Date: Nov 12, 2014 01:09 pm Title: Going Back To Cali...
Whoa whoa whoa Joseph was just way outta line. I can't wait to see how Michael handles his dad. This chapter was so sweet and funny I love the sense of humor you have Mike in this story it fits him really well! continue soon!! I've got my eyes on your other story but haven't gotten a chance to sit down and read it yet but it's on my radar!
Author's Response:
Oh Michael is going to handle Joe like worn out luggage trust me. I wanted it to be a lot lighter than the past few chapters. The heavyness is not over but for now we can laugh a little. Can't wait to hear your feedback for the other story. It's ony a three parter though!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2014 10:45 pm Title: Going Back To Cali...
Aww pen was nervous meeting the fam but they love her the moment they met her. Jergreaseman ass need to gtfo somewherw like now!!! Last but not least, Joe. im like so ready to jump into this story and beat his old stanking ass to death. talking about Pen like that . i cant wait for Mike to go ham on that bastard. ugh!!!!!
btw: thanks for saving me the tears. i believe i cried enough last chapter, lol.
update soon. i smell pure dram from an inch away.
Author's Response:
Yeah she was shaking lol. Mama KJ loves her and so do the sisters she met. As for Jermaisins he tried it lmao. He won't be the pain in the ass tho. (spoiler alert) I was saving myself the tears too. Zips lips on the drama lol! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2014 07:40 pm Title: Going Back To Cali...
TEAR HIS ASS UP, Mike.
It was all good until his donkey head ass wanted to walk up in there and why is Katherine so damn quiet? She betta not be lettin Joe talk to her like that. Ain't nobody got time for that but I hope Michael truly tears Joseph into pieces and gives him a piece of his mind for insulting Pen like somethin wrong wit him even tho it is. GOD, he irks me all the way down to my freakin SOUL i swear!! Girl, you finna have a chick have a heart attack with his dumb ass. Damn i can't wait until you update. Joseph needs to be read from head to toe ASAP. I'm jus waitin on it but brruuhh im ready for the next chapter.
Anway, on to lighter things, I love Michael in this and the way Janet acts. Yasss I love me some Janet Jackson, Tut, you just don't know! That "badunkadunk" lmfao.
Author's Response:
Joe has balls of steel girl only o an extent though and Michael is about to read him cover to cover. I love Janet too. I'll update soon so look out for it!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2014 01:18 am Title: Nature's Cruel Joke...
god, im literally in tears here. This is so sad to read. I pray that she gets through this thing with the help of Mike. Tbh, i know she's gonna beat this because she is strong and brave. but i also feel sorry for mike because he finally finds someone he know he can trust and love forever only to be put in a situation where he might lose her forever. i just hope everything goes good at her appointment.
Author's Response:
Awwwwwe Hugs hun!! I choked up a few times writing this too. She is strong and she has her support system so they will be there for her. <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2014 07:17 pm Title: Nature's Cruel Joke...
Oh Pen... I'm speechless. I hope she beats this thing, I know its going to be hard on her... Poor Michael, he finally finds someone he loves that he can trust and now he has to fear losing her...
Author's Response:
Everything is sad and upside down now. Michael is devastated because he found his one and is on the verge of losing her but he's going to fight along with her. <333
Date: Nov 08, 2014 04:15 pm Title: Nature's Cruel Joke...
I'm just speechless. Poor Pen!!!!!! I pray thAt she remains healthy and strong and that Michael stays right by her side as her knight in shining armor. Lawd... I can't.
Author's Response:
It's going to be ruff for the next couple of chapters. And Diana has not shown her ass yet so that'll be happening in the midst of all this too. Hang in there with me. There's a light.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2014 03:17 pm Title: Refurnish...
I love the movie Edward Scissorhands!!! It's like actually one of my favorites! WHAT IS THIS NEWS!!!??? I take it its sad news... :(
But yeah... Michael needs to get rid of all that nasty furniture that ho's been on...
BTW I don't know how I missed this update, but I'm glad I found it! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hey yeah your just in time for the update. I'm about to post it now. It's going to be a ruff next couple of chapters. :(((( I'm glad you got the chance to catch up!! <333
Date: Nov 04, 2014 11:22 pm Title: Refurnish...
Cece, bitch boo bye! You are a jump off and you're done. Get over it ho. Michael wasn't aggressive enough with that bitch. She came at Pen sideways too much for my liking. That same aggression and pressedness he shows with Fenty and Elard's sorry ass, he Shoulda been the same with that thirsty ass bitch. Ugh. Anyway, I know some bad news is coming. These two can never win. Poor Pen. Smh
Author's Response:
Yeah Michael was a little soft on Cece but I guess it was because he had known her for so long. He thought he had his cake with her but someone was bout to catch feelings. Don't worry they will win...eventually :((( Giving out hugs in advance. <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2014 10:42 pm Title: Refurnish...
Whoo, Cece was about to get it from Pen. She was making herself Look dumb. She's just another thirsty ho, smdh. Anyway, Pen is a mess for making Mike take out all the new furniture for new one. I don't blame her either. I wouldn't want to be laid up in something he fucked other bitches in/on. Anyway, Im nervous as to what the results are. I guess I have to get ready to brace myself for what's to come next. Lawd jesus!!!!
Btw :you're very good with drawing. I can't draw worth shit, kml.
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
LOL these chicks be tryin it. I guess she was assuming her and Michael was going to be together but you know what happens when you ASS U ME!! As for the next chapter... I'm send out a major love... <333 And thank you Drawing is one of my biggest passions!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2014 06:32 pm Title: Refurnish...
