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Reviewer: LittleRiaRabbit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2014 06:10 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Can't wait to read what happens next! Another amazing chapter!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: LittleRiaRabbit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2014 06:02 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

I love this one too! I'm a huge True Blood fan and this story is just perfect! Looking forward to your next update! 

p.s. Who did you choose in the role of Svetlana's father? The photo is no longer viewable 



Author's Response:

Johnny Depp. and THANKS! I'm about to post a new chapter right now.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2014 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Yikes! How much longer can they all hide this secret with Svetlana? She's growing up to be such a smart girl...it'll only be a matter of time. Plus with Samantha around, she will def keep Svetlana curious about Michael. Yeaaah, Michael better keep tabs on her!



Author's Response:

I know how it is! I used to have soooo much downtime at work to write chapters on my phone at my desk. Now that its 'peak' season. I dont' get to update all my stories as much as I used to.

But yeah... his secret is not quite so safe anymore.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2014 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Wow, his feelings for her have grown so much. So much so that seeing her with that boy has caused him to kill somebody. Just his luck, huh? I'm hoping his departure isn't permanent! I mean, he cant just leave her like that, right???!

Oh and I'm so sorry for slacking on my comments! This quarter has been a whirlwind of stress and frustrations. This last year of college has been testing. Signed but anyways, please keep the chapters coming and I'll try my best to catch up! <3

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2014 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Phew so glad he didn't leave. I wonder what is in store with Sam.  New twist and I'm liking it.



Author's Response:

Sam's going to be very useful in the upcoming chatpers.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2014 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Ohhh no Michael.  Owe ma gawd.  Why is he leaving her.  Especially since Grayson is involved she need his protection now more than ever.  I understand he is in love with her but man curb that for a few more years.  After all 3 or 4 years is not that big a deal in Vampire time.  Michael pull yourself together. Lana will need you.  You can't leave her swimming with sharks.  Your love should reflect that much.  Great chapter!!! <333

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2014 08:47 am Title: Chapter Eleven

ohh goshhhh that is so....wow am out of words

Author's Response:

Yep, Michael's off his rails.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Wow RIP Martin.  I know Lana is so broken up.  It's sad that she got callous at such a young age.  Being young and jaded can't be good.  I wonder who turned Grayson.  that's an intersting happenstance.  I love how verile and forcefull Michael got with Ruby

"Let me have a taste."  *Faints

Great chapter hun!!

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Oh hell no.... he'll finish her off! Michael where are you!

Author's Response:

He's never too far ;)

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2014 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Nine

For some reason before I saw the picture I kind of pictured Pam as Martins Guard because of the southern accent you mentioned LOL.  Just a few more years Michael...That cinnimon will be all yours!!

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2014 07:26 am Title: Chapter Nine

Oh gosh oh gosh... Grayson... Vampire.... wow.... Plus I dont like the Martin bodyguard/vampire.... this is a beginning of a war!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2014 07:05 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Oh My Michael found his Cinnamon Awe suky suky naw!! Ivana is getting very dangerous.

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2014 03:08 am Title: Chapter One

Havent seen twilight? Well you should... Awesome movie ever... And please keep on... Am biting my nails in anxiety just to know what comes up next.... And like I said... Vampire action makes the story juicy... Its just a suggestion

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Eight

"My eyes involuntarily travelled down the young girl's body as she walked up the stairs and out of the pool. She was becoming a woman right before my eyes... Not just any woman, but the woman of my dreams as superficial as it sounds... Her smell, the way she made me feel like myself again... this was no coincidence... she was meant for me."

Ai yi yi... this calls for a messy situation. But what are odds right? Once she's grown into a full adult, there are only 2 people that would get in the way. Martin and Ivana. Ivana because well... she's a stage 4 clinger and Martin because that's his boss. But who knows? Michael is already perfect to have in her life. He'll protect her forever LMAO.

I can't wait to see what big news is about... I sincerely hope it's not about his health... but my gut tells me otherwise. :(

 

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Oh no! He should've known better than to send her to a newly turned vampire. I'm hoping he'll get to her before Ivana can touch her... I can only imagine how the'll explain this to Martin.

Speaking of Martin, I detest Ruby so much. Ugh I was hoping he would've just kicked her ass to the curb but I guess not. She sounds beautiful.. unfortunately the exterior doesn't match the interior.

But anyways, off to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

*spoiler* Yeah Ruby's about to cause some major problems. Get ready to detest her even more.

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