Date: Oct 09, 2014 09:27 am Title: Cry...
First of all, I woke up completely depressed for a number of reasons. Thanks for letting me get away from that for a little bit.
Great update and I hope you can post again soon
Author's Response:
Awwwe boo I'm glad I can make you feel better. I'm sorry you're not feeling up to par. You can escape in here anytime you want hun. The next chapter is a little more upfull so I hope it helps too. Love ya!! <333
Date: Oct 09, 2014 08:24 am Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...
Just leaving this review to let you know that I have been fiending to read this freakinng story but the struggle of not having internet is real(I don't like to start a story if I can't properly follow it). As soon as I get my phone service back on, I'm reading this all in one day 😩
Author's Response:
I'm looking forward to when you get to start reading hun. I hope it will be entertaining for you. You know I'm all over your stories boo. Just come on in whenever you get the chance. <333
Date: Oct 08, 2014 07:13 pm Title: Cry...
Girl I have been itching to read this for some time now. And now with some free time I have tomorrow my ass will be all up in your reviews. and i mean ALL UP in them. Can't to read girl! Continue on !
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy the story once you're able to get to it. I love your stories!!! Bring it on hun. Be all up in here. Looking forward to the thoughts. :)))
Date: Oct 08, 2014 07:07 pm Title: Cry...
Yes Michael! CRY!! and BEG!!! because that's what you get, homie. KARMA. Pen! Once again, you go girl! Don't let a fancy dinner mask the fact that he did WRONG.
And YES!! See! I knew I'd seen that look somewhere. lol God, I love the Bad Era... damn I was born in the wrong time.
Author's Response:
Karma has him by the throat here. Let's see how well her right's his wrongs. Pen don't be falling for the oaky doke. She's sharp as tack!!!
Thank you for reading Love!! <3
Date: Oct 08, 2014 04:06 pm Title: Cry...
Wow. So he finally grew some balls and told Pen how he felt, and he's done being a ho with other stank hos? Almost too good to be true. I kinda feel bad for his overly dramatic ass right now though. Even though he's still not off my shit list, Pen shouldve handled that shit better. At least tell the boy she needs to think or something before just running off saying don't follow me. Smh they are both a mess right now. Michael needs to calm his ass down. Pen isn't rejecting him or his love. The girl is obviously overwhelmed and needs to gather her thoughts so she can know what to say. He needs to relax and just make sure his actions back up wtf he's saying. Stop fucking random trash box havin hoes, stop being immature, and really show Pen why he loves her and why she should love him too and be with him. The slightest move will send her into the arms of somebody else. But good he's feeling the burn for a change. Humble his ass. Lol
Author's Response:
You are so right he's feeling the BURN!!!!! "Trash box havin hoe's" OMG I'm crying at this. I'mma have ta use that line!!!!!!1 LMAOOOOO. He's been weening off the hoes since he rejected that girl the night of the party so he's been doing good their. He has a lot more to face tho. Thank you so much for reading again hun!!!! <333
Date: Oct 08, 2014 03:39 pm Title: Cry...
Weeeeeellllllll daaaaaaaannnngggg!!!!
Author's Response:
Michael is full of drama right? LOL Thank you so much for reading.
Date: Oct 07, 2014 07:04 am Title: Incites And Fuck Ups...
I'M CAUGHT UP!!! YESSSSSSS
Okay, sorry i just have to celebrate because I'm caught up now and I'm just really happy that I'm caught up. I've enjoyed the ride so far and I'm here til the end!
I love you <3
Great update, by the way. It gets juicier every damn time it seems.
But the main point is..........
Author's Response:
I'm celebratin witchya!!!! welcome to the present!!!
LOL You tew tew much.
Love you 2!!! <3 Thank you for reading!! Oh and with the all black that's my goal too. It's what I wear 80 percent of the time. LOL
Date: Oct 05, 2014 06:19 pm Title: Incites And Fuck Ups...
re: Elard: I was thinking more like a highly contagious virus. Possibly a STD.
Is Cali psychic? She was shooting for 100%
I like how Pen put Michael in his place. I hope she just induces the thirst. He needs to do more than just talk. The dialogue between those two just flows. Now, if they do start dating, how will it work with her being his employee? Him traveling so much with constant temptation? Hmmm
Author's Response:
Your right about Elard. You'll see what I mean in a few chapters lol.
Cali is very intuitive and she know Pen like the back of her own hand. She's a gem!
Right now Pen is not really an Employee but she can choose to be after her apprenticeship is up. They will hit many snags dun dun dun. LOL Thank you for reading hun!! <3
Date: Oct 05, 2014 06:02 pm Title: Incites And Fuck Ups...
Omg!!! I can't wait to see what he pulls together...
And go Pen! Girl, you stand your ground!
....that blank what the fuck look he always gets when he's annoyed.... I can see that expression on his face and it made me laugh out loud lol. I love him when he's jealous!
Another great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
This look right here is the "WTF" look LMAOOOOOOO I love it!!! More soon. thanks for reading bb!!! <333
Date: Oct 05, 2014 05:40 pm Title: Incites And Fuck Ups...
Ooooo, he is sprung alright! Keep that green eyed monster in check Michael, you hanging by a thread as it is lmao
Cannot wait for that oh so special feels talk, although I have a feeling he's gonna fuck it up some sort of way lol
Author's Response:
He's going to have to work hard on that monster in the future. The talk is coming!!!! Thanks for reading hun!!! :)))
Date: Oct 05, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Incites And Fuck Ups...
If Michael DONT get the FUCK!!!!!! Shit I hope she is fucking Fenty or will fuck him just to take the edge off. He has no fuckin business ASKIN her wtf or who she doing. She's single just like his childish punk ass is. He was fuckin wack pussy havin bitches left and right when they weren't talking, so he has no business askin her a damn thing! He's starting to really piss me off now. Chile I swear fo LAWD Pen better give his ass a run for his money. Show his ass no mercy and don't answer to shit that pertains to her and other men. Let his mind wander and let his sorry ass be jealous. I can't stand immature ass men who don't have the balls to be real with their feelings but have the nerve to be mad at you and jealous and shit... Get the total fuck OUTTA here michael. He is on my shit list, he needs to get his shit together before I write his ass off for good. I hope she keeps kickin it and seeing Fenty.
Author's Response:
Girl I love your passion!!! You'll start to love Mike again trust me but that's not the end of the drama sad to say. Thank you for reading <333
Date: Oct 05, 2014 04:21 pm Title: What You Got To Say...
Oh man, I'm so nervous about their talk! Can't wait though!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading love. Trust m you are in for a treat when it comes to talk time. :))
Date: Oct 05, 2014 04:04 pm Title: Revalation Time...
*Sigh* so relieved Pen and Elard aren't actually back together!
Date: Oct 04, 2014 10:32 am Title: Indulgence...
Michael got the peaches. Good for you, Michael. I was rooting him on. Gawd, I need to stop that lmaoo But I kept saying HE GOT DA PEACHES
That was perfect!
Girl, let me just say
IT WAS THAT GOOD
Author's Response:
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Thank you so much boo!!! It's always fun to write about Dirty Mike ;)))))
Date: Oct 04, 2014 10:15 am Title: Talking Blues...
ELVIS
I love how this dude wears so much black. Black is amazing and no one can tell me different.
Wtf Elroy doing back now? GOOO LEAVE DAMN IT
Anyway, who the fuck be AB? I wanna know.
Oh, never mind. HE GONE NOW *dances*
Elderado needs to watch his back. I mean, he messing up.