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Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Great Expectations

This was worth the wait :-)



Author's Response:

aww thanks.....things have been manic at home and work. Thought I was about to lose my job but thats sorted itself.  So had time to finally sit and crack on with it

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 15 - New Horizons

Hmmm, interesting update. More please!

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2014 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I do think its her own fault don't get me wrong but having to fear for your own life/health and those of others.



Author's Response:

i don't know how i feel quite yet about her lol.  

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2014 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Getting Deeper

I did NOT see that coming. Excellent twist!

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2014 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Getting Deeper

Tsk.Tsk....poor sarah.



Author's Response:

do you feel sorry for her or think its her own fault for getting involved with both?

 

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Dog on a Leash

Wow. I wonder how Gabe will take the news? Can't wait to find out!

 



Author's Response:

not very well i think :/ lol

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Dog on a Leash

This is getting better with every chapter. Sooooo addictive!



Author's Response:

thank youuuuuuu :D

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2014 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A Princess in her Castle

Awesome chapter.

Thank you and update.



Author's Response:

thank you :D currently working on the next chapter

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2014 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A Princess in her Castle

An excellent job. I feel suspense rising; please keep going.



Author's Response:

aww thanks - next chapter is in progress :D  

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2014 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 11

This is getting really heavy. I'm intrigued to see where this goes next. 



Author's Response:

you ain't seen nothing yet....lol

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2014 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 11

DRAMA.DRAMA.DRAMA.

Sad thought i always believed that matter how bad i anticipated Gabriel to be I always thought he loved his brother too much to hurt him physically.

Good job. Thank you and update.



Author's Response:

thank you xxxx

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2014 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 8

Drama.Drama.Drama. I love it!

Thank you.



Author's Response:

thank youuuu <3

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2014 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 10

Nooo! Ugh what is it with you authors and cliff hangers?! But this story as i said before is coming along beautifully. Plz keep updating.



Author's Response:

hahahahha about to upload chapter 11....yet another cliffhanger tee hee

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2014 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ooookkkaaayyy this chapter has definitely confirmed that this a beautiful story , and I damn near damn you to continue!

Lol Jk, no but really this is good. Thank you.

 

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2014 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like this story very much..plz keep on keeping on.

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