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Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2014 08:10 pm Title: Cry...

Damn Mike... dramatic much?? Lmao and that body roll....ugh I'm totally picturing his fine ass during the Bad tour. 

 

Boy, am I glad they finally talked it out. Yeah, pen's reaction wasn't exactly what I was expecting but that's what Michael gets. Either way, everything was laid out on the table and I can only hope they'll work through it.

 

 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO Michael was aiming for a damn Oscar that night with his dramatic ass.  Yup Yokohama Body roll Bb!!!

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2014 07:58 pm Title: Incites And Fuck Ups...

Ok, I know I've been slacking on my comments and reading but school has been kicking my ass! Ugh I just want this quarter to be over already but anywho....umm yo... wtf is wrong with Michael? He has no right acting all possessive and jealous over Pen when he's the one fucking around during their time apart.

 I'm glad pen put him in his place... he needs to be taken down a notch and my girl is doing just that. Good job Pen!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Heyyyyyyy boo I was wondering where you where!! Priorities first girl I completely undersand.  Jeaousy is one of Michael's dowm falls it became intense because of Nye but Pen will serve him!!  Thanks for reading Bb!! <333

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2014 07:57 pm Title: Film And Momentary Satiation...

Michael better handle his business. Fuck all that ignoring passive shit. Tell them hoes to BEAT IT! Anyway, good to see Pen is meeting more of his people and he's claiming her as his girl. If he wants to keep it like that, he betta handle his shit before I hop in here and do it for him. Lmao I am not playin chile 



Author's Response:

Yuppp.  He's introduing her as his lady to those close to him  soon his Mama too.  Don't worry baby girl he don't love them hoes.  He'll take care of it but it won't stop the schemes tho. :((  Thank you for ready love!! <3

Reviewer: Lovely One Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2014 08:03 am Title: Well...Welll...Well...

Ugggh. It's only a matter of time before all them ass throwing hoes stick their shit where it doesn't belong and when they do, Michael needs to take care of that PROPER. 

Now. Is it just me or it's about time Pen messed up a little too?? 

 



Author's Response:

LMFAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! That Gif has me dying and coming back to life!!! You know messy hoes got to get messy and trust me they won't disappoint.  Unfortunately. LOL  And yes Pen will have her share of fuck ups too. LMAOOOOOOOOOOOO(I'm still laughin from the gif here) DEAD!!!!!! Thank you so much for reading hun.<3

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 04:27 pm Title: Well...Welll...Well...

Lmao chile.. Diana's funky ass is in for a rude awakening when she realizes Michael is head over heels in love with  Pen. And the gag is, even if he weren't he still wouldn't want her hoish, nothin ass! Bitch been working there for years and Michael still pays her DUST, and will continue to do so. That's who Michael needs to be worried about. Send that bitch to the unemployment line. I hate thirsty ass hoes who don't know their place. Bitch thinks Cuz she ducked Elard's raggedy ass she done did something. That's exaxtly why Pen dropped his dusty ass. Speaking of Pen though, I'm glad she's a stand up chick and told michael what happened with Fenty. And she kept it real with Fenty too. I like that, she handled her business. Now while Michael is being pressed, he needs to handle his fuckin business! Tell Cece's stank ass to back off and stop contacting him. He has a girl now. Why the fuck he being passive aggressive with these hoes yet wanna strong arm all the men who like Pen? Man please. Michael needs to handle that bullshit NOW. Shit like that is what keeps me from fully rockin with him. This one sided ass shit. Tell these thirst buckets to fall the fuck BACK. And whatever Diana's musty ass think she's gon try, she better guess again. I'm telling you if Mike plays my girl Pen.. I will whoop his skinny ass. Baby hairs my ass, that nigga will lose all his edges, curls, balls and dick! 



Author's Response:

LMFAOOOOOOOOO girl you send me!!!  Look at you ready to snatch Michael's edges!!!! DEAD!!!!!!!!  Diana is a resident of delution.  She's been around Michael fo rall that time and he swerves her every time yet still shes doing what she doin.  She's in for a rude ass awakening.  Yeah Pen and Michael vowed to tell each other if anything untowards happens with either of them.  He does need to handle his business and he will trust me.  Thank you for reading hun.  Your reviews are life.  LOL <3 

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 02:05 pm Title: Well...Welll...Well...

Btw, I pay an homage to you in my next update of Sugar Baby :P



Author's Response:

I seenT It girl I seenT ET!!! LMAO

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 01:17 pm Title: Well...Welll...Well...

Look, I'ma need for miss thotting ass Diana to get her life. She thinking she got something going on when she doesn't and about to be looking real stupid after while. And this Cece chick, gots to go. She's working my damn nerves too right along with that bitch ass Diana. Thots, I tell ya!!!! 

And Michael and Pen are so cute together, I swear. They're gonna be a true power couple (I hope lol). But he can't be mad at Fenty because ol dude ain't know they was together in the first place. But I hope Mike don't grill him. Who am I kidding, Mike is literally gonna scare the nigga half to death.

