[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:46 pm Title: Crossing The Line...Trying It...
Oh boy, Diana is a real piece of work. All the pics she's taken she's going to use to cause trouble. Let's hope someone gets her phone before any pics get out.
Cant wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
She is a piece of work alright!! And you can best believe she is up to no good with those pics. I'll update soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:36 pm Title: Crossing The Line...Trying It...
What in the world!?!?!! Diana has completely lost it!!! Pen is going to kill that crazy bitch when she finds out about this!
LOL though at Michael's attempt to have phone sex with his wife. He's such a freak! Can't go a day without it.
Now who's talkin' about cliffhangers!!! You had better update soon!!
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo Diana has officially lost it for real. She's so clueless too. Her ego is off the charts too. Lol
Michael attempting phone sex was hilarious. Especially since he started off with the sexting!! He's a MESS!!!!
Ill try and update soon. I won't leave you guys hanging as long as I did last chapter!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:13 pm Title: Crossing The Line...Trying It...
Ok, it's official now. I'm about to jump in this story and beat dirty skanky Diana's face ass. Like, this bitch is fucking bananas. I can't wait for Pen to show up so me and her can double team that ass. Including Mike and whoever else want to join in. This girl belong is a psychiatric place or something. Smh.
Author's Response:
Insane in the membrane is what she is. I can't even say just how much lol. She's not done just yet either more crazy to come!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2015 11:15 am Title: Indulgence...
I'm dead.
Just.
Ugh, I'm done writing. Do you know how totally engrossed I am in this. You're writing style and skills are fantastic!
Author's Response:
Aweee Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate you saying that on the real!!! I'm so glad when the people reading my story find it powerfull enough to get sucked into it. I try to paint the picture so you guys can step into the scene. Something you do very well with your story by the way. You become a part of it for the moment when you read. I'm happy my story has the same kind of draw to it. Thank you so much for all the great reviews. I laughed. I awed. I appreciate! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2015 11:12 am Title: Talking Blues...
Oh my my my... no time to write, gotta read. NEXT
Author's Response:
<333
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2015 10:59 am Title: Blame IT On The Boogie...
Bravo Michael! That was real close, he he, shoot I was at the edge of my seat with that one.
I will not lie, that part in niggas in Paris is everything. I damn near lost my mind when I first really listened to that song.
Author's Response:
Where you not shocked as hell Michael took the high road?!?!?!?! It just shows you who he is inside. He's actually a really decent guy.
That's my part!!! Michael...Jackson, Tyson Jordan game six...!!! gurl you could not tell me I was not in that party with them when that part came on lmaooooooo. I was THERE!<333
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2015 10:39 am Title: The Invite...
Haha Lord flako lol.
I love ASAP all of them.
Another very entertaining chapter with Mike's inappropriate ass rotf. Pen doesn't really make it easy for him not to be a total perv, but hey... do yo thang honey! Also, smart on his part with D.Diana
Author's Response:
I love ASAP too lmao...Ferg 8 gold chains like Shab shabba ranks. DEAD!!!
Michael is very very inappropriate but he does it in a way where you give him a pass? I don't know he's just endearing in a way.
You've come to understand the DD thrist LOL very unrequieted <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2015 08:08 am Title: The Ride...
That lip bite though!
That one song... "oh a, I just died in your arms tonight."
I could just stop right there.
I dont know how many times I need to say it. He IS DOING THE MOST. This guy's flirtatious nature is killing me and I'm not even there lol. You should see me... lebroning the whole time I'm reading the way he messes with her. Gahhhh, freakin love it.
I'm wondering if Michael and Diana ever been a thing and that's why she's so hostile. Or is she just a jealous, basic, thirsty slag?
Author's Response:
The lip bite is my utter undoing and he does it out of pure habit...well most of the time. You know he was cheeky and flirty.
I was literally LOLing when you said you where lebroning the whole time. I was picturing it. LMAO
As for DD she's just a jealous basic, thristy slag as I'm sure you will come to see. <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2015 07:51 am Title: Clean Slate...
Oh my God. Well I never! Lol.
That man is just trying to get himself caught up in some trouble with Pen huh. He is one bold guy. But damn though, Pen sure know how to control herself.
He is too much I tell ya, throwing all that sexy around, someone's liable to get hurt. Lol.
Author's Response:
LOLLLLLL He is suck a bum. Pen had to have the will of iron to deal with him. He does THE MOST all the time. And Damn all that sexy it just... touches you LOL <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2015 08:26 pm Title: Fuckin Problem
Michael is deliciously despicable. I usually don't like him being such a manwhore, but I really like his personality. He's humorous and easy to relate to.
