Date: Nov 02, 2014 05:06 pm Title: Chapter II: Michael
Yes.... I'm enjoying it so far.
Good Grammer, developing nicely . Pleasant to read.
Those nosy kids! I'm wondering if they are going to "help" or "interfere" with Michaels and Alisa ' s relationship?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Lol the kids are just nosy, don't worry, they won't interfere with their relationship, only watch as it gets better ;)
Date: Oct 22, 2014 04:40 am Title: Chapter I: Bedtime Stories
Full of potential!
Date: Oct 22, 2014 04:38 am Title: Prologue
*thumbs up* short chapter but still good!
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2014 01:10 am Title: Synopsis
May I just ask what app you use for your banner?
Author's Response:
Sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I actually don't use an app, but a website called pixlr. Depending on what you want done, there's three levels of pixlr. Basic, Express and Advanced. I use Express.
Date: Sep 25, 2014 03:29 am Title: Chapter I: Bedtime Stories
That was great, cant wait for alisa to meet Michael
Author's Response:
I'm glad! You won't have to wait very long, Michael appears next chapter!
Date: Sep 24, 2014 08:55 pm Title: Chapter I: Bedtime Stories
But wait, who's Lesa?
Author's Response:
'Lisa is just a sort of nick name for Alisa.
Date: Sep 24, 2014 07:06 pm Title: Prologue
Great prologue! Can't wait to read more!
Date: Sep 14, 2014 06:34 am Title: Prologue
Nice start. I'm really looking forward to what this story will turn out to be.
Date: Sep 14, 2014 06:21 am Title: The Characters of Heaven Can Wait
Intresting characters. But you didn't tell who Katie was? I'm going to guess that she's zeack's wife? Or is she one of the children?
Author's Response:
Yes, she is one of the kids, but so is Zeke. He's the youngest with the afro. I hope this helps with the confusion...
Date: Sep 14, 2014 06:18 am Title: Synopsis
Hmmm, interesting.
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2014 01:34 am Title: Prologue
This is goooood! Can't wait to read more!
Date: Aug 31, 2014 08:21 pm Title: Prologue
looks like it will be a good story! I know it's a little daunting putting your story out for everyone to see... I still get nervous too... But it's also very wonderful to be able to tell your story... If you don't, you may always wish you had!
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2014 08:21 am Title: Synopsis
I like the sound of this! Please post the first chapter soon :D
Date: Aug 17, 2014 09:07 pm Title: Synopsis
I Can't wait to read more. It sounds so good!!!