[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2014 09:54 am Title: Blame IT On The Boogie...
He's Elton John now. I AM DYING.
Ellis
I think Mike done' had like four chicks in that bed with him before. I'm convinced.
But damn, I' with Michael, that kiss was hot enough to get you there alone!
On to the next
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2014 10:57 am Title: The Invite...
Why is he so nasty? *dies*
Author's Response:
NAS-TTTTT
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2014 10:18 am Title: The Ride...
I know this nigga didn't just say Elroy. I thought I was bad when it came to calling people the wrong name on purpose *dies* IM DYING OVER HERE
Michael: Elroy, where ya girl at? #atmypenthouse
HNIC
Now he think he's Mr. Clark from Lean on Me
Author's Response:
Yoooooooo Michael is no good LMAO that nigga stay clownin Elard It continues trust me. Yeah HNIC he is TEW MUCH!!!
Date: Oct 03, 2014 01:55 am Title: What You Got To Say...
Aww, he let her mark his heart <3
Love where this is going, cannot wait for next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. There is more to come so hang in there with me. :)))
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2014 07:44 pm Title: What You Got To Say...
Awww... who can really resist Michael though? No matter how badly he's fucked up... it's hard to resist that face. Sighhh Plus he stood up for her... brownie points for him! Stupid Elard, he doesn't know what he's getting himself into. I'm glad he's making the moves to get back in her good graces. I still can't get over the fact that he let her tattoo him. Ahhhh the emotions I'm getting out of this is ridiculous. <333 BUT I still like that Pen isn't giving in so easily.. she's making him work for it!
I totally lmao with how badly they were clowning on Saul! Poor guy bwahahaha
Author's Response:
Michael can be too cute when he wants to be so it's hard to resist. Pen is trying mad hard to hold on to her convitions though so he won't be sliding. Yeah he was about to turn Elard inside out for desrespecting Pen for real. He has to pull the stars out the sky to get her back and I'm banking that he will most def try.
Poor Saul he's always getting cracked on but don't let it fool you he does the same thing to them too. LMAO. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing like always hun. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2014 07:14 pm Title: Revalation Time...
Ok, let me start off by saying that I absolutely love Amos! He did a good job smacking some sense into Mike... now I wonder how he's going to make things right between them.
And second, Fenty is too cute! He's making Michael all jealous with his interaction with Pen and the dude has no clue whatsoever. LMAO Btw, I'm totally loving the attitude from Pen. This girl isn't playing. Haha
Author's Response:
You will see that Amos is the voice of reason for Michael. He knows how he is and serves as his Jimminy Cricket LOL. Pen had attitude fo rdays so he's going to be getting it!
Date: Oct 02, 2014 07:10 pm Title: What You Got To Say...
Elard needs to be quarantined.
Michael needs to have kept it in his pants over this wait period.
Pen better make Michael spill. He needs to be very vulnerable before she can show an ounce of it. He did good by letting her tatt him, though.
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOO he is poision isn't he? Elard that is. Michael made a habbit of using random sex to subdue his feelings which is a terrible thing. We will see how he copes with having to confront his feelings head on so he can get back into Pen's good graces.
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2014 07:03 pm Title: Enlighten Me Too...
NO HE DIDN'T. Lemme get this straight, this dude hasn't contacted her in how long, has fooled around with other chicks while he was away, and then when he sees her with some other guy, he goes and pulls a bitch move. Seriously?? At this point I don't even care if it's Elard at this point ( ok.. maybe I do but shiiit...) her being with some other guy shouldn't give him an excuse to act like that! UGHH See this is what happens when you can't communicate... these boys end up doing petty shit like this!
Wow, I hope Pen will really make him work for her now.
Author's Response:
He sure did try and get fresh. He's lucky that Amos pulled him back to reality. He would have seen just how hardcore Pen could be.
Date: Oct 02, 2014 06:35 pm Title: What You Got To Say...
Elard knows he is a damn punk! How you talk all that shit but get ho'ed? Lmao it was nothing but space and opportunity and he ain't did shit with it. Nigga bye. And anyway.. That was nice of Michael to let Pen ink him but I'm still not here for his ass yet. If Pen thinks about going there with him, she needs to make his skinny, narrow ass work for it. I am not into suppose to be grown ass men playing games like that. You not gon fuck me then just not talk to me for over a month. Hell to the NAW. Then when I come around you in the next bitch face AND you been fuckin mad bitches while I'm away but fake wanna get pressed Cuz you see the next dude on me. Fuck OUTTA here with that chile. Lol so yeah Pen needs to check his ass then let him know it ain't sweet like that no more. Make his ass crawl, starve and beg. And still date other dudes in process. Humble his ass Pen.
Author's Response:
You saw how Elard backed out real quick from the physicallities right!?!?! With his punk ass. There will be more foolishness from him best believe. Letting Pen tattoo him was a huge deal for him especiially where he let her do it. He's seeing the errors of his ways and is working on being himself pre-Nye. Pen is going to give him a run for his money that's for sure.
Date: Oct 02, 2014 06:30 pm Title: What You Got To Say...
...How bout you beat it cause the girl is mine... I'm dead lol. For some reason I could really picture him saying that and I could just hear his voice with it lol lol lol
I'm glad things are going smooth er, but Pen needs to make him work hard for it.
Author's Response:
Girl I could see him saying that tooooooo OMG. Don't worry Pen is going to make him work but spoiler alert. He will gain mucho brownie points to get her. The how will be the surprise. :)))))) Thank you for reading and reviewing as always hun. <333 Also I will think about another story when this one is over. I can't cocentrate on more than one with everything else on my plate. I'm so glad you like my writing cause you know I enjoy the heck out of yours. :)
Date: Oct 02, 2014 11:33 am Title: Revalation Time...
LOL I definitely picked up the NY vibe. Though, I know some places in other parts of the US with a very similar energy to this Michael's.
Michael screwed up too much. If he wants to even think about getting near Pen, she better make him grovel.
Author's Response:
Yeah I kinda like Michael's New York swag. I'm from there so I relate to him.
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2014 05:39 am Title: Clean Slate...
Michael's edges were always laid for the heavens. But I agree, she's Hardcore for sure.
Oh, shit. Diana the receptionist. Probably finna act stupid too.
Author's Response:
Yup Diana is going to jump stupid at some point. Comense the side eyeing. Michael's hair was styled by cherubs and spritzed with the tears of Jesus.
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2014 05:21 am Title: Fuckin Problem
"A brotha is sophisticated." Bye, Michael lmaoo
He's all anxious to chase Pen. Mess around and get shot, Michael. This sounds like a grand idea
Author's Response:
LMAO Michael is a MESSSSSSS!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2014 05:11 am Title: Rude Bwoy
He's gonna give her the D
Right there in the office
callingit now
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2014 04:21 am Title: And So We Meet...
I'm cracking up over outstanding D
Outfuckingstanding Michael. Bravo, sir. What the hell did he do? Her cooch probably sideways by now.