[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2015 11:12 pm Title: War Zone
I'm going to just skip ahead to the fact that it seemed the only reason Marcus wanted Mad for the weekend was so he could do exactly what he did. Turn him against Michael. It's despicable when people manipulate children to further their agenda. Like Disgusting!!!
I legit get anxiety when I read. When they're sweet there SUPER sweet the rest of the time is anger and awkward confrontation. The shit hit the fan now we have to see where it splashes.
Also wanted to state it's not far fetched for Michael to have been tired for any reason. He's been preping for this mini tour and working nonstop so why would it be strange that he's asleep. Especially in Marcus' eyes? And what the hell is he glaring at? UGH! His ass been absent for how long since Nina curved him? Another Ugh! And he gonna be giving disapproving looks because Michael was asleep on the couch in his own house? Three more UGHs!!!!
The end is about to blowuptuaite!!!
More soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
Pretty much. I mean the kid is his blood he does love his son, but he's too blinded right now by the rage of losing his girl to Michael Jackson that he can't even see what he's doing as so terrible.
Marcus is about to get some Kenny level hate from you guys because it's about to get BAD. Shit splashing all over the place.
She used the term jet lagged which wasn't really the right word. He was tired from working and not sleeping, but it wasn't the short flight that did it. Just another example of how bad she is at explaining herself. To Marcus walking in and immediately seeing him sprawled out on the couch and Nina taking care of the kids, it just looked bad in that moment.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2015 11:09 pm Title: War Zone
Uh-oh what did Marcus say to him?
Author's Response:
You don't even want to know.
Date: Dec 06, 2015 09:31 pm Title: War Zone
I love the new Marcus he seems to be changing for the better and that's good he's moving on nicely and Michael should really see someone his attitude doesn't help the situation and I bet Maddox is mad about the way Michael was when his father showed up being passed out and all but other than that everything seems good , nice chapter
Author's Response:
Girl, you're the only one loving the new Marcus right now LOL. He appears to have moved on, but we'll see how far he's really moved...
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2015 12:03 am Title: Two Year Anniversary
once again marcus rears his ugly head great chapter looking forward to reading the next great chapter
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2015 10:45 pm Title: Two Year Anniversary
Lmaooooo. I'm not even going to ask how James knows what lovemaking songs his sister is into. This was a sweet chapter but Gawd if it doesn't sound like the end is near. I'm glad they both are seeing how good their lives are when they're together and happy. It seems waaaaaaaayyyyyyyy longer than two years.
I hated that Marcus popped into her head but I was glad she didn't reach out. If his absence doesn't show her his intentions I don't know what will. I mean if it was about his son why stop checking in on him after she shut his ass down. Transparent as glass shit!
But here he go anyway and that soft ass corn filled shit is about to hit the fan. UGH!!
More soon!<333
Author's Response:
Lmao!!! Let's just not ask James that question I don't think anyone wants to know!!
When things are good they're GOOD, but all it takes is one little missing piece and the puzzle just all falls apart again. Nina needs to let it go with Marcus and let Michael take over the dad role in Maddox's life. Her head can't seem to wrap around the idea that paternity doesn't always make a father. Michael has been waaaay more of a dad in the last 2 years than Marcus has.
But yeah here we go!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2015 08:18 pm Title: Two Year Anniversary
Wait, I just noted there is going to be a third installment? I'm curious....
I've missed your updates and as usual, I enjoyed this one :) I'm surprised Michael didn't get a hotel room for them and take her out in disguise. He went super super low key.
Author's Response:
Yes! and maybe even a 4th. I'm going alllll the way with this couple until the twin girls are preteens.
I know I've absent. Sick kids and such. It's that time of year where so many viral bugs are floating around. But I don't plan on every giving up on my stories!! Thanks as always for sticking with me!
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2015 06:13 pm Title: Two Year Anniversary
These two, I swear! Lol. This was a beautiful chapter. Yes, they still have their issues, but they are trying.
James is a great brother, and I really like Hailey too. However, I'm like Hailey in regards to that lady friend of his. If everything is innocent, why not let them meet? I'd hate for him to get ahead of himself and lose his family.
