Date: Apr 19, 2015 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
oooooo I can't wait for the confession!!
Author's Response:
It's coming soon.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2015 02:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Okay, I'm in. I read this whole story the other week and forgot to comment (I'm horrible.). I love it. Very creative and tons of suspense. I love the mystique of 'Michael' in this fic, and the chemistry between him and Lana is thick. On a different note, I think this might be the healthiest relationship you've depicted in a story...and that's an odd comment to say given that he saw her birth lol
I can't wait until your next update!
Author's Response:
Yay!! I'm glad you loved it.
ROFL!!! The rest of my relationships must be pretty unhealthy. Aside from witnessing her birth, she is still eighteen and though legal that's young for a 300 year old man...
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2015 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I was that Jamaican lunch. Michael is welcomed to my food cart any day!!!! Lmfaoooo. I was laughing so hard when I saw that!!
Wow Kari didn't last long at all. Is Hrayson stupid or is there more this plan because Kari getting back into the fold as a newly turned vampire was not going to work. That was idiotic of him.
Well we'll see what goes down. I'm still so thirsty for Michael and Lana to start their journey. Lol.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! You like how I snuck that in there lol!
I'll give you a hint. She's not dead. Michael didn't stake her or anything he just broke her neck. She's a vampire she'll heal. It's more like what are they going to do with her now she's newborn and untamed and since Grayson is her maker. She'll have to go to him whenever he calls.
Lana's starting to get thirsty too. Notice how she ain't havin' him drinking from no random women.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2015 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
I wonder what he's going to do to Kari, hopefully not kill her. Maybe he can convert her back to their side.
Sounds like Lana might be getting jealous of Michael feeding on other women. It's only a matter of time before she becomes his special food source.
Author's Response:
Maybe he can convert her. It'll be hard because Grayson is her maker. She's not only jealous but worried. He's supposed to be keeping a very low profile.
Date: Apr 08, 2015 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six
*gasp* oh no, all of Lana's good food got wasted!! There was hint that Kari would return so it didn't surprise me. And ooooh, Michael had better brace himself I can just hear how Lana would be after what he did to Kari..even if he did do it to stop her fro wreaking havoc...she don't care. Hope that doesn't destroy his chance of Lana becoming his mate..
Author's Response:
LOL I don't think she's worried about her food. Kari's a vampire!! Breaking a vampire's neck doesn't kill them he just dismantle her temporarily lol. We'll see how he 'cleans this mess up' Lana can't be too mad.
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2015 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Once again you've created a lovely chapter. I'm glad they've patched things up. It's only a matter of time before their relationship evolves. I'm also glad Stephan is out of the picture. Lol Even though he was the ideal perfect boyfriend, that's not who she belongs with.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks! Yes, Stefan was almost perfect but he couldn't stand by Lana when things got crazy...
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2015 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Nice! I'm on the edge of my seat now! So how often do you update? I'm asking because I occasionally suffer from story withdrawals. Lol I do understand that life gets in the way. I hope you continue soon though. This story is very exciting! In the meantime, if you ever wish to check out one of my stories, you are more than welcomed to. I hope to read another chapter from this amazing story very soon. Until next time, my dark fantasy sista! Lol 😄
Author's Response:
I usually update at LEAST once a week or try to. I should have more time now. March was a crazy month for me at work. I will definitely check out your stories sometime! Thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2015 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Nice! I'm on the edge of my seat now! So how often do you update? I'm asking because I occasionally suffer from story withdrawals. Lol I do understand that life gets in the way. I hope you continue soon though. This story is very exciting! In the meantime, if you ever wish to check out one of my stories, you are more than welcomed to. I hope to read another chapter from this amazing story very soon. Until next time, my dark fantasy sista! Lol 😄
Date: Apr 02, 2015 07:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
whoa, talk about intense..whoo!lesson learned..never push Vampire Mike away when showing he cares as this is what the stability of his mind will lead him to do. I am curious to see what would happen once he swallows his pride and tells Lana how he feels..who knows, maybe he'll turn good like Spike from Buffy the Vampire Slayer did..can't wait to see what your plans are. ^^
Author's Response:
Right, don't get on Michael's bad side! Hmm who will be the first one to reveal their feelings Lana or Michael? We'll see... Thanks as always for supporting my stories!
Date: Apr 01, 2015 11:54 pm Title: Chapter One
yay! I'm so happy that michael and lana made up. I hope they stop grayson from any other loss
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2015 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
I'm glad that Lana and Michael made up. It wasn't natural for them to try and act so cold towards each other. Now if only they spoke from their heart about how they truly feel. Things are getting more interesting. I wonder what the opposition has on the burner. Hmmmmmm!!!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Yeah, because Michael can be so cold (no pun intended) lol Someone will eventually break down and spill their guts, but who will it be? Next chapter you'll see how Grayson' Plan B: Vampire Kari gets put into action.
<3!!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2015 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Blood was on Kari's chin. I'm thinking she's not dead but going to be a vampire now.
Date: Apr 01, 2015 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Okay, now Im anxious. I'm ready for Grayson to be nothing but a pile of blood and guts already.
Date: Mar 31, 2015 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
She's going to be so furious with him.
Date: Mar 31, 2015 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Oh goodness! This can't be good! I wonder who Grayson is working for.