Date: Oct 30, 2014 04:46 pm Title: Panic...Clean Up On Isle 7...
I'm glad regardless of what was going on, Michael stayed by her side! Whew he almost killed Elard! I laughed out loud when he actually said his name... correctly! Oh you know he's serious. lol
Author's Response:
I know right. He was dead ass so he addressed him correctly. Don't expect that to last long tho. LMAO <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2014 08:46 am Title: Panic...Clean Up On Isle 7...
My poor girl had one of those awful attacks. I've been there. I know exactly what that feels like. Just ugh, fuck Elard and Diana.
Please, just make them go away. I'm in tears because of the pain! Why do you do these things to me? All I ever did was love you. That's all I did :(
Great update though. If there's a second part, I'm pumped as hell for it.
Do I have to bribe you?
Author's Response:
Hmmmmmm Panckes? *Scratches chin and thinks... Well 
I like pancakes. But don't you fret hun the second part will be up in a minute.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2014 08:10 pm Title: Panic...Clean Up On Isle 7...
Oh God. My poor Pen had a serious major panic attack. But I'm so glad she's doing well now. Thank you Jesus!!!! And Mike was really gonna kill Elard the way he had him in choke hold I was like "zayuuum, son. You gone kill em!!!" Lol. Anywho, I know he's feeling some type of way about the fact that Pen' s panic attack was because of him...which is... true. But he shouldn't beat himself up about it tho. I mean, it's understandable that he saw them and he thought something was going on but it really wasn't. But that Elard needs to get his ass on somewhere. He fucking shit up. Gaaahhh!!!! Hopefully Michael let Pen explain. He owe her that much.
Great chapter girl. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Yeah poor Pen. She didn't even see it coming caus she hadn't experienced them in so long. Michael had him Hemmed UP!! LMAO. He's not done with him yet though. ;) You will see. LOL Thank you for reading bew!!! <333
Date: Oct 29, 2014 07:41 pm Title: Panic...Clean Up On Isle 7...
Panic attacks huh? I ain't gon lie, I was hoping she was pregnant. Lol. For real. But I guess they have time for that though. And I'm so glad they know Elard is a lying, cheating piece of shit. Michael is her man now and he makes her happy. They need to accept and respect that. Anyway, I hope Michael believes that NOTHING happened in her apartment. He needs to know that Pen AINT shit like Nye's stankin ass. She would not cheat on him and betray him like that. Especially since its been done to her. No MAAM. Ugh I'm so irritated. Elard needs to fuckin die already and take Diana's raggedy ass with him. And it's really finna piss me off because this shit is affecting Pen's health. I just can't. I hope she will be ok.
Author's Response:
Not confirming or denying anything just yet. ;)) But yeah it's not good when someone' health and well being gets affected by bullshit that did not need to happen in the first place. Thank you so much for reading and your support!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2014 08:21 pm Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
Oh shit!! What's happening to Pen!!? And Michael... ugh I'm disappointed... why didn't you just immediately start beating Elard's ass that's what should have happened!
Continue soon! I''m so hooked.
Author's Response:
Yeah Michael reacted badly but can you blame him things did look fishy. He should have had more faith in Pen though that's the thing. He should have beat him to a bloody pulp right then and there!!. As for Pen all will be revealed in the next chapter. Spoiler alert it will affect the rest of the story. Thank you for reading hun. Update coming soon. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2014 03:03 am Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
well damn I think she is under too much stress he didn't look o. the ground?!!! like is you stupid? if he got his clothes on and she back there wow mike you think too dang quick... love the chapters
Author's Response:
Yup stress is a factor in why she passed out. You have to think all Michael saw was Elard with no shirt and his pants unbuckled and Pen taking a shower before coing out in a towel. Elard wanted it to look fishy and he succeeded sadly. Michael should have beat him then and there. but he will get his. Thank you so much for reading!! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2014 11:25 pm Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
Elohim better call Tyrone and tell him to come get his shit! Okay let me go back up here and read lmaoo I don't watch Real Housewives, so I feels Elardo on that for real. I never got into it. Are you? I'm making conversatiion as I read. This is so sad.
If Diana touches Pen, I'm not even worried. Pen will beat her ass down and I can taste it already. If this happens I want it on tape.
THESE MOTHAFUCKAS
FUCK ELARD AND HIS WEAK ASS DICK GAME
AND FUCK DIANA TOO
I HATE THESE PEOPLE SO MUCH
WHY IS THIS HAPPENING TO ME?!?!? Shit was going good, but ya know whenever some good stuff is happening, something bad has to ruin it
I hope Mike cools off and knows that she wouldn't do this to him though
You've hurt me
I'm hurt
I'm hurting
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOO I should have added that song to the chapter!!!. As for the RealHousewives I watched the NYC and ATL ones when they first started for a little bit but lost interest really quick. Pen would beat Diana like she stole something even on an off day. It just might happen too LOL
Elardo is a piece of doo doo. I know y'all wanted to jump him in an ally LOL.
I give you hugs for the hurt Ive caused...
