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Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2014 05:29 am Title: A Possessive Past

I have no words right now.  I really want to hate Michael but I just feel really sorry for him.



Author's Response:

Chivonn probably feels the same way!

Reviewer: TenderLovingCare Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2014 12:28 am Title: A Possessive Past

For some reason that Facebook part didn't show up when I first read the chapter, so I had to go back and re-read it again. And all I could think about was 'aww his little corny self' lol i bet when, or if, he ever gets her pregnant he will be one of those corny-yet-adorable fathers who puts the baby's ultrasound photo as his Facebook profile picture (my brother has done that with every single one of his kids) hahah



Author's Response:

Lol!!! My kids dad did the same thing he even wanted to get a tshirt made with the ultrasound on it LOL you know Michael will be that guy. if he does get her pregnant maybe that will be the one thing to finally make him change forever 

Reviewer: Yv3tt3 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 11:24 pm Title: A Possessive Past

Omg, this chapter is so fuckin emotional ;__; I'm on the verge of crying myself.. Michael is really crying his eyes out & poor Chivonn has to make a tough decision.. Omfg, WHYYYY..  



Author's Response:

Yes she does. I would say poor Michael but he deserves to be feeling some pain that was horrible what he did to Tatiana and he should have to live with that the rest of his life. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 09:06 pm Title: A Possessive Past

Yaaas - Michael is stepping up. He's moving forward, finally!

C'mon Chivonn....*fingers crossed*



Author's Response:

Let's just pray he doesn't decide to take another 10 steps back.... lol

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 05:41 pm Title: A Possessive Past


Gurl!!!! Now I have a better grasp on his mind set at that time.  I didn't realize hard drugs where a factor in the equation.  They can really exasperate a bad situation with an already emotionally unstable person.  This is not going to be easy for Mike and Chiv to get through and I hope he does listen to his sister and get some kind of help.  He's not going to heal if he doesn't.  I hope the reality of the situation makes him take things a step further than just blocking the hoes and updating his Facebook status. 


I'm so glad his family was there to talk him off the ledge and be there as a support.  That was too too touching (*cries more) cause he would have gotten in over his head and really loose Chiv for good and eneded up in prison.


I think she will give him a chance again after taking some time to think.  After she heard Tati's side I hope she has the insight she needs to get through it.


As for Shade he might seem like a nice guy but he has ulterior motives and for that ion like em.


Ria is one hatin ass person for real.  If Chiv ever went along with what she said she would be a bitter ass individual too.  I understand Michael hurt her sister and hearing what he did to Tatiana was foul but there seems to be something more under all of that. (I always think this LMAO)


Prayin for these two like a pastor on sunday...Word.


"The game is shut down. My heart belongs to her." Refer to the gif above.


Thank you for not leaving us hanging.


More soon <333



Author's Response:

My lips are sealed on Risa's disposition lol as well as why Sean is out to get Michael. I always love reading your reviews you always have so much feedback for me. I love it lol 

Reviewer: TenderLovingCare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 03:25 pm Title: A Possessive Past

I think this whole ordeal was the final closure they truly needed. Just because they became official michael still didn't put real effort into changing, but I believe this is what's going to cause him to change... Hopefully. Chivonn will be one hell of a woman if she decides to stand by his side & I know she will get a lot of shit from Risa :| 

BUTTTTTTT if this doesn't cause this boy to change he better get an ass kicking from Bryan AND Sean lol



Author's Response:

Yeah you're right. It's got Michael suddenly doing all the right things. Like tellin these girls off and acknowledging that he's with someone on Facebook. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 12:45 pm Title: A Possessive Past

This chapter was soooooo sad. I don't know I was getting funny feelings with her seeing Tatiana but okay. Michael was on some chronic bad ass drugs. So yeah he was crazy!! Wow! This sat me right up! Michael was crying in his mother's arms. (I agree with janet his ass needs some anger management also) but ugh! Poor babies!!! Michael told her he loves her and says he'll give her space. Everybody was crying! It was gunna be me next, crying! Lol! Sean's ass is looking for some real dirt on Michael. Like damn what he do to you? Like he really wanna do Michael's case or somethin..it gotta be more reasons why Sean Is all on mike's ass! Also glad Michaell isn't gunna do something dumb to Sean....well idk about the future. Still shocked Michael was crying too! He really loves her :(( I wonder how Chivonn will feel/say when she reads it. :((((



Author's Response:

it was a very emotional chapter! He used the L word sober!!! How will Chivonn respond?!