I love Nina's mom too. Sensible woman,who tries to only lend an input when it's needed; not like Katherine and family.
Marcus...sigh. Every time they start to turn a corner, he pops his absentee ass up. Now, watch he's gonna have an issue with the tour traveling or want to see Maddox, when he hasn't even been interested it seems, in about 2-3 months.
I need Jisella stat, because I can see the fuckery spark up again!👌💃💯
Thanks💃👏💋
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!!! They are trying.
James and Haylee are awesome even when they have their own issues going on. Nina's mom is definietly treating their situation better than Michael's mom. She recognizes they have problems but doesn't immediately blame Michael just because Nina is her daughter.
The fuckery is coming and it's gonna come HARD!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2015 07:44 pm Title: A Love like This
These two...I can't. Lol. They use arguing as foreplay and both get off on the drama, literally and figuratively. Michael needs to check his family again,once and for all!
Thanks!
Author's Response:
LOL that may be true about these two. But at the end of the day something has to give or they aren't going to last. Michael does need to set his family straight. Nina's not the golddigging life ruining BIATCH they think she is. She has her flaws, but she's not THAT flawed.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2015 08:07 am Title: A Love like This
hot chapter but seriously their marriage will not last if michael dont get the help he needs and stop blaming his problems on marcus looking forward to the next great chapter
Author's Response:
Yes! If Michael doesn't get the help he needs they will crumble. Marcus hasn't even been a problem lately so he can't even blame anything on him.
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2015 09:12 pm Title: A Love like This
These two and their damn hormones. Lmaoooo. I thought six weeks at least was the time limit before sex. No control. Them skipping off and away from their problems hand in hand. Smdh.
That scrapbook was such a cute idea. That was a very good hubby thing to do. I remember from the first story how awkward and cute he was around Nina once he started falling in love with her.
Misty watercolored memories!!! Sigh. They did good this chapter which means the shit is hitting the fan in the next one. Let's see.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
I think it depends on how the birth went. I only waited like three and a half weeks.
I look back on the first story often and LOL he was pretty awkward. You're going to HATE one of them in the next chapter I mean HATE. I won't spoil who does the final fuck up but it's probably not who you are expecting.
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2015 08:22 pm Title: A Love like This
Yay 
The anniversary gift - I like that he's doing that for her. I wonder how she is going to react? Did Nina's mother ever have a heart to heart with Michael's mom? I mean, they both would want to see their grandchildren.....
Author's Response:
The anniversary gift is sweet especially since he missed their wedding one. No Nina's mom and Michael's mom have never had a sit down. It should probably happen.
Date: Nov 07, 2015 07:51 pm Title: A Love like This
"Michael pranced around in front of everyone with rainbows flowing out of his ass as if everything was perfectly okay"
that line was great. I'm thrilled you're keeping this going.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks.
Date: Nov 04, 2015 06:42 pm Title: The First Date
I need more <3
Author's Response:
It's coming soon <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2015 05:50 pm Title: Unsolved Problems
Lord, @RedOne and @Tut, have said all I was going to say. So nasty, so rude...in my NeNe Leaks voice. Lol.
Thanks! Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2015 05:44 pm Title: Marital Counseling?
These two make my butt itch. Always some shit with them. Nina was wrong about the way she tried to do the counseling. That kind of setup could and would only cause trouble and resistance.
Bill, once again,was being drawn in and not wanting to be involved. The man is constantly caught in the middle of them, through no fault of his own.
Now, Michael...the ass. Sigh. I so want to slap pennies from his ass. He's always saying and doing dumb shit, while thinking living in denial is going to make the problems go away or his dick. Now, here they go bringing the drama to Jisella and her folks into their dysfunction again.
Little Prince is so cute and spoiled rotten already by his daddy while the girls are not sure about him still. Maddox and his new brother...aww.
Author's Response:
LMAO! Always. Right, she knew better than to try and sneak that shit on him. Poor Bill... but at the same time it keeps his job 'interesting'.
The kids are the only thing cute about this story right now lol