[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2015 09:09 pm Title: Back Pains and Baby Fever
Poor Michael. But maybe he has learned his lesson now. Here hoping that he has and I think that Nina just might be pregnant again
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2015 08:58 pm Title: Trouble in Thailand
lol his is in trouble now. I think that he deserves a spanking coz he is very bad boy jk
Author's Response:
LOL there's going to be tons of times in this story where Michael needs a spank.
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2015 07:41 pm Title: Thailand
Hey Honey I think that your an amazing writer and I wanted to say congratulations on your award. I have finally found time to read your stories again in between school and writing myself. Anyway basta about that. It looks like Mike has finally accepted that Marcus ia going to have a role in Nina's life as Maddox's father. But we will see how long that will last
Author's Response:
Hey eazy! Thank you so much! I understand. I'm always so busy its hard to keep up with other stories while writing my own. I'll have to check yours out sometime soon!
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2015 10:02 am Title: The Prince has Arrived
YASSS!!! Prince is here and I know he is a gorgeous baby. The twins reacted exactly how I thought they would-they're jealous! Lol. Cute and probably should be expected. Maddox is loving this because he has the brother he always wanted and a playmate.
Now, Michael and Nina should definitely be happy, but these two have the nerve to even be fussing and fighting in the damn room for the birth! Ugh, I want to slap the both of them!
Michael's family has gotten on my last nerve, with their jealous asses!I'm sorry, but they are just rude and inconsiderate and Michael needs to be a grown man and get them together RIGHT NOW, NOT LATER! How dare he let them disrespect her on the day she's just given birth, while laying up in the hospital bed...hmmff!And, WHY is Joseph there? Oh, let me guess: Now that a SON has been born, he sees an opportunity for a NEW LITTLE MJ for him to groom...Jesus is Lord, because I...LOL
More please, more! Thank you as always! :)
Author's Response:
Yes! The girls are so jealous, I mean who wants a nasty little BROTHER hogging up daddy's attention - gross lol. Maddox will have a playmate, though he has a while to wait for Prince to be ready to play.
EXACTLY right about Joseph. He just wanted to lay eyes on the boy who could potential take on Michael's legacy. Michael's so wrong for ignoring his family's disrepect for Nina
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2015 05:40 pm Title: The Prince has Arrived
I wish she would've realized that Maddox doesn't need Marcus while he was still in jail. While he was still young and having Michael step in would've been prefect timing.
Author's Response:
That would have saved them aLOT of problems if she had.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2015 01:47 pm Title: The Prince has Arrived
great chapter looking forward to reading more
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: Sep 29, 2015 03:43 am Title: The Prince has Arrived
Great job writing the birth. I hate writing birth scenes. Will they hold it together for very long this time?
Author's Response:
Birth scenese are tough. It's hard to make them different and unique from those already out there. We'll see how long they hold it together
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 07:45 pm Title: The Prince has Arrived
No. No. No. A man can not invite anyone into a room where a woman has just given birth without her approval. He's repeatedly inconsiderate and selfish. Michael makes a pretty awesome parent, but as a spouse? He's just...striking out. :(
Author's Response:
Michael Jackson can! I don't think that it's that he's selfish it's just he has SOOO many things on his plate right now that his priorities aren't entirely in order. He's got #1 right which is his kids, but he's got Nina and her feelings near the bottom right now and he's not exactly aware that's what he's doing. Because she's so independent and doesn't need him by her every second of the day (and probaby would be annoyed if he was) its easy for him to forget.
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 07:37 pm Title: The Prince has Arrived
Rude asses. How the hell they couldn't utter an how'd you do or some shit!!! Ugh.
Michael is something else making all them false promises. I could just knock him over his damn head.
The family time together was so cute and Michael blubbering while cutting the cord is so him. Lol. I'm glad she's feeling more definitive about where she stands with Marcus. Of course if Mad wants to see his father she should let him. She just doesn't have to be involved.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
They're just hatin' with their jealousy. They think that Nina is running his life - which someone needs to be.
Michael and his false promises... I can't say anymore without spilling the tea.
And no, she's not going to push him out of Maddox's life, she's just going to stop this whole mission of creating a civil union which obvious just ain't going to happen.
<3!!!
Date: Sep 28, 2015 07:16 pm Title: The Prince has Arrived
That's so beautiful and so cute but why didn't they speak to her ? That's not right and I know she's happy with her new family but Marcus will always be Maddox father and it's not going to be easy if she cuts him out because Maddox wants to spend time with his dad but all in all this was a very special moment
Author's Response:
They feel like she's taking him away from them and forcing him to live in the midwest. She won't cut Marcus out if Maddox wants him in his life, but she's done trying to force the civil union.