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 12:04 pm Title: A Possessive Past

Jesus fix it now!!!! Michael is going to need some therapy.. He is a broken soul. He need some serious counseling to learn how to control his anger and emotions. I am holding my head on this one.  I am glad he didn't go through with his plans to murder Sean. Not a smart move. I am glad he is deciding to give Chivonn her space, because she definitely needs especially after finding out about his past.   He has to learn to be lover. Not just hit it and quit it... I need some wine....



Author's Response:

LOL I hope my story is not turning you into a lush. jk And yeah even his brothers were too smart to try and take out a rich guy like Sean. 

Reviewer: Yv3tt3 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 09:18 am Title: The File

I really don't know what to say... I'm kinda in the middle of "it was along time ago, it already happen" and "Michael is still pretty violent, he needs help.." I just think Chivonn shouldn't give up on him, he's made some improvements like get a job & he's sticking to cigarettes only.. Idk

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2014 10:58 pm Title: Can he stay for a couple days... maybe a week?


Author's Response:

LOL!!! It was a brief lack luster sex. But I've seen posts around here about how upset people get when you use the words rape with Michael so I thought I better warn everyone. At least I didn't make him a serial rapist or anything. 

What doesn't fit about the description, I'll make it fit lol And yeah now that he's hit it and got the title, he's not doing much to keep her. He wasn't even THAT apologetic or remorseful about what she just found out. Next chapter Chivonn is going to go looking for Tatiana to get her side of the story and figure out why in the world she'd drop such severe charges. 

And. Of course its against his parole! If he gets caught... lol

What doesn't fit is that he hung out in her car first, then held her for so long. That's more than just an impulse/rage act. That has forethought, which is especially concerning. It's more consistent with that of a serial rapist or someone who is very masochistic than a broken hearted and angry man. I hope the report was more extreme than reality.

I don't get super upset about rape in stories when it's an AU character and there is genuine remorse and attempts to make up for it. Especially when there were drugs involved. Now serial rape? Hell no.

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2014 07:20 pm Title: The File

Oh I had to leave another comment cause I am heated up over this chapter. I am so disgusted at Michael's despicable behavior and actions in the past. But I have to make one more comment about Michael.. It is obvious that Michael equates sex with dominance and control. All he cares about is getting his rocks off, and not really caring about pleasing his women. He needs a reality check. He needs counseling or something. One thing positive about Michael is that he adores children and has not thank God done any sexually inappropiate with little girls. Rape Michael ? Really Michael ? Ugh!!! Okay, I am done for now.....



Author's Response:

I'll update again tonight LOL so I don't leave you guys with that nasty taste in ur mouth lol Sometimes people forget that even in the case of with a girlfriend or ex just because they've willingly had sex with you before, forcing them to have sex is not rape, but it is. I don't think Michael understood that at the time, he was young and angry.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2014 06:35 pm Title: The File

Oh dang it.  Why can't they just be normal for a little?  Can't michael just be good and loving for a bit?



Author's Response:

I know right.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2014 06:04 pm Title: The File

When I first read the disclaimer and then their ...brief... sexual encounter, I thought that's what you were apologizing for LOL

IDK about his story about Tatiana. It doesn't fit with what the description was. Michael is being awfully self-absorbed. Now that he's hit it, it's like Chev has dropped in her importance. And now him going clubbing?! Doesn't that push the conditions of his parole?

On a side note: I'm glued.



Author's Response:

LOL!!! It was a brief lack luster sex. But I've seen posts around here about how upset people get when you use the words rape with Michael so I thought I better warn everyone. At least I didn't make him a serial rapist or anything. 

What doesn't fit about the description, I'll make it fit lol And yeah now that he's hit it and got the title, he's not doing much to keep her. He wasn't even THAT apologetic or remorseful about what she just found out. Next chapter Chivonn is going to go looking for Tatiana to get her side of the story and figure out why in the world she'd drop such severe charges. 

And. Of course its against his parole! If he gets caught... lol 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2014 04:23 pm Title: The File

Let me start of with a small prayer. LordT please guide me into a place of light as I clutch these pearls around my neck. 

I stared into blankness for like 5 minutes before I started my review. Lawd. Jesus take the wheel to this vehicle. 

I prayed the whole time that it wasn't true. Sexual assault is a brutal brutal act and for 4 hrs?!?!? Yoooooooo. 