Author's Response:
Isn't a little slore tho. LMAO. He has a great personality and you will see what made him deside to be a slore later on. <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2015 10:56 am Title: Delusional Conclusions...
Lets talk about how me and you are in sync. I'm talkin' we're right here together. This is why you're my mentor and I love everything you do. Head came on when I started this. Then that scene came up and I had to start it all over again because lawd!
"You fool, you married me instead, now mornin, noon, and night, I give you head!!"
The universe made this happen. I can't even stop smiling. My gifs still ain't working. Uuuuuugggh
But anyway, Diana, please, just leave. Find some business and invest in your own because it ain't workin here. Just don't even try it. Move on. Leave. Please go somewhere and make sense of your life. We ain't tryin to see you here. We gettin funky over here and you ain't invited me
Go over there to some other place where ain't shit goin down. Just stay there. Make mud pies, eat some pie, drank some Coke
just whatever you do, stay the fuck back
Author's Response:
Lmaooooooooo.
"You fool you married me instead, now morning, noon and night I give you head." DEAD!!!! And basically. Lmaooo.
Diana is that kid in the lunch room always staring at other people's food. But she ain't getting none of Pen's popsicles or lunch meat. Nope nary a bit!!! She'll fade once she gets served the garbage she deserves for trying to mess with people. It's coming! <333
Date: Jan 10, 2015 02:54 pm Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...
New reader and I'm enjoying what I have read so far. (Only the intro, but hey I'm easy to please, lol). Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story!! I hope it's enjoyable for you once you get into the rest of it. Thank you so much for reading!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2015 11:44 am Title: Delusional Conclusions...
Pen, you nasty , nasty lil freak. Giving some head in the office. Lawd!!!!!! But why is Diana so fucking dumb and clueless. Like, Mike don't want your skank, skunk smelling, fucking other chicks men, having ass. Like, really??? She think Mike wants her but think again hun. That's a married taken man and I know Pen is not gonna allow for that plan to take action. So I'll advise miss thot of the world Diana to sit her lil ass down somewhere before shit gets real. Messing with O.P.P. smdh!!!!
Chapter got me hyped. More soon!! :):) xoxoxo
Author's Response:
They both some nasties Huh?!? Lmao. Pen is something else she wanted to give him a treat and Dirty Diana walked in on it. Lol. She'll learn her lesson as to trying to mess with people's life. It won't be cute either. She'll be shell shocked for sure. She's way too proud of messing with Rlard huh? Nasty! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2015 09:23 pm Title: Delusional Conclusions...
Where have I been? I knowwwww right? Lol, anyway Pen so wrong but so right for what she did. I ain't gonna even lie Mike and Pen are some FREAKS! Jus saying but I love the bond between those two and lmfao at Diana, BITCH, flirt wit who? Not you *flips hair* she thought... WRONG, nigga. But Pen OWNED that bitch, showed her, her ring and all like bling bling MF. God, I love her. You named this chapter perfectly because Diana was a delusional chick! Anyway, I hate to see this end. Pen and Michael have grown on me and I love those two together. But I'm always down for anymore stories you have coming (which reminds me I have to catch up on the other) its been hectic but I'm getting around, anywhoooo... I think that's all I had to say... update soon!
Author's Response:
Hey hey hey. Lol welcome back girl.
Pen gave her ass a sneak peak as to how hurt she will feel when Michael shuts her whole shit down and Pen will be there laughing her ass off.
Yeah I hate for this to end too but I'm stretching it out a little longer. I haven't thought of another full length story yet but I will focus on Cradle To The Grave after I complete this. I might write some more short stories tho. Thinking of it. You know I'm here for all your stories! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2015 08:42 pm Title: Delusional Conclusions...
Dirty Diana!! Nah...
She needs to get a life! Michael was NOT flirting with her dumb ass... Michael better put her in her place before she gets anymore ideas into that empty head of hers.
I was laughing the whole time Pen was givin him head under the desk. I can't wait to see how he gets her back lol!
Michael and Pen are soooo cute together their chemistry is like perfect in this story. I will miss them! But I'm glad you decided to stretch it out a bit longer. I really hope they have a happy ending!!
Author's Response:
Dirty Diana will get hers don't worry lol. I pictured her standing there looking at Michael while Pen was serving him and I couldn't stop laughing at the whole scene. Lmao. Can you imagine how stupid she'll feel when she finds out he don't want her skank ass.
Im sad to end the story lol and there was too much to try and stuff in the initial 4 chapters I was going to have left so I decided to stretch it so it didn't seem rushed. <333