids. Love involves setting limits.
And Michael went above and beyond okay with what he did with the girl in Thailand. I'm just...blown away that Jisela would even hedge on defending/justifying such behavior. It's different when there is a kid involved between exes. She's definitely not a counselor. Now Janet? MUCH better.
Author's Response:
I agree with you. Michael is getting away with a lot right now, but at the same time its tricky because it's not like he drinks every day or even more than once a week and he's never been drunk around the children. And yeah he over did it with his little retalitory act with Mackenzie, but at the same time it would be totally unforgivable if he was doing that just because he could with no ulterior motive.
Nina has lied to him about Marcus, she keeps her phone conversations and letters private. To him its like she's hiding something and he just wanted to show her how it feels to be jealous.
It would be hard for them to get couples therapy because it could so easily slip out to the media. Also, Michael's too much of a private person to put his love life in a stranger's hands.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2015 10:40 am Title: Back Pains and Baby Fever
I agree with a couple of the other readers, I don't like Nina's attitude sometimes, even when Michael is trying she doesnt seem to appreciate or acknowledge his efforts much D; She still needs to figure out what she truly wants I think!
Since everything has moved so fast she's not really had a chance to adapt, maybe she's still learning how to deal or this is too much for her.
Aw I sure hope things get better for these two, Michael needs serious help with the drinking issue. If he quits altogether I don't think it'll be too good for him? Idk, and omg Nina might be pregnant! 0_0 Thats the last thing this couple needs but it's exactly what Michael wants haha
Great chapter honey update soon :*
Author's Response:
You guys are all right about Nina. Michael left behind Neverland for her and she has not really acknowledged that much. I believe this about the real Michael, that he was a people pleaser he did things to make others happy regardless of how he really feels. He wasn't thinking of himself at all when he cancelled his contract with the surogacy agency or with everything he's done for Nina since.
Date: Jan 03, 2015 06:45 pm Title: Back Pains and Baby Fever
I've notice that Michael is always apologizing to Nina for his behavior and should especially when he's being an drunk ass flirting with other women. But he also apologizes when he's just being child like lovable Michael he shouldn't have to apologize for being himself. But he does need to stop drinking like a fish its not cool.
On the other hand Nina doesn't apologize for being a bitch half the time and when she does she uses sex to get what she wants. Her attitude hasn't changed at all since the first story. She's always complaining about something Michael does and she never seems to be satisfied with what he does for her or gave up to be with her in Saint Louis. She seems very unhappy most of the time or in a bad mood. She expects so much from Michael but doesn't give as much as she expects from him. At times it comes across that she doesn't love Michael as much he loves her even though she tells him she does. I seriously think Nina needs to work on attitude and control issues cause its going to ruin her relationship with Michael. It would kill her to learn to compromise either.
Author's Response:
You're very right and I'm suprised you're the first one to really point that out. Michael does try a lot harder in their relationship with Nina and he gives his all. She's still holding back and isn't like 100% there with Michael. Its like half her heart and mind is somewhere else. It might take losing him for a while before she really recognizes his efforts.
Michael is still an inexperienced drinking he was only introduced to liquor after the first story started, he hasn't established his limits and he does it for the wrong reasons. Drinking alcohol is supposed to be for fun not used a crutch to escape your problems. He needs to learn that.
Thanks alot for your feedback!! <3
Date: Jan 03, 2015 02:27 pm Title: Soundproof Arguments
Why is Nina so against Michael drinking, even occasionally? In this stituation he shouldn't but other times when he's out or with his the guys she starts bitching at him.