[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2014 01:15 pm Title: Refurnish...
CeCe
Also, Edward <3 <3 Probably one of my very first crushes ever. I was in love. Why did she put him in that water bed though? He has scissors for hands, ma'am. Dis ain't be smart move!
Author's Response:
Yup I loved Edwasr too!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2014 10:35 pm Title: Nothing But Surprises...
Awww Michael cried while gushing about Pen!?! How sweeet!! And yeah what the fuck is Randy doing in there? I don't like it. The way he was quick to jump on that 'trouble in paradise' comment... uh uh... don't try it brotha.
Author's Response:
Yessssss He is such a softie when it comes to his Pen!!! SMH Girl Randy took a wrong turn entering that room. He thinks he too slick for his own good. He must not know ell enough that Michael don't play. <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2014 07:55 pm Title: Nothing But Surprises...
Randy is asking for an ass whoopen and it aint even funny yo!! Lol at Pen explaining to ol girl about the engagement. They always gotta think you pregnant if you aint over 30 or somethin lmaooo. Anyway great chapter girl! My review would've been longer but im on my phone! But I hate to see this end! DDDD: but can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
Randy has an allergy to life it seems cause he's just begging to be done away with. LMAO. That's Cali and Pen get them together and it's pure MESS!!!
There's like maybe 7 or 8 Chapters to go. Unless I extend it.
IT's all good girl. I'm just glad you got to catch up with the story!! <333
Date: Nov 26, 2014 11:08 pm Title: Nothing But Surprises...
I don't know if I've ever left a review for this story or not, but I love it!! I'm so happy that these two are getting married. Randy needs to sit his ass down somewhere, and I'm sure Diana is still lurking around too.
Author's Response:
Hey there. Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you've been enjoying the story so far. Randy is not thinking with the right head and he's about to get knocked in both. Lol. As for Diana... gurl you're right. She's coming back into the picture soon. Smh. Girl delusional as hell!!! <333
Date: Nov 26, 2014 10:28 pm Title: Nothing But Surprises...
Umm honey chile if Randy's big block head ass don't stay in his damn lane!!!! He gon fuck around and have Michael beat his ass! Nigga better not even THINK of trying something with the FIANCÉE!! Damn that sounds good. I can't wait til the get married. But for real.. Randy gon fuck around and get his Boulder head cracked.
Author's Response:
Awwwwe I missed you last chapter. Wanted to know how you liked Michael's proposal!!! I'm lmao at "Boulder Block head ass". Too bad his brain ain't filling up all the corners of that colossal cranium because he diggin his own grave right now. Fiancé does sound pretty good for Pen. They both came so far. :)) <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2014 09:40 pm Title: Nothing But Surprises...
Carol is trying to figure out what the hell is going on with her nosey ass even though she ain't say nothing. But the looks she was giving Mike and Pen. And poor Pen hates when people give her the pity looks. I'm surprised she didn't go off on Michael for telling mama Kat. And in I'm so much shock. Cali and Saul now?!?!? Wheeeet??? Those are gonna be the crazy couples for the rest of the story til it's ending.
But....Randy. I feel like he's gonna start something that's he's gonna regret starting and fuck around and get hurt. Randy I'll advise your trickling ass to leave that room and go on boutcha bizness. Now!!!!!! Where is Michael, Janet, somebody when you need em.
Great chapter girl. And I'm gonna hate it when this story comes to an ending. Noooooooo!!! But there better be a sequal. Ain't playin, I ain't playin *Madea voice* lol.
Author's Response:
Yeah Carol was being nosey as hell. Lmao. Yassssss girl Cali and Saul and they're going to be a HOT mess together but it will be sweet! As for Randy's high booty ass he really playin with his life at this point. As for a sequel. We will see ;) <333
Date: Nov 26, 2014 08:38 pm Title: Nothing But Surprises...
Lol I love Janet and Cali, they both had me cracking the fuck up for real.OOOH and I know randy greasy ass better not mess with pen!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yessss Cali and Janet are Tooo much. Wait till they get together in the same room!!! Randy taking his life for granted right now. Lmao
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2014 07:24 pm Title: Proposals And All Manners Of Sweet Treats...
O.M.G. With the M&Ms!!!! How cuuuuuute!!!! Pen bein creepy watching Michael sleep is so cute, though too lol
Til her dying breath.... I hope that's not foreshadowing of bad endings!!!
And daammmnnn their sex is always so hot.
Author's Response:
LOL I'm glad you like the M&Ms I Thought about it because Mike G (Michael's mentor in the story) Had called them M&M peanuts. LOL I was hoping it wouldn't be cheesy.
Zips lip on foreshadowing... Thank you always for reading!!! <333
Date: Nov 22, 2014 06:24 pm Title: Proposals And All Manners Of Sweet Treats...
Lol I love how you said 0 to 100 real quick
Author's Response:
LOL I'm glad you liked it!!! He really did though from sleeping to pouncing on Pen. LOL <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2014 04:22 pm Title: Proposals And All Manners Of Sweet Treats...
