Date: Feb 01, 2015 04:42 am Title: Chapter 17 - It's My Party...
I just knew Michael wasn't all peaches 'n cream! Thank goodness Gaberiel came to the rescue in time.
Thank you for sharing your story. It was very entertaining. I look forward to the sequel.
Date: Feb 01, 2015 04:28 am Title: Chapter 16 - Great Expectations
Michael is causing problems, inciting his brother on purpose, putting Sarah in compromising positions, even proposing to his brother's fiance. Sounds like he is jealous of Gabe's success and life. Sarah has it right. She has to stand by her man, and her baby's father.
Date: Jan 18, 2015 05:40 pm Title: Sequel - please search for Mirror Image
Yasssss!
Date: Jan 17, 2015 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 13 - A Dog on a Leash
Even a princess life can feel like a prison if its thrust upon you. Poor Sarah. Its too bad that Gabriel will be dragged into the lawsuit. It can cost him business deals.
Author's Response:
yup - there is the saying becareful what you wish for! ;)
Date: Jan 17, 2015 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 12 - A Princess in her Castle
Her and Micael can meet in her flat? Sarah is getting in way over her head. Gabriel has isolated her and made her dependent on him. Classic moves of an abuser. Maybe Michael will be able to help her, but meetings in her apartment, alone, is just asking for trouble.
Date: Jan 17, 2015 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 11
I just knew Madison had hit up on Gabriel!
I understand Madison getting upset that Sarah left the party, after the effort she went through to pull it off so quickly. Its like Sarah did not appreciate it, even if Gabriel dragged her away. She could have insisted on returning considering people were there for her.
Gabriel ruined the party by starting the fight and taking Sarah away from the festivities.
Date: Jan 17, 2015 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
I just knew Madison had hit up on Gabriel!
I understand Madison getting upset that Sarah left the party, after the effort she went through to pull it off so quickly. Its like Sarah did not appreciate it, even if Gabriel dragged her away. She could have insisted on returning considering people were there for her.
Gabriel ruined the party by starting the fight and taking Sarah away from the festivities.
Date: Jan 17, 2015 11:51 am Title: Chapter 10
Wow! So fast. I'm beginning to believe Michael. Gabe is too successful to do something so important on a whim, even if he were in love. Ican understand Sarah being swept off her feet though.
Date: Jan 16, 2015 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 17 - It's My Party...
Michael went NUTS!!! This was one hell of an ending!
Author's Response:
he did.....lol.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2015 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 17 - It's My Party...
I don't even know what to say...FUCK!...i thought gabe was bad for punching the shit out Mike prior but honestly think his ass Deserved that.Rape?! He was seriously about to rape her?! You know what this story has me fucked up...Woosah...woosah...breathe..just... breathe...( no worries having me in this state is a good thing).. this chapter ended with a bang; i'll probably die from anticipation till the sequel. You really brought on the drama and things just unfolded.
Thank you and bring on the sequel!
Author's Response:
hahahahahah - to be honest - writing kind of just flows with me. I don't think i even knew what was going to happen until i started writing! I definitely have the sequel coming soon....the ideas are going around my head a lot so it's got to be done hehehe
Date: Jan 16, 2015 11:04 am Title: Chapter 9
"self-certificated"?? What's that mean?
Michael is being quite ominous: 'its too late. He's making Gabriel sound like a stalking control freak.
Author's Response:
In the UK if we are sick and need time off from work we get a week off before we need a doctors certificate. Self-certificating..did it ourselves lol. Hope that helps :D
Date: Jan 15, 2015 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Gabriel sounds wonderful, but a bit pushy, going to her place without being invited. Why is Michael confiding in a virtual stranger he just met, and not confiding in his girlfriend?
Author's Response:
because he feels trapped by his girlfriend. Bit like people go to therapy - strangers are less judgemental i guess
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2015 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
PREGNANT FOR GABE!? For reeaals? Well i know some people may disagree but i think her getting pregnant for him is a good thing...sorta, becuase it made her realize that she can't keep fooling around jumping from brother to brother cause dhe can't control her hormones and her feelings. It actually forced her to stop and makea responsible decision.
Besides how could you not be happy with gabe? He may be a control freak but honestly i can overloik that... ugghh! Im hopelessly loyal.
I give sarah her props i can't cheat or fool around and juggle around all that drama.Respect to you.
Aeesome chapter thank you and update.
Author's Response:
thanks :) Sarah isn't stupid - that was Madison lol. Let's just hope Michael isn't stupid now lol
Date: Jan 14, 2015 01:15 am Title: Chapter 3
I wonder why Miss Drama is keeping the identity of her ex a secret. I expect she would have blabbed it all out. I suspect its Michael...
Author's Response:
lol....keep reading :D
Date: Jan 13, 2015 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Twins. Oh Lord the world could not possibly deal with double the beauty of this gorgeous man!
Author's Response:
yup i know.....but hey twice as nice ;-)