[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2014 01:10 pm Title: A call from the past
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):)
Date: Oct 18, 2014 05:03 pm Title: Hall of Fame
Hi,
I like this idea and you have a good idea, but you only have talking going on between all the caracters and all the speaking is all together it should be spred a part and you don't allways need to end with 'said'. Try putting some replied, or answered; or screamed; or some other form of telling the readers that the person or people have answered. I hope this makes sence?
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2014 02:51 pm Title: The Mall
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cotniue!!!!!! janet finally hears michael :):):):)
Date: Oct 11, 2014 08:48 pm Title: Hall of Fame
Oh i love the idea of this! imo i think there are way too many romance stories with original girls (some are really well written though). People should start putting michael in cute & interesting situations that DON'T have to do with girls. kudos to you <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2014 11:13 am Title: Hall of Fame
I love it but I wish the chapters were a lil longer. Continue please!
Date: Oct 08, 2014 08:38 pm Title: Hall of Fame
This is a really interesting concept. I just wish the chapters were longer.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2014 05:05 pm Title: Dinner with the family
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!:):):):):)::))