Great chapter. I so love this story so much. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

LOL Diana is a hot mess dipped in lunacy.  I love Michael and Pen's interaction.  It's so easy and layed back when they are on the same page.  And you're right Fenty didn't know about him and Pen because the chose to keep it hidden for the mean time.  Thank you so much for reading my story.  I love bot of yours too!!! <3

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 12:22 pm Title: Well...Welll...Well...

I just have this hunch Fenty is gonna make another move... I can't wait til Michael fires his ass! 

And yeah he needs to block Cece's number from his phone before she gets him in trouble.



Author's Response:

Yeah Fenty left that kind of feeling didn't he?  As for Cece she's a minor blip compared to what will happen in the future with you know who LOL.  Thank you for reading bb! <3

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 12:02 pm Title: Well...Welll...Well...

Michael knows everything. He's like, "yup he wants you" and she's all nah and Fenty like fuck yeah girl

Why she proud about letting somebody hit it raw? Girl, you could catch something and you're completely happy about it? Diana, please, go somewhere and get tested. Your pussy ain't some magical non catching trap okay? Like, you could catch something and ya shit fall out then what you gon say? 

Let Diana have El Debarge. Don't nobody care, gawd!

Oh, and I don't know how to add videos. I never did that before baby girl :(



Author's Response:

Lawwwwdd Michael is going to rub it in in th future.  You can res assured lmao.  Diana is trifling as hell and El Debarge  Lawwwwd.  I haven't used that one yet so Imma steal it LMAOOOOOOOOO!!!!! She's nasty and classless.  Thank you for reading bew.  I'll have to experiment with the video thing.  I need it for the next chaper!!! :*(((((

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 11:54 am Title: Well...Welll...Well...

Wait, did Pen see the text?

Even if Diana didn't know that they had broken up, she'd already be delusional.

Michael...Michael...Michael. Dude can't even be classy whilst trying to make it up to Pen? smh.



Author's Response:

No she didn't see it because of how they are positioned on the bed.  Diana lives in lala land as a matter of fact she's not only a citizen she's the president.  LOL  Don't worry his redemtion will be BOSS!!! Thank you fo reading hunnay!! <3

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 11:52 am Title: Well...Welll...Well...

WANTED TO BE THE FIRST TO SAY SOMETHING

IM CHILDISH SO HERE I AM

OKAY IMA GO READ NOW



Author's Response:

LMAOOO <3

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2014 06:40 pm Title: Dry...Then Wet...

First of all, I can honestly say that when I was little, I loved the song. Then when I was a teenager, I couldn't stand it at all. Don't ask why because I really don't know either lmao

But after watching Bad 25, I loved it way more than I ever thought I could

Great chapter, babe!

I'm VERY happy



Author's Response:

Phew I'm glad you got a new appreciation for the song.  That way it wasn't irksome to see it pop up in the story.  LOL It was a given and an inevitability though LMAOOOOOOOO. I'm Gladdddd I could bring you some joy bew!! Love ya. ;) <333  Thank you for the support as always!!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2014 11:39 pm Title: Dry...Then Wet...

I know the fuckery is afoot so I'm not even gonna get my hopes up. I'm glad they talked and that Pen is making his ass work for it through this lil probationary period. She's doing the right thing. He says he only wants her so his actions better ALWAYS reflect that. Or I will hop through this story and put my foot up his narrow ass. Anyway, lol at his pressedness over Fenty. Good. A lil jealousy over him or other guys will keep his ass on his toes. Don't slip up! Like Rihanna said in her song, don't slip Cuz a nigga might push up on it. Lmao. So Michael being jealous means he will work that much harder to keep Pen. And I'm glad she's witholding the good good from him too. So when she does decide to give it to him, his ass will realize what he missed and how them trash box havin hoes have nothing on her. When Pen puts it down, that nigga would be sleep. But with them loose wack weak puss havin hoes, he'd be wide awake always. 🐸a49;a039; Lmao anyway, I hope he don't fuck this up with her. 



Author's Response:

Yeah he has a jealous streak and sometimes jealousy can caus eyou to do stupid shit.  Let's hope Michael can get a grip on it and curb it before shit pops off.  He's a hard worker when it comes to keeping a relationship so thats a plus for him.  Thank you for reading hun!! <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2014 09:39 pm Title: Dry...Then Wet...

Awww!! They love each other!! and OMG he is a freak! No shame at all... I really hope he keeps his selfish asshole mode deactivated. 

Great chapter as always!



Author's Response:

NO SHAME in his game AT all lol!!! He might have jealous asshole mode on standby tho.  LOL. Thank you as always Bb!!! <333

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2014 07:57 pm Title: Dry...Then Wet...

I'm so glad she didn't leave his place! Now, she's just got to keep inducing the thirst.



Author's Response:

Yeah she was just stunned at first so she had to find a little retreat.  "In the end the thirst...always wins!"  LOL That's a line from Blade III.  Thank you for reading doll!! <3

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