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2015 11:47 am Title: An Impromptu Party & A Surprise Guest
Harpo,who dis hoe!? Oh hell no, Chloe Hoey must go! They were doing so well, until he allowed himself to be peer pressured by this hag and Chris, who is a constant problem that he needs to cut lose!
I don't blame Nina for trying to slap the stupid out of Michael's ass, because the disrespect was too much. Yes, we know you have eyes Michael, and there's nothing wrong with a little playful flirting, BUT he takes it too far with this locking arms with these chicks and being paired around. Hell no. Also, to tell Hidike to take her away like she was some commoner in his castle and presence...Nina was too slow and Prince was right on time, because Lord knows I would have kneed him in those precious nuts of his and then uppercut him with my elbow in the mouth on his way up.
Hmmp!
Author's Response:
LMAO Chloe Hoey hahaha!! That's a good name for her. And YES!!! I dare ANYONE to try and shoo me off like some peasant, they'd be getting a slap, a foot to the crotch, and a bloody nose. But she was humiliating him in front of those people and in that moment he didn't know any other way to make it stop. It wasn't a very smart reaction.
Prince did come right on time!! He saved his daddy's ass!
Date: Sep 17, 2015 04:28 am Title: An Impromptu Party & A Surprise Guest
Lol...another great one
Author's Response:
Thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2015 03:26 am Title: An Impromptu Party & A Surprise Guest
Whenever Michael does something wrong, Chris is there. He's like the ultimate foreshadowing that something is going to happen.
Chloe is on the fast track to getting blackballed in LA.
I think the only part I had trouble with was Michael letting Nina trail behind. I can't imagine him not being super cautious, courteous, and attentive to her when she's that pregnant. Especially with cameras around and him being sober.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Yes! Yes, he is. If you see Chris in a chapter it's should be a hint by now that something bad is on its way. Chloe's just trying to get her piece of the Michael Jackson pie. Being in his commercial obviously wasn't good enough.
Michael DID try to get her to participate. He could have left her up in thier room and partied all night with these people (Chloe), but he really tried to get her involved. She refused to ride even though he was going to have the operator adjust it for her. He gave it his best shot. Honestly, the right thing would have been to just hang back with her and not participate either, but he was too stubborn for that.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2015 10:36 pm Title: An Impromptu Party & A Surprise Guest
Oh my gosh I was going back and forth throughout the whole chapter. I didn't know who's side to choose. I agreed with Michael, then Nina, then Michael, then Nina. At first I thought ok Nina is just being jealous because of her hormones. I would go crazy too if my husband was a huge flirt with out even realizing it but then to tell Hienken to take her in the house. I would have gave him more than a slap. They both give me chest pains ðŸ˜. Anyways, my baby is finally on his way!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! in every review people spelled Hideki in the most craziest ways lol I love it! He was DEAD wrong telling him to just take her away, but in his defense she was humiliarting him in front of an entire group of people. Knowing how private Michael usually is, she knew what she was doing was going to piss him off highly. (even though being a huge flirt and asshole, he deserved it)
But yes! Prince is coming!
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2015 08:36 pm Title: An Impromptu Party & A Surprise Guest
This bastard. Why the hell does he always do that bullshit knowing damn well he don't like when it's done to him. Granted with Marcus the thread runs a little deeper and closer to home but that little chick thought she was cute. I wanted so badly for him to ignore the shit out of her and just chill with his wife. Like he begged her to come down only to leave her by herself. She should have flirted her ass off with Hideki's gossipin ass.
Michael why you can't do right!!!
You were so right. I am proud of Nina. Michael better get down on them boney ass knees of his and beg Nina's forgiveness for this foolishness he pulled. The stress he just put her through most def caused this.
On another note Yaaaaayyyyyy Prince is coming!!! Now I know shits going to get hectic with these two. #Jesusbuddahallahjehovahfixit
Author's Response:
He's just used to being 'friendly' it's been a part of his job - in a way. The right thing would have been to just ignore this chick and hang back with his wife who was about an hour from giving birth! And right! She was so worried about disrepecting Michael and flirting with Hideki when she might as well have because he did the same thing to her.
Prince came just in time because it was about to be a FIGHT. The 2nd slap to be heard all around Neverland LOL
<3<3