Date: Aug 19, 2016 04:46 pm Title: Chapter IX: Remember the Time
This is one of the best stories I've ever read! I hope you will continue it and we get into the Smooth Criminal part of it too!
Date: Jun 03, 2015 04:35 am Title: Chapter VIII: Love
I've missed this story so much!!! Now, what sick game is her father up to? I think I have an idea, and if I'm right, there's a special place in hell for all of them...
Author's Response:
I'm so happy to hear that!! Sorry for the long wait! Glad to hear you're already guessing, you'll find out soon enough ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2015 06:58 pm Title: Chapter VII: When It All Falls Apart
No Allie don't don't let your father think he can win you other
I am scared about the plan he got arragned
update soon!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response! Was super busy with school! Hope you enjoyed the next chap though, you'll find out about her father's plan very soon...look out for it!
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2015 06:32 am Title: Chapter VII: When It All Falls Apart
Nooooo don't break up with him just tell him the truth.
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry I wasn't able to respond to your review much earlier! Thank you so much for reviewing though! Hope you read the next chapter and that it made you happy! :D
Date: Mar 04, 2015 04:18 am Title: Chapter VII: When It All Falls Apart
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Please please please forgive me for the very late response! Thank you so much for taking time out to review my story! Don't be sad, hope the next chapters made you smile! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2015 05:20 pm Title: Chapter VI: Will You?
awwwwwwwww so cute!!
update soon
Date: Feb 04, 2015 04:44 am Title: Chapter VI: Will You?
Love it, love it, LOVE IT! This was worth the wait for sure 🙌
Date: Feb 04, 2015 12:15 am Title: Chapter VI: Will You?
:,))))) I guess warming my heart was a goal. This chapter almost gave me a toothache because it's so sweet. But I'm not complaining I love it!
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2015 05:16 pm Title: Chapter V: Bella Notte
awww that was beautiful I want my first date to be like that it was so magical every girl dream <3
When he started sing I had to put For all time on
Date: Jan 11, 2015 01:39 pm Title: Chapter V: Bella Notte
I just read all of the current chapters. I'm in love.
Date: Jan 11, 2015 07:25 am Title: Chapter V: Bella Notte
Girl it doesn't matter if you switched the lyrics it was still beautiful! Michael is always the charmer. Their date was soooo cute and sooo sweet. Loooooove is in the aiiiiiiir! The kids were bein sneaky and nosy you. I'm glad they got home safe too lmao I really liked this chapter
Date: Jan 07, 2015 07:18 pm Title: Chapter IV: The Calm Before the Storm
AWW MAN!! I wanna find out what's gunna happen next :(
Author's Response:
Aww Hold on for just a couple more days! I'll be updating the second part of their date very very soon!
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2015 06:26 pm Title: Chapter IV: The Calm Before the Storm
I love this story!!! it so different I love the attrication between all the character! i wonder if he took he to neverland, his neverland
Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind review! I love writing the chemistry between Michael and Alisa, it's so innocent and even childlike. Like when kids fall in love. I'll be updating soon! A couple days if not tomorrow! I was just waiting to see if the new chapter would receive more reviews.
Date: Nov 11, 2014 02:29 pm Title: Chapter III: The Storyteller
YEEAHA!! They're going on a date! Update as soon as u can
Date: Nov 11, 2014 01:51 pm Title: Chapter II: Michael
Love at first sight...I love when writers describe Michael and his looks in the story. It just makes him even more dreamy. And Yaaaaasss they like each other and it's so cute. Michael is such a gentleman, I love it!
Author's Response:
Lol I do too! Michael's looks are so angel-like and beautiful that you can just imagine him as if her were standing right in front of you! Glad you like, I will try and update soon!