Date: Jan 09, 2015 07:21 pm Title: Delusional Conclusions...
Diana is so fucking dumb. Bitch he was getting bomb ass head from his WIFE! He ain't thinking about your rotten ass pussy. I really can't with his ho. Mike needs to hurt this bitch feelings and Fire her. It's not a game and if it was, clearly you lost before you were ever even entered. Mike is Pen's HUSBAND. Game over ho! I can't wait to see this bitch get humiliated and shut down. I actually wanna see her get her ass beat too but we'll see. I wish Janet could come beat her ass.
Author's Response:
She dumber than a bag of rocks but she feel she all that and a bag of chips. The ego can be a damaging illusion. Lol She will get shut down and HARD!! By Michael. I'll zip my lips as to the how and when but know it's coming. I think I could arrange for a beat down from Janet. Hmmmmmm. Lmao!! <333
Date: Jan 09, 2015 05:52 pm Title: Delusional Conclusions...
Ayeeeeee Michael was getting that good head foreal!!!!!!!! Lol they are freaky and cute at the same fucking time!!!!! Why Diana stank booty ass gotta ruin things!!! Like Michael don't want you!!!! He was just getting good head from his wifey lol!!!! And if Diana try to ruin their relationship, I will jump in the story and beat her ass!!!
Author's Response:
LMAOOO Right? Pen was doing his head in both the big one and the other big one lol ;) Diana is so crazy. She thought that was him coming around to liking her skank ass but Pen gave it to her good in that bathroon tho LOL. thank you for reading hun! <333
Date: Dec 30, 2014 09:12 am Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
Finally all caught up! Wondering if there is drama awaiting in NY? Why wrrent Pen's parents not notified of their engGment and nuptials? I can see hell breaking loose when Diana finds out!
Looking forward to seeing what happens in the next update!
Hope BEB final chapter is coming soon too! Lol!
Author's Response:
Yaayyyyy welcome back hun!! You kow there's drama waiting in NY LOL Diana has not been shut down just yet. I put in the end ontes of the last chapter that her parent do know. Michael didn't want most of hims fam knowing and that was the hush hush part. I had forgot to mention that in previous chapters. :( I'll update as soon as I can <333
P.S. LOL at you slipping in BEB. I've strated the chapter but I don't want it to be hurried just to finsish you know? You guys deserve a good ending to that story. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2014 03:45 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
First of all, Joe? Really?
Really? Like, the face I made the whole time. I'm so glad you couldn't see it. I'm ugly enough so yeah the face sho wasn't gorgeous. This son of a toe jam eatin, no flaxin waxin, pop eyed, professional dookie sniffin, shit bucket. He's got some damn stank ass nerve to pull that shit
I am done and over his ass. This fuckshit got my blood pressure high.
Okay, the vows made me feel better but he just needs to stop. I'm glad my babies are happy though and that's what matters
Cant wait for more babe!
Author's Response:
Your fighting words are on fleek!! Lmaoooo Joe's dusty ass has been served but let's see if he says in his lane. Pen And Michael are happy, married and looking gewt!! Now they just have to make it over the next couple of hurdles and they'll be good. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2014 04:43 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
'the fuck outta here Joseph. I'm done with you. Anyways!
OMG!! I was grinning the whole time from ear to ear reading their vows... aah!!! Too cute and Michael was crying! Awww omg. Yeah from the Michael at the beginning of this story to the person he is now he's changed a LOT! I forgot how much of a rude asshole he was in the beginning. You really know how to make your characters evolve! Just another plus about your writing! <3
Now Diana and Elderado.... I completely forgot about those operations. They better not create trouble in this beautiful paradise that is Pen and Michael!!!
Author's Response:
Michael was bawling like a newborn baby. Everyone was!! Lol they're too too cute for words. It took me a while to come up with fitting vows. Michael did evolve quite a bit. He was not feeling relationships at all after what Nye did to him. He lost faith in them but Pen opened it back up in him and now he's more like the real him. He was just into using girls and moving on but he met his match. When he loves he loves hard and Pen got him. Same for her. She wasn't very stable in her relationship with Elard when she met Michael. He shows her what it's like to REALLY be loved. Elderado backed out of the plan with Diana now she's on her own and she's going to get Triflin. Not gonna say much more. Lol. Zips lips. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2014 07:42 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
Can't wait to see how Diana reacts to this one lol
Author's Response:
She is going to be shocked as hell and it's going to be funny. She's still delusional tho and she's going to try it!!! Gurl!! Lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2014 10:27 am Title: Rude Bwoy
Hahaha. Mpenzawe, that's a curious name. How'd you come up with that?
And I love her reaction to his hands, those things are colossal OMG! If there's one thing I've ever EVER wanted to do... Hold Michael's hand. That's all, forget all else. I was even asked once if I would have sex with him given the opportunity, no... I just want to hold his hands. But enough of that craziness.
Author's Response:
Mpenzewe is a little nod to "Liberian Girl" Lol!! I like for my female characters to have African centered names or origins mostly because that's how I am I guess. I know Michael was a lover of the African tradition so I just add that into my stories. I'm a bit sentimental that way. I love Michael's hands they are so large but expressive as he uses them to 'talk' whether they're slim or a little thick. They were a thing of utter beauty and so contrary to his sometimes thin arms. I'm a visual artist so I like paying attention to the smallest details. lol. For me if I had to choose between sex with Michael and an hour long conversation I would talk his ear off for that hour. Lmao. But you know... I wouldn't count it out for another time...;) I'm sad. Lol <333
Date: Dec 27, 2014 10:16 am Title: And So We Meet...
