[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Four
Man, I would hate to be a woman Michael detests. I rather be a woman who smells like cinnamon and he would want to pursue romantically. I just love his protectiveness of Lana. He's probably going to have to put Grayson in his place though.
Date: Mar 30, 2015 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh wow. I guess we're going to find out more about this vampire government. I hope Ivana doesn't fall for Michael and become obsessed with him. I can tell Michael only wants the physical, nothing more from her.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Two
I love how Michael is like a second father to Lana. You can tell that he really adores her. It's like, although she's a little spoiled, you can tell that she respects and listens to him. Probably more than she does with her actual father but I'm not sure yet. But I must say, Michael's lust for Ivana is making me anxious. Oh boy lol.
Author's Response:
Michael did adore little Lana. She touched his heart in ways he forgot a person could. But like any man especially a vampire male he let's lust get the best of him
Date: Mar 29, 2015 10:31 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm very intrigued by this story. I love your imagination. Dark fantasy are my favorite stories to read so I'm definitely going to be sticking around for this one. This reminded me so much of Vampire Diaries when Michael spoke of drinking from blood bags and compelled that woman to forget that he fed on her. Lana appears to be growing into quite the young girl. Very intelligent for her age.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm a dark fantasy girl too and Vampire Diaries is my favorite TV show right now. The story is kind of just now getting to where I want to go with it, very slow developing. But I think with these types of "out of the norm" stories you almost have to go very slow or you'll lose people.
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Date: Mar 23, 2015 01:37 am Title: Chapter One
Aww poor mike lana was so rude to him when all he did was protect her
And kari turning into a vampire I wonder what grayson really needs from lana.
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon!
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 07:24 pm Title: Chapter One
Just started. Very creative! I'm digging it.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! <3
Date: Mar 22, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
uh oh things aren't looking good between Michael and Svetlana..I hope they eventually make up and Lana doesn't do anything rash like kill Michael..so sad Kari was gone but I know Michael meant well.
I sense some interesting turn of events up ahead..can't wait
say, do you see yourself writing a supernatural fic where Michael is a demon or a sorcerer/warlock? think he would be so sexy and buttkicking.
Author's Response:
Yeah I do, like the dark twist on the Maestro. He'll be like a demon/warlock fighting evil with evil type character. It probably won't be for a while though. I want to finish the ones I have out and then go back to just having one story at a time. I have 3 ideas in mind maybe I'll take a vote for them or something when the time comes.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 02:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
I knew when Grayson disappeared with Kari that he'd make her. I also knew that Grayson's maker was the same as Michael's. I'm curious what this curse is now. I felt so bad for Michael. How Lana just dismissed him I'm sure it broke him now he's thinking of backing off after being in love with her for so long. Wow. This story gets better everytime I read it.
More soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
You did call the same maker! As far as the curse, I can't say... lol Lana was cruel dismissing him like that but she thinks he was cruel to just dismiss the fact that if he showed on the scene Kari would die. Plus she has no idea the cruel things Michael does when he's off the clock. All the women he's mind warped and drank from...
Thanks girl!!
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[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2015 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Let me start off by saying Michael pulling out a gun...pure sexy. Lmao. It's just soooooo. I don't know...Yum.
Ok Grayson is such a punk. I hope Michael destroys his ass good and proper. Sam and Lana are so out of their league but I'm glad that the cloaking spell worked out. I'm sad it wasn't in time to save Kari.
Its all about to go DOWN!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
YES! It is sexy. I love a badass version of Michael...
Yeah the girls made a bold move, and Michael's not going to be happy about it. But he ultimately caused Kari's death so he's got Svetlana's wrath to face as well.
Date: Mar 07, 2015 01:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
ugh, that Grayson ..*shakes my fist* I'm gonna be so happy when he is utterly destroyed..I hope he is, eventually.
Vampire Michael is so buttkicking once he gets in action..never piss him off..
Author's Response:
Michael's much older than Grayson and way more powerful. But the one Grayson is working for... She may be a force to be reckoned with.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2015 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I'm glad she didn't get too cheesed at Michael. I'm hoping she knows it was for her own protection why he wiped her Memory from time to time.
Mph gawd Grayson nooooo. I hope some one had Michael's back. I hope dam hooked him up with something to combat vervain. This is not looking good at all.
I'm biting my nails her ruining my cute manicure over here!!! Lol
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
At this point its more like she can't afford to lose another 'family member' or all she's left with is Ruby and Veronica as the only older adults around. Michael better watch his back, he's over there casually congratulating Svetlana... He better be more worried about looking over his shoulder lol
Thanks <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2015 05:26 pm Title: Chapter One
Thank you!!!!!!! Can't wait for more!!
Date: Feb 16, 2015 02:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
yay, so happy to see an update for this fic..and I like the new banner, too..
Phew Svetlana took it better than I thought..was afraid she was gonna be so mad she wanted to stake Michael Buffy style..but then again if she did it to Grayson I wouldn't be complaining.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It shouldn't be too hard to guess who the characters in the banner are.
Svetlana was mad, but at the end of the day Michael is like family and they've already lost two major family members.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2015 12:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Ouch, nooo! Please, please, don't let anything bad happen to Lana or Michael! Make him stronger and smarter than anyone and let him save the day...and open up about his feelings, damn it!
Author's Response:
Michael isn't one to be underestimated in this story. And he's sure held on to his feelings for a loooong time.
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2015 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I'm more than certain now that Grayson's maker is the same as Michael's. But why does she want Lana? I understand she wants to break her curse but Lana is not supernatural in anyway so how does she fit? Is she gonna try 'possessing her or something? I know I know I'm getting a head of myself here. Lmao
Now that Lana realizes she's been glammerd the Fit is about to hit the Shan!!!! I know she feels betrayed.
Lol at Alex forging report cards. His little crush on Sam is so funny. I bet they end up together down the line when Alex comes of age.
My body is ready!!!
More soon <333
Author's Response:
I don't want to give too much away. But remember how Martin, Svetlana's dad had connections within a dark society in order to hire Michael. perhaps the Konstantinovs have prior business with vampires...
Thanks for being such a faithful reader!!! <3 <3