Date: Mar 16, 2015 08:39 pm Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...
So, I'm COMPLETELY new to mjfiction but I have to say, I've been following this story since the beginning, and I had to leave a review!! This is probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read, I love how Michael and Pen have developed from the beginning and their chemistry, they're just so perfect for each other, ugh 😍😭
I'm sitting on pens and needles waiting to see how everything will turn out in the next chapter!!' I'm really hoping everything will turn out alright and they can have the happy family that they deserve 😭
This story is amazing!!! I'm sad that its almost over!!
Author's Response:
Awe welcome!!! I'm glad you like the story. Thank you so much for the kind words. I apprentice them a lot. These two went through the gamut to be together. So they smdeserve so much. I'm so sad that it's almostnover as well. I'm going to miss these guys so much. Again thank you for your feedback. :))) <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2015 10:40 am Title: Falling Down...
Oh Im gonna tell you off, shout at you, hit you, and kick alright!!!!! I'm just playing. But damn girl, I was scared for my own life over here. Like paranoid. This chapter had got to me. Like when they announced that Pen died, I didn't know what to think. Like, this can't be real let me read this before again. Then I get to the end of the chapter and I'm like okay, maybe she isn't dead after all....I hope not. But that ending is giving me hope that it was all a dream. Don't ever do that again. Got me scared as hell. I thought I was gonna have heart attack, panic attack , one or the other hell maybe both at the same damn time. Whoo, I need me some water. Lots of it too!!!!
More soon. Can't wait :)
Author's Response:
Hit me Kick me you can never get me!!! LMAOOO Nah but for real let me give you your hugs and your blanket. Don't panic or attack your heart BB Hang in there with me!!! I'm getting you the finest of waters just for this too!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2015 06:44 am Title: Falling Down...
TUT, noooo! I'm screaming! This is a dream, A DREAM!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry B!!! Hugs and a Blanket. Get through this with me bb!!! HUGS!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2015 12:09 am Title: Falling Down...
You already know! Lol
"It's been seven hours and fifteen days…" now listen.... >.> gwooorl, you had me at a standstill! I almost threw my phone & logged out of life!! lol especially at the end with your little curve ball <.< I see what you did there, snatchin my life, shattering my heart & soul, and leaving me to drown in my tears!! but I persevered!! very well played. but really no please tell me that's pen calling him in the end ;-; lmao it's the only thing that makes sense! if not this would be me lol
omg but little bean & pen have to be okay. bc when Mike was talking to little bean and was gonna tell her stories. & just talking like she's already here DHVYSBFY
😊😩😭 my heart 😩
Author's Response:
I'm giving you 2 blankets!!! I know you might have had to read this peeking through your fingers so I'm proud of you that you got through the end. Now you have to say with me to the end... end!!! HUGSSSSS!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2015 11:03 pm Title: Falling Down...
I've had an inkling she would die since the beginning of the fic. Then she was dx'd with the brain adenoma and I was torn. She'd either die b/c it proved to be more aggressive than previously though, or the simple procedure would be deceptive. Then we found out about the pregnancy and I figured maybe she'd live and the baby would die. Now both? I hope that it turns out that you are just messing with us and this is his nightmare as he lays on the couch in her room. Prove me wrong, girl!
I'm curious as to where you are going next.
Author's Response:
I've had the ending ploted for so long almost the begining. I'm taking it you picked up on my subtle hints here and there as to what it would be. Hang in there with me though the journey is almost to the end and here is your hug and blanket. Keep warm till I come back! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2015 08:43 pm Title: Falling Down...
He's dreaming!!!!! He HAS to be!!!! And God is he going to be relieved when he wakes up! This is a short review cause damn I can't say anything else right now.
Author's Response:
Aweeeeee Come here... Hugs and a blanket. A tall glass of wine whlie we work through this. We've come a long way...what's a few more steps? HUGS!!!! <333
Date: Mar 14, 2015 08:32 pm Title: Falling Down...
Oh no you didn't! I am so hoping this is just a exhausted Michael hitting his head on the floor. And Pen is not gone! To think everything went fine ... Then this! It better be a BAD DREAM!
(This is update made me register a new name cause I couldn't remember my pw and no matter how many requests I sent I never got a response. It me Nancy aka mjj4everinourhearts!)
Author's Response:
Hey Nance! Welcome back!! <333 Like I've been doing, I'll give you a blanket and a hug. I'll throw in some hot chocolate cause it's still cold here in NYC. We're almost there hun stay with me! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2015 07:56 pm Title: Falling Down...
