Date: Oct 23, 2014 06:56 pm Title: Plain Plane Plans...
Glad to see he's getting a head start in shutting these thirst bucket ass hoes down! I wanna see more of that. And smh at him and his love for KFC. He is a true mess. But let me get to the meat, no pun intended. If there were ever the epitome of a basic bitch, it would be Diana's funky rotten pussy ass! BITTCCHHHHHH I have never seen such complete desperation and delusion. Michael don't want your raggedy ass and she got life all the way fucked up if she thinks she's gon get between Mike and Pen!!!!! She can stay pressed and stay fucking Elard's bum ass. How you fuckin a nigga who can't even pay for his own food? Bitch stays losing! No ma'am. That bitch better stay in her place for real. She can stay mad that Pen is gon always have the man she wants while she's fuckin her leftovers. These hoes are delusional as hell chile.
Author's Response:
LMAO Yup he's closing the dick shop up for one customer. Diana is so tired nobody likes her AT ALL but she's convinced she's the shit. Elard as triflin as he is does make a lot of money. He's paid that's one of the reasons Diana on his ass. He was just being calous. Even with realizing Pen might have already won she has blinders on. Dumb and delusional like you said. Thank you for reading hun <333
Date: Oct 23, 2014 06:26 pm Title: Plain Plane Plans...
That's right, Michael shut them other hoes down!! That picture of him with the tattoos... omg its so sexy.
I don't like Diana and Elard right now... I don't know what's about to happen there, but I don't like where its going!!
And Pen knows she wants to move on in.
Author's Response:
Yeah he's keeping true to his word. Michael don't mess around when he's in love. I love that pic too it takes so long to make them look real LOL. Yeah keep your eyes on those too they up to no good. Thank you for reveiwing Bb! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2014 08:47 pm Title: Parisian Lights and Nights...
Jesus Christ!!! They're fucking in the fucking public now. No shame in their game, huh?!? And Mike better get to working on that. H made a promise.
Great chapter and the sex scenes were haaawwwt!!!!!
Author's Response:
Sexing in the open like it aignt even nothing. "I aint worried bout nothin...nigga I aint worried bout nothin..." LMAO I'm glad you like the lovin. ;) Thank you for reading hun!! <333
Date: Oct 21, 2014 07:03 pm Title: Parisian Lights and Nights...
They just fucking all out in public now huh?? Lmao nasty asses. But I'm glad Pen asked him what she did. Enough is enough, he def needs to handle his biz regarding these hoes. If he truly loves Pen, he's gonna make sure he does what needs to be done. Always. And she will do the same.
Author's Response:
I'ts a good thing they were in a bit of a secluded spot doing the nasty LMAO. They are open as hell!! Yesss Pen even though Pen didn't see the text she knew it was from some old girl from the hints he had given. When Michael loves he loves hard and so does Pen but misunderstandings will get in the way from time to time. Thank you for your words always hun! Much appreciated. <333
Date: Oct 21, 2014 06:04 pm Title: Parisian Lights and Nights...
Michael better take care of that like he promised! Gosh! Him and Pen are sooooo sweet together! I love this couple probably more than I love my own couples I've created!
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about your couples. LOL I do love how him and Pen are so easy and loving together. Thank you for the support always hun. It's motivation! :))) <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2014 12:25 pm Title: Just Another Love TKO...
I came up with a theme song for this story...it's Already Taken by Trey Songz lol. This chapter.....this damn chapter....Michael is too sexy in this story. Pen finally took him off probation they're about to be humping day and night like horny teenagers 😩😩😩😩😩 help us Lord the cold showers will be REAL. Lmaooo great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Bb. Yessssssss these two going to be going at it. But the drama will ensue :((((( OMG that song is perfect for the story. He don't want to be a player no more. SPRUNG!!!! Thank you for reading again hun. <333
Date: Oct 18, 2014 11:28 pm Title: Just Another Love TKO...
I have to ask you something important! So if you can, please email me at squirtsmacintoshbuttersnaps@yahoo.com It's nothing bad, so don't freak out lol
Love ya!
Author's Response:
I'll to that today. LOL <333
Date: Oct 18, 2014 03:09 pm Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...
Tut, Delete any posts by Moira. She did a terrible thing to this site. As it turns out, she had lied/manipulated everyone just to get attention! Don't believe anything she tells you, and just steer clear of her!
But as for the story, Love it so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the heads up and reading. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2014 12:56 pm Title: Just Another Love TKO...
yeah as soon as I heard Isley brother my body went YAAAAAAAAASSSSS!!!! lol good CHAPPIE!!