Wow Michaels kinda of a meany...hmm I have fee)8ng
Author's Response:
He's a bit mean in that moment because of what he was dealing with on the phone but he's not like that at all. I promise!! <333
Date: Dec 26, 2014 09:21 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
Chile boo to Diana. She finna get her feelings hurt in more ways than one. Not only does Michael not want her dusty stank puss havin ass, but he's a married man now! Ha! Lawd I can't wait til people find out that he's married. He is officially a one woman man. Seethe hoes! Pen has that magic chile. Michael is sprung as hell. I'm so happy they're married!!! And I'm glad Joseph's ol bitter saggy faced, low down ass ain't ruin nothing. It's sad that Mama Kat couldn't see her baby get married, but I can understand why he made her leave too. It's a shame that she just doesn't have the strength to leave Joe's tired ass and she should've known damn well that telling him about the wedding would be a mistake. Smh. Mike will forgive her and get over it soon tho, but he needs breathing room right now. And his wife of course! Lol I love the sound of that. I just want Michael to use that same passion he used on Joseph on these scandalous ass hoes. Especially Diana. In fact, I hope after he tells that bitch off, he fires her ass. Enough is enough chile. But for now, I hope they can bask in being married and happy. Then it'll be time to kill these hoes and hatin ass niggas lol
Author's Response:
Yes Diana will try and squeeze her trife life having ass back onto the scene. Unbeknownst to Michael but he'll handle her ass good and well. I've said too much already. Lmaooooo. Mr and Mrs Jackson have arrived!!! Mama Kat I don't know. She thought maybe she was doing the right thing not knowing Joe would show up. But she should have known Joe well enough that he wouldn't just let it go. Yes let us bask in the Wedded bliss!! <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2014 06:11 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
Five words for Joseph: Skidaddle your ass own out!!!! Bruh, he makes me so sick. Like who knows what best for Michael is Michael. Like get your life old, bull dog, cheating ass, always in some body bizness, need a damn life, saggy face ass. Anyway, bae 1 and bae 2 are finally married. Yess lawd. Mr. and Mrs. Michael and Mpenzewe Jackson. Now all I need is the loving which ik is coming soon then.....maybe a lil family of two...three...five? I'm asking for too much , huh? Ik girl, ik. Well we can get to that bridge after Pen surgery. Pray she recovers well to have children but I can wait. I have patience.
Phenomenal chapter minus Joseph interruption.
Author's Response:
Yup Joe tries and fails again. He just wanted to try his hand at controlling Michael's life again but as you can see Mike was not having that at all!!! Lol As for the babies etc it's not too much to ask for but I will zip my lips to that for now. Lol. Her surgery is coming up and that too will be an interesting time. Let's bask in the newly wedded bliss for now. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2014 05:33 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
Loved it! Please update Cradle to the Grave :)
Author's Response:
Awe thank you. I will update Cradle soon as well. Did you miss the last one? I updated maybe 5 days ago. But I'm working on the next chapter now. Lol. <333
Date: Dec 26, 2014 05:31 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...
That was too cute and Joseph old self had to show up!!!! But Michael could've let his mommy stay!!
Author's Response:
Yeah despite Joe's pathetic attempt of control. They're finally man and wife. Michael was hurt his mom told Joseph of all people something he told her in confidence. So he didn't want to taint the atmosphere further with the tension of her staying there. Don't worry they'll be having an official ceremony so she'll be there for that. <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2014 08:01 pm Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...
Let me just say you are too funny! I mean for real though. I love your easy going style with the way you present Michael and may I call her Dido's character's. I'm very excited to dig into this story. And tatoos?!?! Yes Lawd!
I'd always wondered what would have happened if Michael had stopped with Thriller, thank you for this!
Author's Response:
Ahhh yayyyyy. I'm glad you took the time to give my little tale a try. I hope you like how it's going so far. Looking forward to any reviews you have for me!!! I always throught about what would have happened if he went into something else than music too. I just know he would have been BOMB at whatever it was too. And yess feel free to call her Dido. It would have made a cute first name too. Lol. Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate it a lot! ;) <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2014 10:02 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...
Elderberry!?!? I'm so freaking dead right now. Lmao!!! Anyway, yay they're getting married. I'm so happy for them both. Mr and Mrs. Jackson to be. But that goddamn joseph though. He better not cause no trouble. Hell, who am I kidding?? This fucking Joseph Jackson we talking about here. If he does, get ready for a change in the next chapter or two...maybe cause my skinny ass is gonna squeeze right on in there and beat me a bulldog looking ass nigga. Old or not!
Great chap girl.! :)
Author's Response:
You know Michael has the knack to come up with some funny ass names for Elard. LMAOO. Joseph always sliding in to fuck shit up. Yup they're tying the knot!! Lmaoooooooo I'm going to be looking out for you sliding into the story. ;))) <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2014 04:13 pm Title: My All In Matrimony...
first of all, you know thanks to this story i'm still thinkin hard on getting a tattoo? i don't know what it'd be exactly because i have so many ideas. thing is im very afraid of needles. i wanted to get something for my dad but idk yet. im seriously afraid of hating it lol so as usual you're out here influencing my whole life and i love you for it i really do
but omg they're both looking gorgeous. i'd be ready to jump in this story and get down with the both of them. i know that's too much but they're both delicious and lawd jesus they in that black and mmmmmm
praise
now onto me being pissed. i know joe ain't here about to ruin my life. time to show you how i feel and 3...2...1....
Author's Response:
Awe tattooing something of your dad should be awesome. But like you said make sure you like it!!! Removing tattoos is not easy. Lol
They both were looking gwedt on the wedding day. Forever pleased by your gifs!!!would throw you a few of my own but I on my phone. <333