Hugs? * arms outstretched.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2014 11:15 pm Title: Parisian Lights and Nights...
I told you I was reading this again
Date: Oct 25, 2014 04:17 pm Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
Chile... I'm so pissed off I can't even comment. Elard's dusty dick ass and Diana both need to go somewhere and die. Michael needs to hear Pen out. It is definitely not what he thinks at all. I wish he would whoop Elard's sorry ass. Tryna cause drama to break them up is NOT gon happen. Fuck OUTTA here with this sorry ass shit. I wonder why Pen passed out. I hope she's ok. Lawd I'm mad as hell. I can't.
Author's Response:
LAwdddd I thought for sure you were going to go INNNN on ole boy. He is a sneaky snake of a bastard. I don't want to give too much away but he will get hi comeupance. All will be revealed about Pen next chapter. Thank you so much for reading hun! <3 ;)))
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2014 03:47 pm Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
My ass is about to jump into this story through this damn tablet and kill me some motherfuckas TODAY. Like, I figure Elard thirty ass would do some shit like that. But one thing I know for sure is Michael better let Pen explain just like she did for him. Cause if not then I'ma have to beat his scrawny ass too. Btw, I hope Pen is okay.
Girl, why you had to do this to me. Laawwddd!!!!! I hate you for this, lol.
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO When I read "I hate you for this." I was dying. I know Elard really does need a beat down and he has it coming don't you worry. I know Pen did give Michael his chance so he should do the same for her. Even though it took her months to give him his. LOL. The story of why Pen passes out is coming up!! Thank you so much for reading Girl!! <333
Date: Oct 25, 2014 03:08 pm Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
I stopped reviewing, sorry about that. It's mainly because it seems to have become focused around sex. Don't get me wrong, some is good, but when it gets to be every chapter and a sizable portion of the chapter, I fade out as a reader/commentor.
This was an interesting switch up. Why did she black out? Is she pregnant? Does she have asthma? Elard's diseased ass needs to get out.
Author's Response:
I'm going to be very honest with you. This story will have it's times where sex is involved. However it's never meant to be the complete focus of the story nor will it be just random. Each scene has it's purpose. This story will have quite a few plot twists thrown at the reader some good, some that will make you angry and some that will make you cry. In those chapters where there is sex it's never just that, some answers to questions also other character P.O.V. might just be in there to full out the story and catch the growth of the relationship. I want it to come across as real as possible and like real couples just starting out sex happens. I appreciate the honesty and hope you will give the story a chance to show you that though the sex is present there is a bigger picture.
As for Elard's ass he's just plain ugh. The plot will thicken with him.
As for why Pen passed out that will be in the next chapter. It's very integral to the rest of the story.
Thank you again for reading and giving me your thoughts <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2014 10:03 am Title: Plain Plane Plans...
You know what. It is time for Diana ratchet stanky dirty ass to get the fuck on. She is not about to break up Mike's and Pen's relationship. Nuh uh uh. Not on my watch. And the flight attendant tho. Ik her ass felt played fr. See that's what happen when you try to flirt and touchy feel upon men who nachos. Lol.
Great chapter. I loved it. And now I'm anxious to know what's gonna happen next.
Author's Response:
It's like you can smell the skank through the computer am I right. I smell it in every word I write that comes from her LMAO. That flight attendant was shocked as hell thought she was about to moonwalk in the skies with the Force...Fuck outta here. I posted the new chapter so your blood pressure will rise up a little. Thank you so much for reading hun!! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2014 03:22 pm Title: Plain Plane Plans...
Diana can have Elardo. Don't nobody care, Diana. Just take Elardo and FLOAT
Float ooooooooonnnnnn
No one cares
The focus is Michael and Pen
Diana is nothing but that fat part on a good roast that no one wants to eat. You know what I'm talking about. It doesn't have any taste at all and that's how I feel about her.
She is air
I taste nothing
I'm with Michael though. If I had a D? I'd be married to Lupita right now
No shame
NO SHAME
Author's Response:
Yeah Lupita is gorg!!!!!!! She would get the d from me too LMAO. Eldarado and Diana are trying it for real. I don't eat meat but I know what you mean by tastless trash. Elard better have his fill of that bullshit!! Thank you so much for reading Bb!! <333 Love ya to bits!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2014 03:12 pm Title: Parisian Lights and Nights...
Omg
I can't
Let me get my ass over to the latest update but I know I'm coming back to read this again
Author's Response:
I'll just leave this here. LOL
Date: Oct 24, 2014 06:11 am Title: Clean Slate...
I just recently began reading this fic and just want to say that I love it. I really like your Michael character. I love the fact that he is arrogrant, brazen, and just so full of himself. I like to believe that behind closed doors the real MJ was just a little bit arrogant. I really believe that he tried to down play his talent in the public but in reality he knew he was the shiznick.
Keep it up!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much hun and welcome to the story. I also think the behind the scenes MJ knew he was the bomb lol. I hope you continue to enjot the story as it progresses drop me a line anytime and ask any question. I will be happy to answer it. <3 :)))