Date: Dec 28, 2014 02:51 pm Title: The File
With a revelation like that Michael's singing career is over before it even has chance to begin. If and when he does make it, Tatiana and Sean could come out of the wood work and destroy him.. He will lose his fan base Michael that was not cool what you did.. Not cool at all. Rape.. Wow his anger escalated rather quickly. Rape... 4 hours. I need an aspirin and a glass of wine .... I am very disappointed in you Michael.. Very disappointed.
Author's Response:
Michael was a baaaaaad boy. Everyone did try to warn Chivonn. And yeah will Michael's crazy talent be enough to defy the odds? I guess we'll see.
Date: Dec 28, 2014 02:33 pm Title: The File
Damn! So now michael is gunna make things worSe by calling up his brothers. Wooooow I did not see that coming..in his file. It's not like he lied to her, atleast he told her about it when she asked. But he should've been told her. But he's right, he lost her. Even though it happened long ago..it's still very eerie. They need some time. She need to think it over, obviously
Author's Response:
Yeah I mean at least he was honest about it. It not something to be ignored though Chivonn doesn't want to end up in that position.
Date: Dec 28, 2014 01:57 pm Title: The File
Okay I am done!!!! Whoa Michael !!!!
Date: Dec 23, 2014 06:05 pm Title: Lunch Date with the Gossip Girl
Michael is fucking up already? I swear he better figure out a way to loose this Jessica bitch.. N about that file, WHAT'S IN IT??? What could Michael possibly have done beside murder? .. Rape maybe? O.O
Author's Response:
You were right!
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2014 10:48 pm Title: Lunch Date with the Gossip Girl
Yeah, I'm a hypocrite... do somethin' about it...No this nigga did NOT!!!!! I died a little. Lmao. He has the fucking nerve to be entertaining Jessica's ass and Chiv can't smell good? Boy if you don't...
I was rootin for his ass but if he steps out on Chiv? All love lost son. All
I still don't see what could be in that file worse than him killing someone.
Mane what the hell Kiesha want? Ugh probably gonna Hoesplain that the baby wasn't his Yadda yada I wouldn't do that to you boo yada yada take me back yada yada.
Michael... Do right. It's too early to fuck up now.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
LOL yes he did!
There was a good cause for him killin' T, though... that dude was strung out and crazy and probably would have killed Michael.
Hope Michael can resist the temp-hoe-tation!!!
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2014 09:50 pm Title: Lunch Date with the Gossip Girl
I think the beat down he got from Sean affected some part of his brain cause he was less mean to her before all that -___-
Author's Response:
He was less mean to her before they became 'official' you know how some dudes do you. Once they get the title suddenly they don't have to work as hard!
Date: Dec 20, 2014 07:17 pm Title: Lunch Date with the Gossip Girl
Fuck that bitch want?? Anywayyyy !! Why Michael tell that irky bitch where he work. Don't fuck it up and make this girl look dumb Michael!
"Yeah, I'm a hypocrite... do somethin' about it." Imma jump my ass in the story! Lmaoo
Author's Response:
Lmao!! he'll learn soon. just cause he got that title don't mean Chev will be his forever if he doesn't act right. She ain't as dumb as Keisha and the others were stickin' by him.
Date: Dec 13, 2014 11:08 pm Title: Wally World and Redemption
Sean needs to stfu & leave Chev and Mike alone. Mike is makin an effort to leave his old life behind.. But, damn, homeboy still got them anger issues .__.
Author's Response:
Sean's trippin and he better be careful messin' with Mike.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2014 06:54 pm Title: Wally World and Redemption
Welll.... glad he could make her feel a lil somethin somethin . More than seven strokes . I feel it mike. Lmao at the wal mart vest shit , bahahahaha! I feel it tho mike . Get in where you fit in right? I agree with Tut she should just say forget the file. We all knoe that Michael has a past . She minus well leave it alone . And all . But yup ! Update soon girly . Dedicated reader and story lover here .5 stars!
Author's Response:
LOL yeah that file is a big can of worms not only is it going to affect the way Chivonn sees Michael, but its going to piss him off that she read it without asking him about his past first. Thanks for the review!! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2014 06:45 pm Title: Wally World and Redemption
"Leave yo panties at home and wear a skirt." Lawd Clutches pearls. I had so much hope untill he brought her to a place they would find bodies at? I get he was tring to be romantical and all with the moon shining on the creek and all that but Bruh. You took randoms there so you get a D for effort cause he did redeem himself in the sex department. Otherwise it would have been a straight F.
Shade Milham irks me to my very soul. If I was Chev I would have been like keep your gotdamn files. What could be in that file any worse than him killing someone because she knows for damn sure he did just that right in front of her house no less.
He is such a dicotomy With is adorable renogade ass. I can imagine how cute he looks lying there sleep with his little vest. :)
More soon hun!!! <333
Author's Response:
LMAO!!! a D for effort. a D+ right? lol It was better than doing it at the apartment with Bryan there. Sean's a real problem. They need to disfuse his ass real quick before he gets Michael in real trouble.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2014 04:45 pm Title: Wally World and Redemption
200th review! lol that boy better take her to a better place next time! He's such a butthead for taking Her to the same place as he did with other girls -____- haha I can't wait to see what's inside that file, though I do expect shit to hit the fan once it is opened
Author's Response:
Woot Woot!! YEAH!! 200 reviews that's what I'm talkin' bout! lol Thanks! In Michael's defense, he doesn't really know a lot of nice places, that's just where he grew up that's all he knows. But yeah the fact that he's done other girls probably in that same spot on the wall.... no.
Date: Dec 13, 2014 04:37 pm Title: Wally World and Redemption
Goin through Michael's file hmmmm it can't be a crime..as long as she doesn't look at him different. Everybody got some bad fck ups in the past (probably not like badass mike tho) Michael ain't have to throw the damn money at her Lmaooo disrespectful ass! Oooooo they nasty havin sex outside..oooo I'm tellin mama! lol
And o yea..Fck Sean coward ass! Can't stand him!!!
Author's Response:
LOL he's got some pretty nasty history and a whoooole lotta mug shots in that file. We'll see if it makes Chivonn think differently. and LOL yeah Michael finally gave it to her right. even though it was in the most ghetto place... lol
Date: Dec 13, 2014 03:32 pm Title: Wally World and Redemption
I love this story. It's one of the best ones on here. I can't wait for your updates.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2014 02:56 pm Title: Wally World and Redemption
Michael has got me seeing red. So, he's announcing where he works to all the girls on his FB, he held onto his money rather than pay back his girlfriend, and he takes her to a place where he's done tons of basics? smh.
Author's Response:
LOL yeah he's slackin' just a little bit.... just a little.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2014 12:15 pm Title: My Brother's Bombshell
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!