I'm in my bed right now and I'm flabbergasted
I am bewildered
Im hurt but I just want to give you time to clear things up before I am ready to cuss you out
it can't be this anything but this omg
Just no idk what to say right now I don't
Gawd im just ugh 😭😭😭😭😭😭
kizzy
Kizzy why!
Author's Response:
Come let Kizzy hold you like a pair of Jordans. Hold the cussin' We on our way home... take the blanket and the hug and wait for me in the car!! HUGS <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2015 07:47 pm Title: Falling Down...
Oh my gosh it was a dream Menen! It was an absolute nightmare, I can't believe you did that to us!!
Please update soon with the real operation and the love and joy that comes afterward when she survives!
Lol, thanks love. And Michael talking to his little bean was the sweetest. I hope it is a girl.
:)
Author's Response:
It's all comming to you soon BB!! I will update before the week ends!! I'm coming around ith blankets and hugs. Hold my hand through this we're almost home. HUGS!!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2015 06:37 pm Title: Falling Down...
I do! How could you do this?
You're just playing with everyone's feelings . Michael was so tired he was in a deep sleep and had a nightmare.
Author's Response:
I reach out my hand to you!!! Please have faith in all I doooooooo. Hang in their with me! HUGS!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2015 05:56 pm Title: Falling Down...
Please let it be a dream!!! It said Michael BABY!!! Please let it be Pen waking up from the hospital bed. It did say Michael was on the floor. Oh, I hope I've got this all figured out.
Author's Response:
I'm doling out hugs...hugs hugs, hugs!!!!!! Ride it out with me. No disappointments!! <333
Date: Mar 14, 2015 05:26 pm Title: Falling Down...
Pen is dead?! WHAT?!!! How can this possibly work out in the end of Pen is gone?! I can't.. I don't understand this. I'm sad, angry, all of the above.. I'm so sad Mike and Pen didn't get their happy ending with their child. I really can't. At all. This is all fucked up. Smh
Author's Response:
Noooooooooo. You're not done, I'm not done! Hang in their with me BB when I promised it will work out I meant it!!! Stick with me please. <333
Date: Mar 14, 2015 04:59 pm Title: Falling Down...
No this can't be real like what the fuck this is fucked up!!!!! No she is not dead!!!
Author's Response:
All I can do is give out hugs and ask you with all my heart to stick with me. You won't be sorry! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2015 06:42 pm Title: Closure...Well In A Way...
Awww, you got me on my toes Tut! I'm ready to know what happens next.
I've prepared myself for the worst though, so if anything bad does happen to Pen during this time then I'm already somewhat prepared. Although I PRAY she has a safe surgery and a good recovery no complications but life isn't all peachy-keen. I know that.
Ahhh, I'm ready for the next chapter now! I can't think.
And Lol, Michael and Pen are some freaks but they are married and in love and that is totally A-OK. Anyway, loved this chapter. Looking forward to the update.
Oooh also LMAO @ Michael being sprung over Pen while she was away with Cali. The boy's got it hard. He's so in love.
Author's Response:
You will be on the edge of your seat the whole time. It's all planed out and I hope it will come off like I want it too but mostly I hope it won't disappoint. Hold on to your emotions cause I will be taking them on a ride. That's too are head over heels. They make me smile all the time!! More coming soon! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2015 10:38 am Title: Closure...Well In A Way...
Kizzy, first of all I gotta start from the bottom and work my way up. Cuz the first thing on my mind was
I was like yaaaaaassss all early this morning. It didn't help that I was listening to freaky songs, Kizzy.
He called her his treasure and you know I started singing that right? It's the perfect damn song for her. I wonder if the universe loves me enough to send me a Pen or Michael? I wonder...... *looks off into the distance as Just My Imagination Plays*
He's checking up on the coffee bean though *dies* My mom said my dad was this way when she was pregnant with me. He was checking up on her all the time and being worried. Mike's gonna be so great as a daddy!
Ren? Yeah, that's real funny sir. Take yo ass somewhere.
But anyway, Kizzy, great chapter. It was cute as hell and it made me all giddy. I'm gonna miss this one for sure <3
Yes, you're Kizzy now so don't fight it.
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. I'm never going to live down the Kizzy not from you or the hubs!! We all have a Pen or Michael out there for us we just have to look for them. Sometimes they're in the craziest of places. He is Judith a goofball. He had to check on them. He's going to be one of those really involved dads. lol. So much more to come. You took this ride with me. Now it's time to go on home!! <333