Omg!!!!!! This chapter was just the icing on the cake. I mean the whole thing with the M&M's was creative. But like I said last review that she'd say yes. I knew I was right all along. And the love making was HOT!!! I swear. Michael is such a romantic. I would love to be proposed to that way instead of the traditional way.
Love, love,loved it. :):):):)
Btw: the name of that song was called Am I Dreaming feat. His bro Jermaine. Never listened to it like talking about but I heard a little snippet of it. You actually gave away the answer when Mike sung Am I dreaming to Pen , lol. I hope my answer is correct. *cross fingers and toes* lol.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you loved it!!!!! I had to think really hard about how he would propose and this way seemed very him! LOL The song lyrics and titles I wa refering to did not include the song he sang to Pen. They are through out the chapter. LOL . It was all for fun anyway. However that is the name of the song he sang to Pen. I love it. I was watching the Victory Tour while I was writing and it's one of the songs they performed. The part I quoted was the part Michael sang on stage. It's such a beautiful concert. <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2014 10:55 am Title: Uhm...I Don't Think So...
I'm so glad I finally got to catch up! I've missed these two and this story just gets better and better. If this story is going to end the way I feel like it is, I know you're going to write it beautifully; you're such a great writer. I can't wait for Michael to propose, their love just keeps getting stronger and stronger.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! Yaayyyyyy I'm happy you got to catch up too. Still teatering on the edge as to how I'm going to end it all. I know their love is unbreakable with them being strong for each other. I'll be updating soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2014 06:04 pm Title: Uhm...I Don't Think So...
That picture is so goregous! And YES! Go Michael! You tell him. My Guilty until Proven Innocent Michael needs to learn a little bit about balls from your Michael LOL LOL.
And omg he's going to propose soon!?! I bet it's going to be the sweetest moment ever in Michael and Pen history! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Awe thank you so much hun :))) Yessss I agree with you on the GUPI Michael LMAO. Yessss girl he's going to propose he knows he's ready and he loves Pen so much and she loves him just as much. He's also scared to loose her even though he won't admit it to her because he wants to keep her positive. <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2014 06:32 pm Title: Uhm...I Don't Think So...
Whoo lawd have mercaaay!!!!! That Joe Jackson is something else I swear. Mike definitely got on his ass like white on rice real quick. I've been waiting for it. Lol. And now that Randy came into the picture, his nasty ass trying to share girls like nigga fuck on somewhere with that shit. He ain't no different from jermaine the manwhore. Uggh!!! And the secret is out now but we all know Katherine wouldn't dare say a word even if her life depended on it. But I just cant wait til he proposes to Pen tho. Hopefully she says yes. She'll be a crazy ass chick if she doesn't. But I'm 100% sure she will. They both love each other dearly/ a whole fucking lot.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Joe thought he had on his big boy shorts trying to show out in front of guests. Michael serve his ass some humble pie though. LOL Steven Randall is so trife. LMAOhe figured since Jermaine played him he could try to ease in on Michael's girl. He gor shut down like an old ass amusment park for it!! LOL. Yessss It's proposal time gurl! <333
Date: Nov 16, 2014 06:15 pm Title: Uhm...I Don't Think So...
So glad Michael checked his punk ass daddy! Furthermore, I will just get to it. Proposal time!! I'm here for this. I want him to propose and I want Pen to accept. This is MAJOR!!!!
Author's Response:
Yessssss this is very major. Michael was not having it with his father or his brothers for that matter lol. Thanks for reading hun!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Uhm...I Don't Think So...
First, Michael shut shit down with Joseph real quick. Throughout the entire time he was havin him in shut down mood I was screaming hallelujah and clapping because damn... he was just too damn rude but im glad Michael defended his mama. Lol about that deed shit. Sorry Joseph but yo name ain't on SHIET. So get the fuck onn!!
Secondly, lol at Randy! That nigga swore that Michael was gon let a jackson Train be ran on Pen. FUCK OUTTA HERE. Michael shut that down real quick. "You're not jermaine and I'm not you" lol he said fuck that sharin shit im stingy as shit. God, I love this Michael. He is funny, sexy, and masculine at the same time. I prefer that over a timid and shy Michael anyway, i dont know why tho. Its just my preference.
Thirdly, the whole Michael and Pen this close to fuckin thing was funny. Its cute that he calls her mama and lol at the the hipster and thuggish type stuff. I don't know but ima agree that the NYC can change a nigga.
Finally, HE'S PROPOSING! Ain't that cute!!!
Author's Response:
Michael read that ass like it was a novel LMAO. Joe had nothing to say at ALL. As for Randy he's a piece of work bu he aint done yet.
I love a strong confident Michael too. I think it's because I feel that he was that way in real life with the people he knew and loved. He showed his true self and from watching Vids of him being candid that's what I saw. So I know what you mean!
Him and Pen was too salty that their session got disturbed and Michael more so because it was for bullshit.
Michael is a hipster thug LMAO. Hipster in dress Thug in actions and attitudes.
Yessss he's about to pop the question girl!! <333