Sigh. This is a complex situation. While I won't just chalk what he did up to youth and psychosis. Shit was FUCKED UP!!! Foul!!!!!!I want to give it the benefit of the doubt that he left that part of him behind. He has severe anger issues and possible violent outbursts and i feel in light of these revelations to prove to Chiv he's left all that behind he has to seek help. Not for her but for himself to reign in his anger. Him calling up his brothers as retaliation against ole boy is not the move in the right direction to prove he's changed. AT ALL. He's writing his own death sentence with those actions and he better come to his damn senses and use his gotdamn brain.  Let that little crazy ass boy within GO!!!! While I despise Shade Milham with every breath I breath, Michael has to realize harming him will neither remedy how Chiv feels nor will it bode well for him staying out of jail. He needs to accept the responsibility that yes he did do that but how can they move forward with his renewed mentality. 

I Don't blame Chiv one bit for being frightened of him and he has to show and prove to her beyond a reasonable doubt that she should not have to be afraid of him if they don't work out. That will be the interesting part to this story. HOW THE HELL DO THEY MOVE BEYOND THIS!?!?! 

I feel so naive now thinking what could be the worst that could come from those files. 

And a hearty fuck you to Sean Milham for being happy that young girl was violated to prove his point. Shit Chiv still don't want your ass. Run a fucking long...

Hoping for the best but preparing for the worst. Don't leave us hanging gurl!!! :((((((

More soon <333



Author's Response:

I know right, you were all 'what could be worse than murder?' LOL. THIS. It is a tricky situation though because although it was a brutal, seemingly unforgivable act. It was sooo long ago and he's already suffered, he did it because he was suffering. No one ever taught him now to deal with his anger properly and you're right he does need to seek help. 

Everyone hates Sean, he is sort of shady, but he's really not a BAD guy. He's got a past story too that explains why he despises 'thugs' like Michael and does all he can to destroy them. Chivonn's better off kissing his ass and keeping him from provoking Michael any further.

It's' going to be a tough road moving forward. 

Thanks for your passionate review! <3 I won't keep you guys hanging long. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2014 03:54 pm Title: The File

You know some people are or will be greatly disturbed by this chapter and might think disgustingly of Mike but I sure as hell do not. 

Okay, yes, he was crazy as hell for doing what he did. And just because a girl breaks up with you DOES NOT, i repeat, DOES NOT, give you the right to violate her in that way. I don't blame Chev for being angry or even scared beacause I would too BUT she should not hold that over his head. He was young, and stupid, very stupid. I understand if she needs time to think things over and all of that because every woman finding that out about a man she truly cares for... it can be gruesome but I hope she doesn't take it out on Michael. 

I'm not trying to justify his actions or anything like that at all, no because he was dead wrong for what he did but he paid for it. He has to live with hurting someone he supposedly love for the rest of his life and he can't ever forget that unless he comes up with a serious case of amnesia.  All I'm saying is Michael isn't that same young minded boy that did those stupid actions. 

Chev should just tell him she need some time to get her mind right and he needs to ACCEPT THAT and if you do make her separate herself from him his ass better not flip off either because he put this on himself. yes, he's changed. Yes, he deserves a chance, but coming clean should've been the first thing he did.

Sean? Bitch ass nigga. 

That's all I gotta say. 

And Michael? Chev may pull from him but if he goes through with this stupid ass bull shit ass DUMB ASS plan he has going through his head right now tryna round up his brothers he minus well just tell Chev bye for good. Why is he about to add shit on top of the shit that she already know? He needs to S.T.O.P and T.H.I.N.K. 

God. 

I can just see some BS coming up. 

 

Anyway, I loved this chapter. I'm ready for me. Sorry I've been out for the last two chapters. But I'm back now. Really sorry! 



Author's Response:

Yeah... I was almost afraid to write it this way... but hopefully my readers will stick with me. Hey I warned them lol But yes he was CRAZY, psychotic even to do what he did and being young and confused isn't excuse enough for it. Chivonn has every right to be afraid seeing how Michael has fallen for her pretty hard. (Even though he's been kind of an asshole in general lately) 

I agree with you, I don't want anyone to think I'm justifying his actions either or promoting rape, but he's almost 30 now and this was when he was 18. He's evolved a lot as a person after all the things since then that he's been through, but he's still not quite there yet he has some more improving to do.

And no problem! I've been so lazy about reviewing lately. It's terrible. Christmas was a busy time for me. Still kind of is.

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