Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2014 07:05 pm Title: Blame IT On The Boogie...

Awww look at Michael being all gentlemanly... I love it! Michael sounds soooo sexy in this story I can't get enough!

Author's Response:

Yeah it is shocking that he was able exhibit controll.  I think he even surpised himself too.  Thank you for reading hun! 

Reviewer: Hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2014 01:29 am Title: The Invite...

"Just wondering how my cum would smell on your breath."

WHAAAAT??!! Ok, Michael needs to quit playing forreal. But I'm not gonna lie, I LOL after I got over my initial shock. LMAO this dude... tsk tsk.

And he is a total man whore... jeez he ain't giving Mike Jr. a break at all! Err... is it the other way around?? haha

And I see she even has Rocky's approval... shoot her man better keep a tight leash on his woman with all these men drooling over her. Wait, where is his disappearing ass again? XD

Update soon!

 

Author's Response:

Michael is so NAS-T.  Not to Worry Elard makes his way into the picture soon with his shady ass.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2014 05:36 pm Title: The Ride...

Ai yi yi. This man is trouble with a capital T! I wonder how long it'll take until Pen gives in because he is proving to be too irresistable.

Btw, I'm totally not feeling Elard at the moment. Something's up and it was mentioned that he's not always there. Business trips huh? Hmm... not buying it. I hope he's not back to his old ways.

Honestly, as much as I like Mike, he's not boyfriend material. Commitment doesn't seem to be on his agenda anytime soon so leaving her bf for someone like Mike probably won't be such a good idea. BUT WE SHALL SEE... either way I'm loving the interaction between these two!

Author's Response:

He's trouble with a capital T R O U B L E Lol. Elasrd is being suspect.  Your rignt Mike isn't lookn like such a good bet but the plot thickens.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2014 10:16 pm Title: Clean Slate...

I most definitely know how Pen feels about driving out in the city! I forever refuse to drive in San Francisco for that same reason. Shoot, I get anxiety just by sitting passenger!

But anyways, this man is too much! I totally choked on my drink when he grabbed himself but was trying to pass it off as him showing her his tattoos. Pffft boy please. And who does he think he is copping a feel like that?! And asking if that dude is her bf? Acting like he's clueless but he knows damn well who that was. LMAO

You're doing a fantastic job with this story! Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response:

Thank you hun!! I apreciate that.  Michael is too slick.  Pen is holding her own tho.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2014 11:54 am Title: Rude Bwoy

Yeah I know, I caught that Mpenziwe part! Too clever... Liberian Girl is one of my fave songs.

And lmaoooo at the gum chewing. That man sure did love his gum... "Big Red. Not just red, but Big Red." Sighhhh he too cute for that.

And I'm glad Michael eye fucking Pen was not lost on her! Then again, he didn't even bother trying to be slick about it. Pffffttt.

And you're right, she is bad. Come to think of it, these two tattooed beauties would look amazing together. BUT she does have a bf and Mike didn't exactly leave a good impression so we'll how this one will go. XD

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

He was too cute for his own damn good. You'll come to see Mike is a little unorthadox LOL. ;)

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2014 07:11 pm Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...

I love the way you use humor in your writing. And omg! The thought of MJ tatted up... yum. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.  Isn't he delicious!!!! ;)