Date: Jul 08, 2016 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 72
I really enjoyed reading this story ! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 72
lol cute chapter
Date: Jul 03, 2016 01:33 am Title: Chapter 71
Good job! Can't wait to read more!
Date: Jul 03, 2016 12:10 am Title: Chapter 71
Wow, another outstanding chapter. The way you characterize him and let him interact. And what he says. Also you are so eloquent. I almost get the impression that you must have know him. This is so good. Love it. Please never stop. As I already said in my earlier reviews: You story is the very best of all of the stories that I have come across. And believe me, it has been over hundreds of stories on different sites.
Keep it up
Date: Jul 02, 2016 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 70
I enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2016 10:59 am Title: Chapter 71
I will forever love this story. keep it up please!
Date: Jun 28, 2016 08:56 pm Title: Character info
Your writing is so lively!!!!
Date: Jun 27, 2016 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 70
You are so brilliant , you need to keep on writing until the happily ever after. I love it. Pleeeeeeaaaase add more chapters to your mesmerizing story!😘
Date: Jun 26, 2016 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 70
Now, that the MJ fiction is back, please update!
Date: Jun 16, 2016 03:33 am Title: Chapter 70
Hey there, that was a rather short chapter. But a good one none the less. Keep up this outstanding work. You are hilarious. I love it. The way you write is extremely funny and it suits the Jacksons well. Please update soon! I don' t ever want this story to end.
Date: Jun 14, 2016 05:00 am Title: Chapter 49
You are so funny and you know so much about him. This is simply the best story I have ever read. You put so much effort in it. Any real MJ fan can tell instantly. Great job. Absolutely love it!
Date: Jun 12, 2016 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 36
Yet another great chapter. The way you portray him. So vulnerable yet so strong and insecure.
I love it . You do it so well 👍
Date: Jun 12, 2016 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 34
Your writing is hilarious and you seem to know him so well. Everything you are writing seems so natural. Like it rsally could have been that way. Love it!
Date: Jun 10, 2016 05:03 am Title: Chapter 28
You are just hilarious 👍