Date: Aug 12, 2014 02:08 pm Title: The Breakup And A new Couple
Wow, everything happened so fast but it was still a pretty nice story! Just a suggestion for the sequel, try not to rush all the events into a few chapters. Give the story sometime to develop. Try developing the characters a bit more because I'd love to know more about Faithlyn. But to say that this is probably your first story this is pretty good! Thanks for the shout-out and I wonder if the sequel will be based off of another 1D song?
Author's Response: I have no idea yet what I have planned but the 1st chapter is up
Date: Aug 11, 2014 11:15 pm Title: The Breakup And A new Couple
omg!! I loved it!!:) and thanks for the shoutout!!:) looking forward to the sequel!!:D
Author's Response: you are welcome! Trust me the sequel is going to be great!<3 thanks for reading the story!
Date: Aug 11, 2014 06:53 pm Title: Criss Finds Out About The Kiss
awh!! yay their getting together!!
Author's Response: soon I will update now!!!
Date: Aug 11, 2014 04:18 pm Title: The Confession
o..m..g that was so freaking interesting
Author's Response: thank you it will get better from there but I will not give any spoilers!=)
Date: Aug 11, 2014 01:50 pm Title: The Lunch Date
poor michael
i liked it
Author's Response: thank you more to come!
Date: Aug 11, 2014 01:47 pm Title: Great Advice
omg this story is good i wish it would longer though
Author's Response: thank you so much! More to come! It will get good I promise you that!!!!
Date: Aug 11, 2014 01:22 pm Title: The Lunch Date
I love that this is based off of "More Than This" by 1D! It's one of my favorite fetus songs! I believe this story might me interesting!
Author's Response: stay tuned it's gonna get good I promise