[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2014 01:12 pm Title: Farwell To His Arms...
:((((( Ouch. That hit me right here in the heart. Apparently, communication is not Michael's strongest suit. But perhaps distance will do them some good. They kinda just fell into this lil bubble of theirs that once reality hits them, only confusion and pain remains. Sighhh waaahhh where's a tub of ice cream when you need one?
And yes, I love that Bret Ratner interview. His voice is like silk. So smooth and sexy. UGH.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2014 01:40 pm Title: Enlighten Me...
Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoing the story so far. keep letting me know what you think as things progress. Thanks for reading!! :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2014 11:53 am Title: Enlighten Me...
Welp dang!!
Author's Response:
IKR!!! things are heating up! Thank you for reading!!! :)))
Date: Sep 26, 2014 07:38 pm Title: Enlighten Me...
New reader alert! I just read the whole thing in one sitting. I love this Michael..he is flamboyant and tough...
I feel for both Pen and Michael.. He fell for her... She loves him...he thinks she's cheating but she's not!
Cant ant wait to see what happens in the next update!
Author's Response:
Welcome!!! Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying it!!! :))))) <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2014 08:06 pm Title: Farwell To His Arms...
Awww... poor Michael I felt sorry for him in the beginning of the chapter, but pffft asshole move at the end dude... He's going to push Pen back to that cheatin' ass Elderado lol
Author's Response:
Michael pulled a real dick move. It gets worse :( Thank you for reading hun <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2014 10:21 pm Title: Open Wounds...
These exes I swear... they just don't know when to quit. And does Nye reallly think her telling him about the abortion whether it was his kid or not will change his mind and take her back?? Bitch please. *eye roll*
And now she's done it... she's hurt him even more and now he's going to drink himself to a stupor.. sighh poor Mike.
On a more postive note, these 2 got it bad. They're actions towards each other says it all. She's not a temporary fix that's for sure.
Author's Response:
Nye is an insane person. LOL I feel so bad for Michael. They both fell hard without even trying. The drama has only just began gurl.
Date: Sep 19, 2014 09:22 am Title: The Miami Heat...
I love drama!! I can't wait and holy shit that was a damn good sex scene. I shouldn't have read that at work.... I'm about to pounce on the next cute guy in a suit that walks by my cubicle and take out my frustration on him lol Yeah thats how this chapter made me feel.
Author's Response:
Well the drama is coming boo LOL. These two are too hot!!!! Thank you for reading hun! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2014 12:01 am Title: The Miami Heat...
Damn. These two are raunchy as fuuuuu.... but I like it. XD
And yes, I totally caught him testing out his theory about sleep and Pen. Turns out she's exactly what he needs! And the fact that he's really falling for her is like icing on a cake for me.
Oohh drama, you say?? I can't wait to see.
Ok I know this is totally off topic, but it always amazes and baffles me to see such good stories like yours not receive as many reviews but see stories that are total crap have like 100000 comments. I'm sorry, I just had to get that off my chest. Stuff like that irks me. LMAOOO
Anyways, update soon!
Author's Response:
LOL These 2 are Nas-T and yessss drama I say lol
As for the reviews I'm just happy for the few who bother to review. Thank you so much. I'm so gratefull for it. I enjoy writing this story and I'm glad you like reading it. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2014 12:14 pm Title: Ex-hail...
Look at Mike getting all cute with her.. he's falling for her isn't he? It's gonna be fun to see how things will go once they go back to reality especially with Elard not completely out of the picture.
He just seems to be the typical guy who can go and fool around (assuming that's what he's doing at the moment) but still wants his girl to stick around. Like no, you can't have your cake and eat it too. <---- Btw, who ever came up with that analogy is just plain stupid. Why would I have cake in my presence and not be able to eat it?? It's not gonna eat itself!
But I digress, can't wait to see what you have in store next. :)
Author's Response:
He is so cute with Pen. I love how they interact. Elard is coming around again soon so trife. Your right why the hell you have cake and can't eat it. Wasteful LMAO. Thank you so much for reading hun! <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2014 11:58 am Title: Indulgence...
Welll daaammmnnn, they finally got it in huh? Pen just couldn't resist this time. lmaooo
As for Mike, he's just gonna go and catch her off guard like that?? Attack her face face with those sexy lips of his? Pffft Shooot, I'd give in too if I was in her shoes. No fucks given this evening.
And now he's gonna go and take her out on a trip... sex must've been that good for him to go all out. LMAO i love it!
Author's Response:
I wouldn't be able to hold out either with his fine ass Gahhh.
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Ex-hail...
And Nye better stay an EX! Pen and Michael are such a hot couple! I love it!!
Author's Response:
They are sizzling aren't they? They get along so smoothly too. Thank you for reading love!! <3
Date: Sep 12, 2014 09:52 pm Title: Indulgence...
Too bland!? OMG that was like one of the best MJfiction sex scenes I've ever read...
Author's Response:
Awwwe thank you so much hun. I was a bit unnerved posting it. LOL.
Date: Sep 12, 2014 04:49 pm Title: Talking Blues...
*squeals!* continue! and lmaao Elderado.... Michael is too funny in this story.
Author's Response:
I know Michael had a wicked sense of humor. I can imagine him laughin at his own jokes LMAO.
Date: Sep 10, 2014 10:51 pm Title: Talking Blues...
He just popped outta nowhere right outside her door xD I'm interested to know what will happen next :) & f**k her ex.. W/ his cheating ass..
Author's Response:
LOLLL Thank you for reading. I know right he just appears after 2 weeks with no kind of thought.
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2014 09:16 pm Title: Talking Blues...
LMAO ok the fact that he was at her place without even knowing if her bf.. ex bf.. err whatever he is.. was there cracked me up. So eager, I see. He's got impeccable timing, I have to say. hahaha
And stupid Eli, he's cheating. I know it. The hushed phone calls, the text, and not to mention how ok it was with the space she was giving them.. these are the signs girl!
I'm hoping you feel inspired again very soon! I'm so anxious to see what's about to go down!