[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2014 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 6--Remember The Time
Omg ! I don't even know what could possibly happen. Keisha is literally stuck in a Jackson Love Triangle. Just imagine the family days at never land and Taj sees that his Uncle Mike has Kiesha on his arm. Talk about awkward
Oh yea, what about Aubrey & Roxy? Are they gonna be two friends that Kiesha makes down the line?
Just reading your stories make me happy (I'm reading I Was Made To Love Her & Rocked Worlds again.) please update soon.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 6--Remember The Time
Lmao wow they meet again.
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2014 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 5--The Beginning
Geez, and Keisha still remains on his mind! Oh and honestly, Jermaine is a punk for this one. If you got a problem with someone, don't air it out to the public. It's like those ppl who are constantly posting their problems on their social networks. Pffft. Maybe that's the reason why he's alienated himself from them, too much negativity and bs.
And good lord, is this another Jackson I see? Ai yi yi. I can't wait to see how this will turn out! No really, I really can't wait. Please update soon! :P
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2014 02:50 am Title: Chapter 5--The Beginning
Oh snap ! Taj ?! As in "Michael's Nephew" - Taj? If that's the case, this story is about to get crazy!
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2014 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 5--The Beginning
aww i can relate to keishas charater cause im going thru the same thing with my dad. leaving for school when you have a sick parent is never easy. love this story cant wait to see what happens when her and michael reunite :)
Date: Jul 13, 2014 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 5--The Beginning
Uh-Oh! Please don't tell me that Michael will have to run rings around Taj! Because surely he will! Please don't turn Keisha into an Alejandra. Please! Please! Please! DON'T! lol!
Date: Jul 13, 2014 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 5--The Beginning
OH. DAMN.
I thought 'who the fuck is this 'Taj' character?? And then I thought about how much you likened his description to that of Michael's. He sounded just a bit too Jackson-y to me...
Please don't put Mikey in conflict with his favorite nephew!! :(
Can young Taj-y compete his dark and mysterious uncle?
Or am I just jumping to conclusions here?
Date: Jul 13, 2014 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 5--The Beginning
Oh shit Mike's nephew. Lmao this is going to be good.
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2014 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 4--A Kiss To Build A Dream On
"Oh, to be 17 again" HA! Now Mike has his hooks in Keisha! lol! sings.."you know I'm smooooth, I'm BAD" gone MJ! Putting a lil somethin, somethin, on that young girls mind! I am so into this story!
Author's Response:
hahahaha...we won't see Mike for awhile...at least not in relation to Ki...<3
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2014 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 4--A Kiss To Build A Dream On
NO HE DIDN'T! Daaaamnnn, he just couldn't stay away could he??!!
Leaving roses on her car, shutting down the restaurant just for him and her, HAVING DREAMS ABOUT HER, and now wanting to buy her painting (although that's most likely a ploy to get in touch with her but I'm sure she's talented!) AND THEN HE KISSES HER?
Ohhh boy, he is sprung! He just can't get enough of her. I can see how this can be a huge problem if word gets out that he's courting a 17 yr old but jeeez, the effect she has on him! lmaooo And she can't deny the lil attraction she has for him.. oh yeah it's growing on her.
Ughh I'm dying. More please!
Author's Response:
LOL let's just say that Michael has not even begun to woo her...that's all I'm going to say...
Date: Jul 08, 2014 02:34 am Title: Chapter 4--A Kiss To Build A Dream On
You know that you're KILLING ME? girl, with these update!!!!!!!!! I love it so much!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! This isn't even the real plot this is a set up for something much bigger....
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2014 12:33 am Title: Chapter 4--A Kiss To Build A Dream On
You couldn't stay away for too long, could you? LOL but I'm glad you updated, you made my night. Only you know how to appeal to my vast imagination and keep me excited. Please update soon...
Author's Response:
hahaha...I"m still taking a break. I can never just write a chapter and sit on it, y'all! LOL. I have to share it with you all right away.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 09:38 am Title: Chapter 3--A "Chance" Meeting
Michael just dont stop! I cant wait for your next update !!
Date: Jul 07, 2014 03:36 am Title: Chapter 3--A "Chance" Meeting
No pressure, But I'm DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Girl, this story is soooooooooooooo great!
Please, come back soon, girl!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2014 01:54 am Title: Chapter 3--A "Chance" Meeting
Dang Michael is going all out trying to "woo" Keisha. I can understand the skepticism and the wierd feeling she is getting from him since he is an older man. Shoot, this girl is literally jailbait but he's so intrigued by her that he just can't help himself! It's ok though, she'll be 18 in no time and by then she can't use her age as an excuse. lmao
But I have to say, despite her being so young she has certainly held her own. Definitely not timid nor easy to influence. Good for her! She's going to be a tough nut to crack.
And btw, I really don't mind you updating. In fact, I'm kind of hoping this break won't be so long because I'm anticipating the next chapter. Or I mean, you don't really need to take a break do you? LMAO I know, I'm being selfish but I can't help it! Ok, ok, I'll just TRY to be patient. haha