[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2014 11:41 am Title: Wanna be Startin' Somethin'
Great story. Another f--- up father who should never have kids. Pretty sad when you can't even remember your own child's name
Added note: Nice responses to the comments left even when they tell you what to do, when suggesting is a much better way to go. In must cases it is always better not to demand but suggest.
Author's Response:
You're right! :) I hate fathers like him! lol. And yes they were very kind responses. I feel like we are all mature enough to suggest idea and not demand. Not everyone is a grade A writer ya know? Thanks for reading! :) Stay tuned!
Date: Sep 24, 2014 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Good pictures of the cast, though Emett looks younger than two.
At least, he does to me. But, that's okay cause I looked/ look younger than what I really am age wise.
Date: Sep 24, 2014 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Chris needs to do two things.
1. Get his act together and search inside himself before he comes back to her and his son and take a stand and do his part as a dad/ boyfriend.
2. Or, if he's not willing to do that, then don't worry about coming back because he's really not man enough for the job.
If he wants to be a parent, then he first needs to see where he's gone wrong.
Author's Response:
Right?! And i've babysat kids where they've asked me such questions. You're clearly doing something wrong if a child ask something like that! Thanks for the review! :)
Date: Sep 24, 2014 01:57 pm Title: The Move & First Sight.
Um, you have a good start here, but fix your spelling as it's a little off.
Author's Response:
Thank you for telling me that! I was typing on my kindle and it was really difficult lol. Thanks again! :)
Date: Sep 19, 2014 05:02 am Title: The Move & First Sight.
Good so far..... Please continue.