I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOURE ABOUT TO DO BUT I DONT LIKE THE FEELING IM GETTING. But girl this story is bomb as shit and I dont know why it took me so long to read it but im finally here. Pens character is the shit and I aint lying. I love how you make her act . Strong, confident, and she aint sorry and weak which is a major pull in for me. But anyway, I wonder whats wrong with her. Is she sick with some sort of incurable disease? You need to let me know ASAP. Meaing ima be waiting on that next chapter like I wait on food. SERIOUSLY. May I also say your sex scenes are magnificent ima have to take notes but anyhoo , im rady for the next chapter .
Oh and FUCK elardos ass.
Author's Response:
Yaayyyyyy welcome to the story. I'm glad you finally got a chance to read it. Thank you so much for the compliments!! As you know I love your stories. The road is going to get a little bumpy in the next few chapters is all I'm going to say. Working on the new chapter RN!! Thank you again for reading!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2014 12:21 am Title: Cleaned Up Isle 7...
"Bitch ass Elard" that's what i call him too Mike.
Ella Enchanted shoulda got his ass choked four times in one day if you ask me. The nerve of this bastard. I am still pressed like a tux over that shit he pulled. How dare he? How dare he have the brain cells to function that way?!?! How dare he. Ugh!!
I loved this!
First of all, I'll love you either way. I'm with you all the way. You know that, girl! You're my Nuru, my bae, my all <3
Author's Response:
"Ella Enchanted" I'm crying!!! I loved that movie by the way. That dude had the balls of King Kong in words only. When it came time to fight they shriveled up into cockroach balls. I'm glad you are here for the ride bew. In it for the long haul!! I appreciate that. It's about to get bumpy so just hang on ok. Thank you for always reading. Love ya tew!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2014 04:47 pm Title: Cleaned Up Isle 7...
I knew these two would be happy all over again. Yaaaay!!! But Mike's flashback tho, lol. Elard is such a fucking pussy. Nigga talking about he ain't scared of Mike. Like really?? Nigga you scared of Big Mike alright. But I'm so happy he backed out of Thottie Diana's plan. He's smart. But it's clear she still got brain damage. Like, bitch, Michael doesn't want your loose poon having ass. Sit ya ass down somewhere. Better yet, go getcho life. She really need to chill or else Pen is gonna get on that ass fr fr. I hope she does soon. I'll just wait on it.
Great chapter. Loved it :):):):):):)
Author's Response:
Yayyyyyy yes they are back and strong too. Elard is such a punk. I think he was trying to convince himself he isn't afraid of Michael more than anybody else LMAO. Yessss Diana will have her comupance too. Soon but they hav to get thorugh a few things first. Thank you for reading bew!! <333
Date: Nov 02, 2014 12:29 pm Title: Cleaned Up Isle 7...
Just lost my whole comment Cuz this fuck ass phone froze! Ugh! Dammit, I'll just post cliff notes now.
Glad Mike and Pen are good and they've made up. I think this has made them stronger. They've gotta trust each other and all will be good. I hope she will be ok health wise too.
Elard's OL retarded name having ass finally got the message! Good riddance nigga. Pen is gone and never to return. She has a man that loves her and will never cheat on her. So take yo ass on.
This bitch Diana needs to be made into a believer. Bitch is too cocky to be so fuckin delusional. MIchael will NEVER want you ho! Get it thru your head. If his ass paid you dust before he ever met Pen, your fishy puss havin ass doesn't have a snowball's chance in hell now! Michael needs to get his sisters to beat this bitch ass. Stomp a bone out her ass. I'm past sick of her. Mike needs to get his locks changed and publicly humiliate this ho. If she comes anywhere near this man's place, she's gon be in for a rude awakening when she sees Pen lives there and she ain't goin NOWHERE. This bitch better get lost asap. It's a wrap for her.
Author's Response:
That's happened to me to hun so I know how you feel. Sometimes the comment is so bomb and you can never regain the essence LOL. One villian down a few more to go. Diana is dense as hell. I'm not sure she's operating on all cylinders and it will show even more soon. Thank you for reading hun. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2014 03:41 pm Title: Panic...Clean Up On Isle 7...
Elard's a lil bitch. Plain and simple. So thrilled to see his lame ass getting choked. He could've given him a black eye but suffocating him will suffice. Heh heh I'm sure his life flashed before his eyes at that moment. XD
Oh my gosh, Pen's mom is the cutest! ABC's? Ahahahaha too cute! I'm glad that Pen was able to tell her parents what went down between her and Elard... now he def won't be getting back into their good graces anytime soon. Suckaaaa
Hopefully these two lovebirds will get it together. They're too cute to be fighting over petty shit.
Author's Response:
Hahahahaa her mom is cute isn't she? Yep so now Elard can't come through with no BS like he tried before. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2014 03:33 pm Title: The Slush Hits The Fan...The Mess Is Made...
Girl, sorry for my sporadic comments! I swear, school is killing me right now. Just finished a midterm so I decided to play catch up.
SO... WTF IS UP WITH ELARD?? As if him doing her dirty like that will have her come running back to him. STUPID IDIOT.
As for Mike, maybe he shouldn't have blown up like that so soon. I mean, damn atleast stay and kick Elard's ass and then ask questions. LMAO
Anywho, I'm still a supporter no doubt about it! Just know that if I haven't been reviewing then well you know... school's being a bitch.
Author's Response:
Its all good hun. I know you're busy with school and everything. The story will always be here for you to read. Comment when you can bew I appreciate it either way!! Elard is a toast POS that's what. No shame. <333