Author's Response:
Yeahhhhh that song is sexy!!! Sigh!! Thank you for reading hun!!! :))))))
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2014 08:59 am Title: Just Another Love TKO...
I felt like it was too early in the morning for me to be reading that scene
I just
It's too early for this
I'm not even fully awake. I got like, three hours of sleep.
I'm just
I don't know what else to say
They did that 
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooooooooooo
Thank you for reading Bb!!!!
Date: Oct 17, 2014 06:04 pm Title: Just Another Love TKO...
Well damn!!! He hittin the good good raw now? Lmao aw shit. Pen's birth control game better be mad proper or she gon get knocked up ASAP. Lol. Good to see her be so supportive and loving his art too, and I dig the fact that she's open to him following his dreams. Whether it be art, music or both. She's a good woman. Michael better cherish her, worship her and be glad as fuck that he has a woman like her. She ain't like them other wack ass, loose cooch ran thru hoes he used to mess with. Pen is a keeper.
Author's Response:
Pen is very supportive and sure is a keeper. We will see there strenght tested soon!! Thanks for reading hun!! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2014 09:09 am Title: Film And Momentary Satiation...
Uh uh! How are you gonna just put up a story this good and think it's okay?! This story is greattttt! Took me a few days to read all together but it's so good I didn't mind. I always know a story is good if I think about the characters at random times like in school when I'm supposed to be paying attention in class or something and I definitely did. Also, I love a story where the female lead is memorable and likable. That's definitely Pen. I love how your characters have personality and your description is sooo good that I can literally picture everything that's happening (#GOALS!). The sex scenes...good LORD the sex scenes are deliciously descriptive. I barely ever actually look forward to sex scenes or should I say I can barely ever say they're one of the best aspects of a story/books but this story right here..it. is. one. of. THE. best. aspects. Like damn, who did you learn from? Lmao. No but seriously there's a 100 things–big and small–I could list that I love about this story (especially the humor. I actually laughed out loud more times that I should have in more public places than I should have 😩 looking like a lunatic Lmao!). You're a great writer. There's about a handful of authors on this site who add true FLAVOR and STYLE to their writing (I would be shady and name them, but no nooo no shade *nicki voice*) and you are definitely one of them. LOVE it!
Author's Response:
I don't even know where to begn to thank you for the monumental compliments you paid me in your review!!! THANK YOU!!! Thank you so much it means alot to hear YOU say that seeing how I'm a fiend for Mike and Nikki. LAWDDDDD!!! I always like to put a little of my personality into the stories I write and humor is a big part of who I am. I love to laugh and make people laugh and I'm easy going and laid back. As for the sex scenes those come from my dirty , dirty mind LMAOOOOOO My imagination due to experience takes me places especially when it comes to the BAE These are the things on some level or the other we wish we could have accomplished with MJ...Personally LOL. I'm happy you enjoyed it. And thank you again for the kind words. <333 ;))) you make me feel like------>
Date: Oct 15, 2014 07:28 pm Title: Film And Momentary Satiation...
OMG Michael was so sexy in this chapter... Keep going! I'm dying to find out what happens next.
Author's Response:
He's way too delish for me to cope with him lol. I hope you like the new chapter. There's more sexiness afoot!! Thank you for reading and reviewing dollface!! <333 you are way too aborable btw :))))
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2014 02:58 am Title: Film And Momentary Satiation...
Ohh love me some Pharell mmm. And Jesus Christ girl you can write a sex scene, Imma need a cold shower like NOW!
Btw, new YT code won't work here for videos so on the video on YT, go to Share>Embed>Show More>tick 'Use Old Embed Code'. Copy that into 'HTML' here and voila!
Author's Response:
You are my ...You are my...You are my lovely one. Yooooooouuuuuu Arrrrreeeeee Myyyyyy Loveleeeeeeeeeee Juan!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much girl I appreciate the help. As for the loving have a clean extra pair ready for the next chapter. ;)))))))))))))) Thank you for reading hun <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2014 10:45 pm Title: Film And Momentary Satiation...
He's telling more folks its his girl and just akgksagsdkhdkfhdskfhdkfda dfhdkfhadkfhakfdhsfd
but yeah, he needs to cut the rest loose already and just be with her because yeah
they ain't worth losing her over ya know?
Author's Response:
Yup He's claiming her to hi homies so that's a start. He's going to chin check the hoes soon tho just you wait Bb. I think he realizes Pen is worth too much to him to loose over "trash boxes" LOL Thank you for reading Bb girl!! Love ya like cooked food! <3